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Top Secret Researcher
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#1 Old 2nd Jun 2012 at 6:58 AM Last edited by Levera : 11th Jun 2012 at 6:09 AM.
Default Finally..A Love Story
This story has homosexuality involved, and lots and lots of drama. And some swearing (Okay maybe a lot of swearing. Sorry ). Also, Johnny has issues, please do try and ignore him. Viewer Discretion Advise:



"We will always be best friends, Raven! I know it!" Angelina squealed, Raven smiled, "I'm sure we will, Angel." Raven called Angelina, Angel for short, because Raven had the biggest crush on her, and wanted to be a little more than friends. But she knew Angelina was the straightest girl in the world. Usually Raven and Angelina would hang out everyday, but one day Angelina came over in tears.

"Angel, what's wrong?" Raven asked, with a knot in her throat, "We are moving, and yeah that's all." Angel whispered, "Wait, what? I thought your parents loved being in Cali." Raven looked towards her, Angelina just sighed, "They say you're a bad influence on me, Raven. Maybe we'll meet again." Angelina hugged Raven, and whispered softly in her ear, "I'll never forget you." Angelina pulled away. Raven gulped hard as she watched Angelina leave. Raven ran to her room, and watched Angelina fade into the dusk. Raven fell to her knees, "Best...Friends..Forever my ass." She whispered softly as she ripped the necklace off, and chucked the broken chain towards the wall.

"Raven...Raven, are you okay?" Her mother asked from the door, "Yeah sure." Raven replied, her mother walked in slowly, "What's wrong, honey?" Her mother knelt beside her, "Mom...I lost my best friend today. Angel's parents say I'm a bad influence. Why?!" Raven's mother wrapped her arms around her daughter, "Sweetie, I think they know." Raven scoffed, "Yeah, that I'm a fag." Raven's mom giggled, "No, because you are you." Raven chuckled, "Thanks mom."

-------------------------------------------5 Years Later------------------

Raven now being eighteen. A Senior in high school, she had made a lot of friends, and even had her own click. The Goths. Raven was at lunch as she listened to Greg or his group called him Razor.

"I am serious! We could fucking rebel, and make this school our own! And those stupid jocks that get A's because they are doing up the teachers, or the cheerleaders that are making the teachers coo, they would get F's because they don't do shit. We would make this...One hell of an awesome school!!" Razor threw his arms up in the air, "Oh yeah, how are we doing to do that? Run around screaming, LOSERS! GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS, SHIT HEAD!" Raven smiled, "You know, when you put it that way, I guess it won't work." Razor replied simply. "You know, Raven..." He began and got on the table and let his feet rest against the seat of the bench, "We could cause hell together." Razor tried taking her hand, "Darlin' I'm not that way." Raven replied.

One of the girls in the group giggled, they called her Tinkerbell, "Razor, you're always barking up the wrong tree, and even if Raven was that way, I doubt you are her type. I think she would seriously get a sex change, just to avoid you." Razor rolled his eyes and threw his bread roll at her. Tinkerbell laughed, "So, did you guys put in applications for College, yet?" Raven nodded, "I already got accepted to one." Tinkerbell pouted, "Lucky." Raven sighed as she heard the bell ring, "Alright, losers, time for class." Tinkerbell, and Razor rolled their eyes, and walked away.

Raven was now in fifth period, her Gothic attire got her sitting alone in the back. Hell she had black eyeliner, with a spiked choker. She even had a Korn T-Shirt on, with bondage pants. Her boots had little studs on them. Raven had those amazing black locks, with red streaks through them. But what did have guys interested in her, was her stunning bright blue eyes. She loved English, she could write whatever she wanted, even if the story was absolutely dark and twisted. Raven took in a deep breath, as she heard the teacher speak softly,

"Class. Class! Eyes up front, we have a new student, she comes from North Carolina. Her name is Angelina Hollbroke." Raven's eyes widen, "Angel..." She whispered, Raven shook everything off, as she began to doodle in her notebook, "Angelina, have a seat next to Raven, please." Raven scoffed, and thought, "Yay." The teacher just shook her head, "Raven, can you please pay attention?" Raven nodded, "Sure Mrs. H." Raven simply replied. During the class hour, Angelina continued to look at Raven, as if she knew her. Angelina the perfect figure, black hair, gorgeous blue eyes. She was just an attractive girl too look at. "You know, its not polite to stare." Raven whispered, "I am sorry...I just get this weird feeling, I know you." Raven chuckled, "Well, if you lived in Cali, then not even then we would know each other." Right as Raven said that the bell rang, "See ya tomorrow, toots."

