View Full Version : Doctor Who - Rory Williams
27th Apr 2012, 09:38 PM
Surprise surprise - it's me again! :D You know how it goes: Misty loves a show. Misty wants to sim a face from the show. Misty tries. Misty gets stuck. Misty comes to the lovely feedback peoples begging for help :luff:
I never thought I'd be doing this one, to be honest - the new Doc has one of those faces that are really tough to translate into the sim form. But something kept poking at my brain whenever I would watch an episode of the new series, so I had to at least try. I -think- I'm going in the right direction, so I thought my current version is ready for some feedback before I keep tweaking to no end ;)
If I manage to finish the sculpt, The Doctor will be getting his outfit as well - bowtie and everything :D
27th Apr 2012, 10:12 PM
OMG <3 Lol, Sorry but I have a depp love for Dw ^w^ Anywho, The first thing that kinda threw me off was his nose, It seems a little long Than the real Matt Smith's Nose. And the nose just seems a tad to wide.
28th Apr 2012, 04:19 AM
He is adorable! I love Doctor Who! His bottom lip needs to be wider. And maybe the lips in general need to be wider too. Excellent job so far, I love your sims!
28th Apr 2012, 08:28 AM
Wow, I don't even watch doctor who and I instantaneously knew this was him. Really REALLY excellent likeness. The only issues I can see have already been pointed out, but the long nose stuck out (ha) at me the most. Well done, seriously.
28th Apr 2012, 10:50 PM
Thank you so much for your feedback, guys! You are being extremely helpful. I think the nose is looking a bit better now...he needs a different nosemask, though. I also made some other little changes, and have decided to try and tweak his face in Milkshape. Look, he now has the cutest ears :giggler:
28th Apr 2012, 11:20 PM
His ears are quite cute >w< Lolz, But the nose seems still a tiny bit to wide and long. Just bring it down a tad for me :)
29th Apr 2012, 11:41 PM
Alrighty, I tweaked the nose some more - any better? :) I started the outfit as well, since I'm being so optimistic about the sim :P It's just an early concept, slapped it together, as you can see...I think I just wanted to see how my sim looked like with a bowtie :P
If anyone has any suggestions, please do share your thoughts :) It's a very tricky face to sim, so I need all the help I can get :report:
ETA: To those folks who click "love" on my every update: I love ya too :luff:
30th Apr 2012, 12:43 AM
That bowtie looks so COOL on him :giggler:
Could we have another side view? So we can see how long the nose is.
He is looking excellent!
30th Apr 2012, 02:28 AM
The nose is looking much better but i agree with nekonyami, we need a profile pic plz :)
30th Apr 2012, 02:13 PM
Oh, of course, one profile shot coming right up :) :
1st May 2012, 12:32 AM
The nose is much better :)
Maybe decrease the eye depth a little.
Also, I see a gap in the neck, but I'm guessing you're still working on the outfit. Which looks great so far!
1st May 2012, 07:41 AM
Yeah, I think the eye depth is not right, too. The gap is indeed because of the mesh which is still very undone, but most of the major flaws have been fixed now ;-)
Tee Hee Hee
1st May 2012, 08:47 AM
The likeness is great, the tweaks are also moving him along nicely! Good job :)
2nd May 2012, 01:29 PM
Thank you, that's very encouraging to hear :bunny:
I went to test the outfit mesh and my early version of Amy, so I thought I'd post a few pics, because I tweaked the sim some more...but mostly because it's fun :D
3rd May 2012, 12:30 AM
Amy looks so cute! And Matty - SQUEE! He looks excellent, and the outfit looks great! I have a feeling this is going to bring me back to TS2 for awhile :P
So glad you are making DW sims! Will you be making Rory and River? And possibly characters from the previous seasons?
