View Full Version : Vampire the Masquerade: Bloodlines - Brujah Playercharacters Female/Male
Slipslop
11th Dec 2009, 1:20 PM
So as i've promised to the VtMB fans i will create some of the Playercharacters and i want you to be part of the creation.
Here are the first ones, the Brujah female and male, who both have very unique facial shapes which are tough to get right.
Here the pics:
http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/1681/brujahfemalecompare.jpg
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/7880/brujahmalecompare.jpg
It's always good to have an additional set of eyes, so let me know what you think. Thanks in advance.
Simmiller
11th Dec 2009, 3:13 PM
They're Awesome!
I think the female's eyes need to be a bid darker, less turquoise, and rotate her nose up then rotate the nosetip back down so we can see her nostrils a bit more exposed. She also needs a wider bridge and more definition for the nose. Maybe hollow out her cheeks a bit if you can (less fullness), with more shape added (unless you're at max), because she has that slight indentation there just above her jaw. It looks like her skin should be a bit more yellow.
The male looks like he's had his nose broken one too many times in real(?) life! So, I'd say less definition on the nose, wider nosetip, or more nose mass, I'm not sure which right now :-(, and flatten his ears back a bit. His aren't quite so visible. And I think he should have pink skin, very pale, and dirtified (my own word- do you like it??? LOL). Can you make his top lip waaaay thicker and fix the definition so he still has that lovely v in the middle? I'd give him some pale lipstick as well, and slightly darker eyebrows.
Okay, so I don't know how I got all that out of these fabulous creations, and I'm sorry, but I think these are amazing and I know you want them PERFECTO!
Great job!
Slipslop
11th Dec 2009, 7:55 PM
Thanks for the detailed feedback, her cheeks were indeed a bit too full. Fixed the nose, adjusted lower lip fullness a bit.
And i can't make the skintone more yellow, i blame EA for not adding more skintones, so i have to use the light green/blue for vampire sims unfortunetaly.
Here an update of her, sim pics size adjusted for easy layering comparison.
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/3738/brujahfemalecompare1.jpg
Although there are 3 things i couldn't fix without killing deforming other facial features..
- Lower chin part is flat and not round, it can be fixed with the jaw definition slider, but this also messes up her cheeks.
- Upper lip shape, is it just me or is it simply not possible to create narrow lips with a round looking "V" in the middle?
- The connection brows/nosebridge, the ugly bumps can be removed by lowering the the bridge, but it kills the shape unfortunately
I would be interested in how you would approach these problems, or if they are a "big deal" in your eyes.
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