Raven walked out of the class, and met up with Razor and Tinkerbell, "Whoa whoa, where the hell is Damsel?" Tinkerbell giggled at Raven's question, "How did we come up with that name anyway?" Tinkerbell asked, "You know, honestly, it may be because she is always in distress." Raven said, before seeing Damsel, "Hey guys." Damsel smiled, "So, are we going or not?" Damsel asked, "Hell yeah! English was my last period today, early out!" Raven exclaimed, "But I gotta say, there is this new girl in my class, and damn. Just damn." Damsel rolled her eyes, "You need to get laid, darling." Razor wrapped his arm around Damsel, he finally asked her out, and of course she said yes. Then there finally member of the group was a guy named: Joseph. But they called him, Rage, he was always pissed off at something. Rage and Tinkerbell were an item since Freshman year.

Raven grabbed her smokes from her locker, "Alright, lets do this!" She exclaimed, but before she could leave, she was stopped by Angelina, "Raven, do you have a moment?" Angelina asked, "Uh...I guess." Raven then heard, "Ooooooo!" From the group, "Grow up!" Raven laughed, she walked with Angelina, "Raven...Your last name wouldn't happen to be Van Dawn, would it?" She asked, Raven looked at her shocked, "Yeah, why? And how the hell did you know that? Mrs. H, doesn't use our last names." Raven smirked, "So, it is you. Its me, Angel." Raven was shocked, "Oh my god! Angel!? How have you been?! Wait...Does your parents still think I'm a bad influence?" Angelina giggled, "No." Angel replied simply. Raven smiled, "You haven't changed a bit." Raven moved her hand to Angelina's cheek and brushed a strand of hair out of her face. Angelina blushed, but then grabbed Raven's hand, "Raven, I'm not that way." Raven nodded, "Well, yeah. I gotta go."

Raven walked away, and Angelina nodded as she did so. "Dear lord..." She whispered, "Awww, Raven's blushing!" Raven punched Razor playfully, "Like hell I am!" She chuckled, as she walked with them down to the market. "Raven, you sort of seem out of sorts." Tinkerbell sat with Raven as they waited for the guys to get back, "It's weird, ya know? I finally see her, and then I try to put moves on her." Raven scoffed, "Well, you can't hide your feelings forever." Tinkerbell whispered.

Raven, Razor, Rage, Tinkerbell and Damsel all sneaked into the Drive In, and watched the original Nightmare On Elm Street. "Oh shit, oh shit!" Damsel was now hiding into her boyfriend, Rage. "Ah, cheer up buck-a-roo!" Raven exclaimed, she had a Coke Cola in one hand, and a cigarette in the other, "Is this spot taken?" Raven didn't even look over, "Yeah, sure." Raven jumped as she saw Freddy, "Damn!" She exclaimed. Damsel laughed, "Cheer up, buck-a-roo!" Raven laughed, "You are freaking nuts!" Raven whispered, Razor tapped Raven on the shoulder, "Come on, I need a refill." Raven stood up, "Anyone else want anything?" Tinkerbell nodded, "Your coat, please." Raven smiled as she removed her leather jacket, "Rage, darlin', you seriously need to start bringing a hoodie or something." Rage smiled, "Oh, Raven my knight in shining armor!" The girl that had joined them just giggled.

Raven finally looked towards the girl, "Angel?" She asked, "Yeah, Raven?" Angelina asked, "Just sayin your name." Raven walked away, with Razor. "You know, Raven. I think she digs ya." Razor whispered, "Oh yeah, and I am the President of the United States." Razor scoffed, "I am serious." He whispered, "Well, if she does, then she'll make the first move. Damn, I gotta piss. Here, use this to pay for everything." Raven walked into the bathroom. She did her business, and left the stall after flushing the toilet. As Raven went to wash her hands, she saw Angelina standing there. Angelina looked at Raven then walked towards her. Raven looked at Angelina, "Ye..." But before she could get her words out, Angelina's lips were against Raven's. Raven slowly closed her eyes. And Angelina's arms slowly wrapped around Raven's neck. Slowly Angelina's hand moved up into Raven's black tresses. Angelina slowly pulled away, "I've wanted to do that for a long time." With those words, Angelina walked out of the bathroom. Raven was still in shock. She washed her hands and ran out of the bathroom.