3rd May 2012, 01:19 AM
I am totally with Nekoyami on the request...Do you think it'd be possible if you could make the ninth doctor? Or (Even though this would be so hard) Even try to make one of the moster-like things from DW? Like the Slithen or something? :)
4th May 2012, 12:42 PM
Thanks, you two! :luff: It's so nice to hear you like how these sims are turning out. I do plan on making Rory and River for sure, but we'll see about the characters from previous seasons, since I have several other sims I have to finish first :) As for the Sletheen, I think that would take a lot more meshing skill than I currently possess ;)
4th May 2012, 02:22 PM
They look great! Your Doctor Who is awesome.
7th May 2012, 12:06 AM
Thank you, Billie <3
I've worked some more on the outfit...I think it's getting there, but needs some tweaks and details to the texture. I wanted to hear if you guys perhaps have some suggestions on what else could be improved :) Sorry for not so good pics, I was a bit in a hurry and they came out a tad too dark.
Oh, and here's the comparison:
7th May 2012, 12:27 AM
The outfit is perfect! He is turning out amazing! :lovestruc
14th May 2012, 01:55 PM
The outfit is 99% done, IMO. Any suggestions for improving? I plan to start taking upload pics this week, so if there is -anything- you'd like me to change/fix/add, either concerning the sim or his clothing, now is the time to share it ;)
14th May 2012, 10:58 PM
He looks so realistic and perfect, I don't see anything that needs to be changed.
Those poses are great too!
21st May 2012, 08:30 AM
Okay, so Eleven is in the queue...I'm a bit nervous, because I'm not sure if my fellow Whovian simmers will be happy with this version...Argh. Now I'm tempted to go back and tweak him some more... I always get like this with sims of the characters I really love :/
/me has some coffee to calm down the nerves :P
21st May 2012, 09:51 AM
He's amazing, I can't wait to download him ^-^
21st May 2012, 04:33 PM
This is amazing can't wait to download it :).
22nd May 2012, 08:59 AM
Thanks, you two, for being so encouraging :) Hopefully, all will be fine.
27th May 2012, 11:33 AM
Yay, The Doctor is approved! :D I shall keep this thread open, because I'll soon need some feedback on Amy too :)
27th May 2012, 03:47 PM
Yay :D right off to download him.
23rd Jun 2012, 01:49 PM
Alrighty, so Amy is done now too :D
I was going to work on Rory and River some more, but someone suggested I do Nine and Rose, and since I've got a couple of such requests I figured I should give it a try. These are still early versions, I've started them two days ago.
All help is very welcome :)
23rd Jun 2012, 02:41 PM
They are both looking really good, I think that her eyebrows could come down a little bit. The jaw is also a bit too wide, and I'd also make her nose a tiny bit less wide too.Chin is also a bit long.
He's looking absoloutley amazing, as with all of your sims. I honestley don't see much to change, although I might make his mouth a tad wider.
24th Jun 2012, 06:17 AM
Nine looks perfect! I can't think of anything to change.
For Rose, try getting different eyebrows? Less curvier ones? And I think her eyes are more brownish.
Try making her lips wider and less dark too.
Great job so far! And since you're in Doctor Who mode, may I suggest possibly making John Simm as The Master? I would die of happiness. :giggler:
24th Jun 2012, 01:09 PM
Thanks Pyhcorax and Neko! I shall make the changes and post the update asap.
And since you're in Doctor Who mode, may I suggest possibly making John Simm as The Master? I would die of happiness. :giggler:
This made me giggle because it's true - am definitely in Doctor Who mode! :D Also, you have just expanded my projects list, so thanks a lot :p
24th Jun 2012, 09:57 PM
Alright, so here are the updates:
24th Jun 2012, 10:32 PM
Wow! Nine looks even better!
Rose is improving too! There's something off about the face shape though. I think it's the cheek bones? Or maybe the jaw is too wide. Also I think the lips need to be a little wider and the eyes less close together.
This is one of the pics I used for my TS3 Rose:
EDIT: I looked at Nine again and thought maybe his nose could use a different mask? I don't know how else to explain. He looks excellent already though!
25th Jun 2012, 08:39 AM
I've recently been watching Doctor Who and then I saw your brilliant doctor and Amy and now I saw this.
