LuvSims2011
30th Dec 2011, 11:33 PM
Tommy Buckles
By ******** ********* (the name will not be shown)
1. The First Day Of School
Hello. My name is Tommy Buckles. Today is the first day of school, and my mom says I am going to love it! My teacher's name is Mrs. Kane. She is a Kindergarten teacher. It's going to be fun!
I am going to do my first work-ABC's! Then, I am going to play in the classroom. Good news! I got to do that right away. And I got a new friend named Max. Max is a good classmate. He likes cars just like me. Who hoo! (Give me a break.)
2.Max
Max likes me very much. After we got to play in the classroom, it is time for a snack. Max sits right next to my desk. Now it is time to use the bathroom. Mrs. Kane shows us where the bathroom is. Me and Max both need to use the bathroom. We go right in. (Shortest chapter ever!)
3. The Bathroom
"This is a nice bathroom." I said. "Yes." Says Max. "This Bathroom is very nice." I went into the stall when the potty flushed by itself. Then I yelled "HELP ME! THIS NOT I NICE BATHROOM! THE TOILET FLUSHED BY ITSELF AHHHHHH!" (I used to be scared of those.) Just then the principal walked in the bathroom. His name is Mr. Yells. He yells, (Mr. Yells yells :lol: )"WHAT IS GOING ON?" I quickly said, "The toilet flushed by itself." Then Mr. Yells tries to fix the toilet. But the potty boomed out of sight. And wham! There was a hole in the wall. (What is this?) Now it was the Janitors job to fix the job.
4.The Toilet Fall (Falling toilets! :giggler: )
At 2pm all the people in the school peed (there is a boy in my class named Jared who pooped.) The school popped with a boom. The deer got pee in their mouths. (Imagine it, a school blowing up and 100 gallons of pee coming out of it. The deer, who were eating grass in the fields, got pee in their mouths.) It was all me and Max's thing to worry about. What are we going to do? (What did they do?)
5. Rebuilding The School
I was rebuilding the school with Max until 3:30. (It's legal to tell kids to rebuild a building???) The bus came then boomed. (So let me get this straight . . . a bus came for Tommy and Max to go home and immediately exploded. ???) Me and Max walked to my house. And then me and Max walked inside Max's house for a playdate. Max and me played all day long. Then at night we walked into my house for a sleep over. Good night and the end. (Isn't this story just so unrealistic?)
By ******** ********* (the name will not be shown)
1. The First Day Of School
Hello. My name is Tommy Buckles. Today is the first day of school, and my mom says I am going to love it! My teacher's name is Mrs. Kane. She is a Kindergarten teacher. It's going to be fun!
I am going to do my first work-ABC's! Then, I am going to play in the classroom. Good news! I got to do that right away. And I got a new friend named Max. Max is a good classmate. He likes cars just like me. Who hoo! (Give me a break.)
2.Max
Max likes me very much. After we got to play in the classroom, it is time for a snack. Max sits right next to my desk. Now it is time to use the bathroom. Mrs. Kane shows us where the bathroom is. Me and Max both need to use the bathroom. We go right in. (Shortest chapter ever!)
3. The Bathroom
"This is a nice bathroom." I said. "Yes." Says Max. "This Bathroom is very nice." I went into the stall when the potty flushed by itself. Then I yelled "HELP ME! THIS NOT I NICE BATHROOM! THE TOILET FLUSHED BY ITSELF AHHHHHH!" (I used to be scared of those.) Just then the principal walked in the bathroom. His name is Mr. Yells. He yells, (Mr. Yells yells :lol: )"WHAT IS GOING ON?" I quickly said, "The toilet flushed by itself." Then Mr. Yells tries to fix the toilet. But the potty boomed out of sight. And wham! There was a hole in the wall. (What is this?) Now it was the Janitors job to fix the job.
4.The Toilet Fall (Falling toilets! :giggler: )
At 2pm all the people in the school peed (there is a boy in my class named Jared who pooped.) The school popped with a boom. The deer got pee in their mouths. (Imagine it, a school blowing up and 100 gallons of pee coming out of it. The deer, who were eating grass in the fields, got pee in their mouths.) It was all me and Max's thing to worry about. What are we going to do? (What did they do?)
5. Rebuilding The School
I was rebuilding the school with Max until 3:30. (It's legal to tell kids to rebuild a building???) The bus came then boomed. (So let me get this straight . . . a bus came for Tommy and Max to go home and immediately exploded. ???) Me and Max walked to my house. And then me and Max walked inside Max's house for a playdate. Max and me played all day long. Then at night we walked into my house for a sleep over. Good night and the end. (Isn't this story just so unrealistic?)