The next day at school, things became awkward. Raven walked up too Angelina, "Uh...What was that last night?" Angelina acted dumbfounded, "Raven, it was a kiss. That's it, I wouldn't look to much into it. Besides, you see that guy. His name is Marcus, and him and I are together." Angelina smiled, "So cheer up, buck-a-roo." Angelina stuck her tongue out. And walked away. Raven rolled her eyes, then nodded. As she turned on her heel and walked away. Razor looked at Raven, "What's wrong?" He asked, "Nothing..." She whispered.

During Fifth period, Angelina was giggling softly as she continued to text her boyfriend. Raven was still shocked about last night. But just sighed, and pushed the thought away. Raven began to doodle in her journal. But when Mrs. Henderson came by, she looked at Raven's art, "These are really good. Did you do them yourself?" Raven nodded, "Yes, Mrs. H." Raven whispered. Then Raven began to work on her essay. As Raven walked out of the class, she felt a pop can peg her in the head, "FAG!" She heard Marcus yell, Angelina laughed as she watched Raven walk by rubbing her head. But Damsel had over heard this, "You asshole!" Marcus laughed, "Oh look the Damsel in Distress is going to stand up to me!" Raven glared, "Fuck you, Marcus." Marcus grabbed Raven, "How would you like to feel like a real woman?!" Raven grabbed his arm, and twisted, "Grow a set, then you can tell me what it's like to be a real man."

Raven walked away with Damsel, as she looked back, she saw Angelina laughing, "What's wrong, Raven?" Damsel asked, Raven shook her head, and walked towards the bathroom. Damsel walked in after, and saw Raven now crying. "Raven..." Raven immediately turned around and hugged Damsel, Raven kept her index finger away from Damsel's neck due to her armor ring. "Wh..Why? I thought Angelina changed after these years. Thought she cared, but everything is always in the dark with us." Raven cried hard in Damsel's arms. Damsel sighed, "Then she isn't a real friend, Raven." Raven finally whispered, "But I love her." Raven slowly pulled away, "Can we skip class?" Damsel smiled and nodded.

-----------------------------------Few Weeks Later--------------------

Things had only gotten worse for Raven. Her feelings for Angelina were getting more intense, and she tried to act like Angelina and Marcus's relationship didn't bother. She was no longer sitting with her friends. She was always sitting alone, and looking out the window. Razor, Rage, Damsel, and Tinkerbell were growing more and more concern, "Should we talk to Angelina? Or Raven?" Damsel asked, "I'll talk too, Angelina. And Damsel you talk too, Raven." Tinkerbell smiled. Damsel nodded, and walked to Raven, "Raven..."

Raven sighed and looked at her, "Hey girl." She whispered, "Raven, why are you sulking?" Damsel asked, "Sulking? More like thinking about how I wish Angel never came back into my life." Damsel lowered her eyes to Raven's statement, "But aren't you..." She was cut off, "Happy? Damsel, look at me, I'm one miserable piece of shit. And the girl...Forget it."

--------------------------------Meanwhile---------------------------

Like a stalker Tinkerbell followed Angelina into the bathroom, "Angelina...Can I have a word?" Tinkerbell asked, "Sure. Make it fast, Marcus is waiting for me. He calls me Angel, isn't that cute?!" Tinkerbell shrugged, "Do you even miss talking too Raven? I know she misses you. And I thought...Raven was the only one allowed to call you, Angel?" She asked, Angelina scoffed, "That fagot, is not my owner, anyone can call me Angel. And for your 411, no I do not miss that fag. And why should I?" Angelina asked, and this was time Tinkerbell actually got pissed, "Your nothing but a rich snob! Do you know that Raven at one time talked about you all the fucking time?! She asked and wondered where you went too! And if you were okay! But then she finally got a call from your damn parents saying all was okay, because Raven kept writing you and calling you. Your parents and her parents stayed in touch! You know, I always wanted to meet the girl that was Raven's best friend, but damn...I wish you never came to this school, Raven was actually doing well for herself!" Tinkerbell yelled, "Do us all a favor, and go fuck yourself!"

Tinkerbell stormed out, Angelina was shocked, she had never heard such profanity, nor did she ever think that the innocent Tinkerbell would do that. But this did get Angelina thinking. But not enough to stop flaunting Marcus in front of Raven. Tinkerbell walked towards the group and Raven, "Raven, Angelina is a bitch! You know that Marcus is calling her, Angel, right?" Raven's heart broke, "An...She told me, I would be the only one allowed to call her that." Raven whispered. Raven stood up, and walked up to Angelina, "I thought you were the same person, I was once cared for. Screw this, let me make things easy for you, Angelina." Raven began, Angelina was shocked that Raven didn't call her Angel. "I'm leaving English, and hell, I may ask my parents to leave the damn county. You have everything here." Raven stormed off, then the group did the same. As Razor walked by, he flipped Angelina off.