I think the doctor's face needs to be a bit longer...maybe, if the game can actually do that. Other then that I think they look excellent.
Sorry if I sound stupid. :P
EDIT: Now that I think about it, maybe darker make up for Rose's eyes?
25th Jun 2012, 04:54 PM
I actually think that the length of the doctors face is fine as it is, people often have a tendansy to make sims faces overly long.
Nine looks pretty much done to me, you gotta' love those ears!
I also agree about the nose mask, maybe one the will make his nostrils apear higher than they actualy are.
Rose's nose needs to come down and maybe widen the nose bridge. Her eyes also seem rather large, they should be less wide open.
The whole face should be moved up too, I'm judging that on the distance from the brows to hair line. So if you chose another hair then you may have to change it back.
Her lips seem too defined, unfortunatley there isn't a slider for this so you may just have to have a bit of a play a round.
I love all of your sims, especially these new doctor who ones.
27th Jun 2012, 09:33 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback, everyone!
Neko, I edited Rose and tried to make the cheekbones and the jaw more accurate, and also did some other tweaks. I haven't made Nine's nosemask yet, but I did edit his face in Milkshape so I could make the nosemask slightly more subtle :) I also need to alpha edit the hair, and make him a more accurate outfit. Will probably just recolour this Maxis one I'm using now, since it's pretty much almost there.
Sluggish, you don't sound stupid at all :) Thank you for the compliment and your feedback. I shall try different eyeshadow for Rose.
Phycorax, thanks! Glad you like my simmies :D Oh, and since you mentioned teh ears, I had to make those in MS3D, since I couldn't find a template with any remotely Nine-ish ears :) I twekaed Rose, hopefully she looks better now. I haven't decided on the hair yet, I don't think I actually found one that I really want to use for the finished version.
So here are the updates:
Any help welcome as always! :luff:
27th Jun 2012, 09:57 PM
To me he looks absoloutley perfect, I wouldn't change a thing.
I still feel alsthough her jaw is a little bit too wide, it the comparison it seems to merge more with the side of her face.
Her upper lip should be a little bit less thick.
They both look great!
28th Jun 2012, 11:51 AM
I always use this (http://www.modthesims.info/d/286327) hair for my Rose sims, but that's just a suggestion.
28th Jun 2012, 09:35 PM
Nine looks excellent! I agree with Phycorax, I think he's finished!
I like the suggestion Sluggish made for the Rose hair. It may need to be alpha edited though?
I think her lips could still be wider and more of a peach color. She is looking so much better! :)
28th Jun 2012, 10:29 PM
Thank you, Phycorax, Sluggish and Neko - you have been so encouraging and helpful with these two sims of mine :D I did some tweaks to Rose, hope she is getting there. I will change the lip color and mouth width in the next update. And so happy you think Nine is done! :D Still need to do the hair and the clothes, somehow I'm not getting around to it.
I did figure that Nouk hair would work pretty well :) I tried it before, but since Rose sim has kind of a wide face, the hair was covering a lot of the jaw. However, after Sluggish suggested it, I figured I'd give it one more try and then realized I could alpha edit it to look better on my Rose. This is just a quick alpha edit, will tweak it a bit more if you guys think I should keep the hair.
I keep changing her eye colour...I look at the pictures and my screencaps and sometimes her eyes look greenish, sometimes brown. I tried going with hazel, but that didn't look right either :faceslap:
28th Jun 2012, 11:23 PM
That eye color looks good to me. I like the hair too - but it may need to be a little shorter.
I think her face also needs to be more round. The last version you posted I think had a more accurate face shape.
29th Jun 2012, 04:34 PM
Rose looks so cute, I agree with Nekonyami that eye colour looks kinda perfect for her.
Her brows are a little bit too arched now, maybe a little bit darker too (not as dark as post #37 though).
The upper lip could also do with being reduced some more.
29th Jun 2012, 05:59 PM
She looks so realistic. :blink:
I think the eyes looks great, and I agree with Nekonyami about the face shape and Phycorax about the eyebrows other then that she looks perfect, you can defiantly tell it's Rose.