----------------------------------------Later That Night---------------------

Raven was now home, her mother was trying to get too Raven, "Mom, I love you, and I know you know that. But this is just one of those times, I need to be left alone." She whispered. Her mother smiled and hugged Raven, "I love you too." Raven walked away and went to her room. She grabbed the photo album with her and Angelina in the album. She looked at the pictures. Them smiling, and making goofy faces. Pictures of birthday parties. Tears now began to hit the pages. "Wh..What happened to you..." She murmured. Raven threw the album against the wall, hitting a picture of Angelina and her. Raven scoffed, and went to the picture and saw a note on the back of the picture:

"Raven, I'm so glad that you and I are friends! Because you are my best friend for life! Now, do not forget me! Please....I would be so hurt if you did. Forever your best friend, Angelina."

Raven pressed her knees up to her chest, and rested her arms over her knees. Her head went against her arms, as she began to cry hard. Her mother was near the door, she knew she couldn't help Raven this time, and she knew Raven needed to be alone. Raven passed out on the floor. When Raven awoke, she saw her mother, "Holy shit..." She whispered, "Raven!" Raven shook her head, "Sorry mom. Can I stay home today?" Raven asked, her mother nodded, "Get some rest, sweetie." Raven nodded. Raven walked to the bed, and laid down. Her eyes stayed against the window. Raven didn't want to think, dream, eat, or even drink anything. She wanted to be alone, literally.

"Raven...You have a visitor..." Her mother spoke through the door, "I thought you were going to work, mom. And whatever let them in." Raven's mom laughed, "I am. Behave you brat." Raven chuckled, Raven slowly rolled over, "What the hell do you want?" Angelina ran to her, and pulled Raven into her arms, "I am so sorry, Raven." Angelina whispered, "You have to understand, I like you a lot. But it would mess with my image." Angelina went to kiss Raven, "I am sorry...But Angelina, I can't...I just can't. I am not into image. Please go." Angelina slowly stood, "Wow." Angelina whispered, Raven shrugged, "Please go." She whispered.


--------------------------------Days That Went By---------------------

Raven hadn't been in school for at least a week. She had heard Angelina and Marcus had..Well, Angelina was now deflowered. And they were engaged. Her friends were worried. Raven was lost in a world of pain and torment. She was now cutting again. And three times in a week, Raven's mother had to take her to the hospital, because she tried to kill herself. Raven had her door removed from the hinges, so she could keep an eye on her. Raven's mother was sickly worried, that she needed to call someone to watch Raven during the day when she worked.

Her friends would visit, and Raven didn't say anything. They were now becoming sickly worried as well. Damsel was especially worried. They didn't get the pain Raven was in, because they had never felt that agony. Seeing Damsel and Razor had been together since Freshman Year as well as Rage and Tinkerbell. Well, Rage and Tinkerbell were more on and off sort of couple.

The Next day, they were talking to each other, "Hey..." Angelina spoke, "What the hell do you want? You are the reason she is suffering so damn bad." Razor spat out, Angelina lowered her eyes, "I know...I know." She whispered, Razor scoffed, "Yeah sure you know bitch." They all stood and walked away, leaving Angelina alone. "What a dipshit." Rage mustered.

---------------------------------------A Week Later------------------------

Raven had finally returned to school. People looked at her not in disgust, but in worry. Many people actually cared from Raven. Razor ran up to Raven, and picked her up and spun her around, "Holy Shit!" She screamed, "What?! We missed ya girl!" Razor smiled as he lowered her down, "Guess what?!" Tinkerbell asked, Raven's eyes widen, "What???" She asked in a creepy tone, "We got you a dark and sinister...Dun Dun Dunnnnn ring!" Raven laughed as she hugged the group, "Damn I missed you all." Raven stated, all of them hugged her back. Damsel and Razor told Raven that they were engaged, and so were Rage and Tinkerbell, Raven cried, not in sadness but in joy.

Of course during in Fifth Period, Raven had to sit by Angelina. Raven didn't look at her, didn't even say hi. When the bell rang, Raven stood and walked out. Angelina was shocked, and caught off guard. Raven walked to her locker, and saw Razor, "Uhm, hi." Razor hugged Raven in tears, "We were so scared, that you were gone. And we got some exciting news." Raven looked at Razor then saw the group, "We got in the same College as you." Raven cried once again, and hugged her friends, "Friends to the end, hey hey hey! Even if we fall, die, and cry. We will stand, hi hi hi ho!!!" They sang together. Razor scoffed, "Look up girl." Raven looked up, "No." He laughed, "Behind you." Raven turned and saw Angelina. "Can we talk?" Raven shook her head, "No." She replied and walked away with the group.

Angelina finally stopped Raven, "Please." Angelina took Raven by the arm, "If I'm not back in ten minutes, send a search party!" Raven joked. When they got to the bathroom, Angelina checked the stalls, and saw no one was there, "Raven, what the hell is your problem!?" Raven glared at Angelina for asking such a stupid my question, "My problem!? You are the stuck up bitch, and you are with Marcus. You even slept with him!" Raven stated, or more or less exclaimed, "Excuse me, but when did you become my owner?! Raven get over it! I am not that way, you and I will never be together stop being jealous!" Angelina screamed, "Forgive me! Alright! But what hurts..." Raven sighed, as tears formed in her eyes, "You promised that I would be the only one to call you, Angel. Just leave me alone. Don't call, don't write, and pretend I no longer exist." Raven walked to her, "And give me this." Raven softly brushed her lips against Angelina's as Angelina went to deepen the kiss. Raven's hand was against her collarbone, and she ripped the necklace away from her neck, and threw the necklace against the floor, and spat on the necklace, "Best friends forever, my ass."

Raven turned on her heel and walked away. This was the last time Raven and Angelina ever spoke together. Raven graduated with her friends, and so did Angelina. Raven went onto the land of fame after college. Her and her friends formed a band called: "The Alice Project" they were a hit. Angelina was still with Marcus, but no longer happy. Angelina became a doctor. Angelina sent out invitations to Raven for her wedding. But she had gotten no word back, and all Angelina could do is cry. Because she now realized that...She was in love with Raven.


------------------------------------4 Years Later---------------------------

"Yo! Raven!" Razor tried to get Raven's attention, "You got mail." Raven chuckled, "Thank ya!" She looked to one letter, that wasn't marked, as she opened the envelope she saw the invitation. "Look guys! Angelina is trying to make amends!" Raven laughed, Rage sat before her, "Raven, if you love her, still. You'll go. You'll do whatever it takes to stop that wedding, or at least finally tell her how you feel. And if she still blows you off, then it wasn't meant to be." Rage smiled, and Raven nodded. "Well, will you guys come with me?" Raven asked, they all nodded.

Raven, Rage, Razor, Tinkerbell, and Damsel flew back to Cali, seeing they moved too New York. Just in time for the wedding. Raven sighed, Damsel began to pick out the perfect tuxedo for Raven. "This makes you look sexeh!" Damsel spoke, "Oh yes!" Raven replied, "Wait actually it totally does." Raven smiled, and went to the lady, and got fitted for the tux. The tux was somewhat of a Gothic style tux. And was black and red. Raven was now ready, as well as the group, "Yay..." She mustered.

The day of the wedding. Everything was just gorgeous. From the way the Cathedral was decorated too Angelina's dress everything seemed so perfect. Much like a fairy-tale. Marcus being Angelina's knight in shining armor. Raven, Razor, Rage, Tinkerbell, and Damsel sat down in the back, and hidden withing the crowd. But in the dressing room, that perfect idea was flying out the window.

"Angelina, what's wrong?" Angelina's mother asked, "I am not sure...I just don't feel right." Angelina's mother sat in front of her daughter, "Angelina, if there is someone else, or this isn't your dream come true. This isn't...Your happiness. You need to be happy, Angelina. I think I know who has your heart. But if it isn't Marcus then you need to stop yourself from faking your happiness. I have never seen you smile when he is around. The only time I've ever seen you smile is when I asked is Raven coming...I knew she would always have your heart." Angelina's mother smiled, "Then why did we truly leave?" Angelina asked, "Your father cheated on me, and I couldn't be in that house anymore. It was never Raven. I loved Raven. She made you smile all the time." Angelina blushed. "I have to do this. Marcus is my soul mate." Angelina's mother nodded, as she only agreed to disagree.