29th Jun 2012, 06:38 PM
Your Nine is perfect (even if it's not my favourite doctor), but Rose's face is a little different. Just a little bit. I couldn't explain, but she's just a little less like the real one (can you understand ? i'm french, it's a little hard to explain when you can't find your words), but she's still stunning and gorgeous !
And about Eleven and Amy, they're just... amazing !
And then, who will become a Sim ? River Song, Martha Jones, Jack Harkness (good idea) ? I can't wait.
30th Jun 2012, 11:55 PM
Thanks for the feedback, guys! Much appreciated <3 I tried to fix up Rose a bit more, she's a tricky face to sim - her jaw being the trickiest bit.
Orianeeuh - Thank you :) I do understand what you're trying to say, I know she's not quite there yet...I'll keep tweaking until you guys proclaim her done :D Next DW sims will most likely be River (if I can find a good hair) and Rory. Oh, and Donna and Martha, hopefully.
I did some tweaks to Rose, but didn't take 'proper' pictures yet. So meanwhile I shall post some pictures I did take, that I think are kind of fun :D I was goofing around instead of trying to finish Nine's outfit :P
1st Jul 2012, 12:41 AM
Love the last pictures, with the plant cow/cow plant, i don't know x)
Can't wait for the uploading. I want them !
Yes yes yes, River ! (And Rory, of course, Amy's missing him)...
So, that's cool. I think. I'm just tired, it's 2 am in France.
1st Jul 2012, 04:54 AM
Rose's chin needs to be widened I think. Her eyebrows might need to be darker too. I think she is coming along. Nine looks amazing :)
1st Jul 2012, 08:42 AM
If all goes right I'm gonna be having a Doctor incarnation/companion party in my game. :blink:
Nine looks perfect, nothing to change about him I don't think.
And I agree with the chin, just a little bit wider.
1st Jul 2012, 09:28 AM
All I can see is that Rose's eyes is a tad too big. Actually they might be a bit too close aswell, but I think this will sort itself out when you make them smaller :)
1st Jul 2012, 05:42 PM
Yeah those eyes are far too big, after you've shrunk them then her eyebrows will looks the right length. Rose's Chin needs to be more of a square shape, also as it has been stated above the chin needs to be little bit longer. They both look amazing, can't wait to see your upload.
1st Jul 2012, 11:00 PM
Thanks Orianeeuh, Neko, Malfoya, Sluggish and Phycorax! So nice to get so much feedback, without you I'd probably never see all the things I need to fix. I've darkened the brows, fiddled with the lower part of the face (am still trying to get the chin right, keeps coming out too pointy), eyes are smaller and further apart. Better or worse? Please feel free to nitpick :bunny:
BTW, Neko, I've noticed your TS3 DW simmies on your tumblr - they're awesome :D Ever thought of uploading them?
1st Jul 2012, 11:26 PM
In the last picture her jawline looks a little weird. I think it should be more \ / than ) ( if that makes any sense.
Glad you like my TS3 DW sims! I don't know if I will upload them because it's a lot of work to get them accepted and I might still need to change them up a bit, but I may in the future, ya never know.
2nd Jul 2012, 01:24 AM
Nekonyami I love your Sims 3 Sims too... I sound like a stalker don't I.
And her jawline does look strange, I think it needs to be more rounded? Is that what it's called.
2nd Jul 2012, 12:41 PM
Yes, I think Rose is better now, even with this little weird jawline. But it's almost nothing, i think...
2nd Jul 2012, 03:01 PM
I tried to fix the jaw shape - I think it's no longer wonky looking, but still not sure how accurate it is. The hair she's wearing now makes her jaw look narrower than it actually is :/ Thanks for the feedback! :) Here's the update:
Neko - yeah, it is a lot of work, but I think your sims are really recognizable...I honestly know nothing of making sims for TS3, so maybe they do need some tweaking, but they look great from what I can tell.
2nd Jul 2012, 04:00 PM
You see how much time and care you put into making your simmies, she looks great. I don't see anything to change at all, although I may make the chin a little bit more of a square shape.
2nd Jul 2012, 08:01 PM
I think she looks fine now, but that's just me.
2nd Jul 2012, 09:50 PM
Much better! Could we have a comparison pic?
2nd Jul 2012, 11:01 PM
Thanks Phycorax, Sluggish and Neko! I haven't tweaked anything since the last update, so I'll just post the same pics with comparisons :)
Hmm, I think I might need new eyebrows...
2nd Jul 2012, 11:37 PM
I still think her eyes looks proportionally too big compared to the rest of her face, and maybe her lower lip should be a bit wider based on the second picture. She's coming along great though! The guy looks great!!
3rd Jul 2012, 02:29 AM
Her nose looks a bit wide and her bottom lip seems like it should be fuller. She looks like she is definitely improving!
3rd Jul 2012, 04:03 PM
I have to agree the eyes do look a tad too large, but make sure you don't make them too small. I feel like her nose should be a little bit longer, you'll have to re-adjust her mouth after you've changed this. You're right about the brows, they should extent further away from the ends of her eyes and be thinner at the ends some more. Overall I think they both look great, she's improved so much.
4th Jul 2012, 09:41 PM
Thanks, guys, glad you think she is getting better! Okay, here's the update:
4th Jul 2012, 10:30 PM
She looks really good now! The only thing I think that could be changed would be the brows. I preferred the shape of the ones in the version before but if they were darker they'd look better.
5th Jul 2012, 05:34 PM
Yeah these brows aren't as good as the ones she was wearing before, they're pretty good. Other than that I'd say she's done.
5th Jul 2012, 05:43 PM
Yes, the first eyebrows were better, she looks a little serious/angry with the new ones...
17th Jul 2012, 02:39 PM
Thanks for all the help, guys! <3
Now, to get back to my Rory sim which I really need to finish since Amy is getting lonely :P And because I've promised, lol.
Any help is much loved and appreciated, as always!
17th Jul 2012, 05:21 PM
Eeeeehhhh, he looks great already! The nose needs to be a little bit thinner, and upturned some more. Both upper and lower lips could be thinned further. His eyes in proportion to the rest of his face look kinda huge, shrink them down. Eye colour could maybe be a little less blue and more of a green colour. Brows could be lighter aswell, I'm feeling like that are a little bit too neat and tidy Rory's brows are quite bushy. Well he's looking great, as always :D
17th Jul 2012, 10:15 PM
I agree with what Phycorax said.
Also, his lips could be wider and for the side view, his nose looks a tad long and the mouth could be more 'in'.
He looks great so far!
18th Jul 2012, 02:49 AM
I think he needs a few more wrinkles, especially on his forehead. It looks great, but his face is a bit too smooth.
20th Jul 2012, 05:24 AM
I can't find anything wrong except for what was already stated but I feel like I need to, a little bit less eyelash? I don't really know.
20th Jul 2012, 11:07 PM
Thanks, guys! I made some changes, but still haven't found the right brows and forgot to tweak the eyelashes. Here's the little update:
21st Jul 2012, 12:22 AM
His lips could be moved up higher. And maybe the nose should be longer. The ears may need to be a different shape too.
Looking good! :)
21st Jul 2012, 09:00 AM
To me the lashes look fine, infact you can hardly notice that they're actually there. Yes the ears need to stick out some more. To me that eye colour looks spot on, from the second comparison image. Upper lips is slightly too pinched, he looks wonderful !
21st Jul 2012, 07:59 PM
His nostrils need to be thinner, but I don't know if you can do that or not. I haven't used the game in awhile.
21st Aug 2012, 02:40 PM
Rory looks great! Where can I download him?
19th Sep 2012, 12:52 AM
Rory really does look great! I agree that he could use a few facial wrinkles, especially from the nasal-labial ones. I have a great set I got somewhere.....I just went to see where I got them. Guess what? They're yours!
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