The groom was now out near the Priest. And the brides mates and the maid of honor, as well as the groomsmen and the best man were up in front. Then everyone rose, as they saw Angelina walk down the aisle, Raven swallowed hard. As she shook her head, "I can't do this..." Raven left but as she walked outside, Angelina looked at Raven, and their eyes connected. Angelina's heart stopped for that second, her breath was gone, for that second. Raven smiled briefly, then walked out. She stood outside in the rain. And when the Priest asked if anyone objected, surely enough, Razor stood up,

"You bet your sorry ass, I object. Damn girl. Angelina, you have this amazing person standing outside, waiting for you! If you haven't got the clue by now, then damn, your hopeless." Razor took Damsel's hand, "Good luck." He sat back down. Angelina began to think, "Hang on..." Angelina walked down the aisle in a haste, she opened the doors. Marcus scoffed, "Don't worry guys, she will pick me." They waited as they listened to the next conversation.

"RAVEN!" Angelina screamed, Raven turned around slowly, she was completely soaked from head to toe. Rain drops were falling over her eyes, "What?" She asked in a cracking voice, "Why are you doing this? Why?" Angelina asked, "Why? Since I met you, Angelina...Angel. I knew I had to have you in my life, even if we were just friends. But as years passed, I knew I couldn't be just friends with you. And what broke my heart the most isn't you getting with Marcus, but breaking my heart, and calling me a fag. If you can't see it by now...Then I guess I have to spell it out." Raven looked up at Angelina, "I love you. And I have for a very long time." Angelina lowered her eyes, "I am sorry, I do not feel the same." Raven smiled, "I know. Good luck, and congratulations." Raven turned on her heel. And began to walk away.

Angelina walked back to Marcus, and tried to smile. She was having flashbacks as the Priest talked, Angelina knew, oh did she knew. When the Priest asked her, do you....Angelina simply stated, "No. I am in love with Raven." Once Razor heard those words, he cheered. Damsel began to cheer with him. And soon Tinkerbell and Rage were cheering. And oddly, Angelina's mother cheered. Angelina ran holding her dress. But when she went outside, Raven was no where in sight, "RAVEN!!! RAVEN!!!" Angelina screamed repeatedly, "Come on...We can catch her." Razor spoke. Razor got in his car, and drove as fast as he could, "DAMN BABE! I want to get there alive."

"Yes, can I get a ticket to New York?" Raven asked, the lady at the counter knew who she was, "First class or coach?" Raven shrugged, "I don't care." Raven replied. Raven was handed of course First Class tickets. Raven walked to the seat, and sat down waiting for her flight number to get called.

---------------------------Meanwhile-------------------

"DAMMIT GET OUT OF THE WAY!" Razor screamed, "Baby, if you don't slow down, we will not get there alive!" Damsel exclaimed, "I want those two together! Damn!" Razor chuckled, "I knew..." Angelina began, "Knew what?" Damsel asked, "I knew I loved Raven. I was just scared to ever admit it. I kissed her at the Drive In, I wanted to do more. And Marcus and I...We have never had sex. He has sex with other women. Because I wanted to wait." Angelina sighed, Tinkerbell giggled, "Wanted to wait for what?" Angelina smiled, "Raven." She replied. People were now honking at Razor, "Ah shuddup!" He yelled.

Once at the airport, "Hurry on girl!" Razor stated, Angelina got out of the car in her beautiful wedding dress. She ran as hard and as fast as she could. Then she saw Raven standing up, and walking to the gate, "Raven! Raven!" She screamed, but Raven didn't hear her. Angelina saw her slowly get to the gate, and handed her ticket, "RAVEN!" She screamed loudly so Raven could hear. Raven slowly turned around. "Angel?" She asked. Raven moved out of line, "What the hell do you want?" Raven asked, as she looked at Angelina. Angelina walked closer to Raven, "To tell you something." Raven looked at her Angelina, "What's that?"

Angelina took in a deep breath, then took a step towards Raven. They were literally up close and personal. Angelina didn't care who was watching. Razor, Rage, Tinkerbell, and Damsel were all there watching the scene unfold. Angelina slowly grabbed Raven's hands and placed them on her waist. Then Angelina wrapped her arms around Raven's neck. Soon enough, Angelina pressed her lips against Raven's. Raven's body tensed, but slowly relaxed. Raven slowly deepened the kiss, and Angelina's hand slowly ran into Raven's black tresses, she laced her fingers within Raven's hair. Angelina slowly pulled away, and whispered into Raven's ear, "I love you, Raven."



------Fin-------

"Queen of the Damned seeks knight in shining piercings for pleasure, pain and purring"--Scary Mary from the Urbz: Sims In The City

"A Famous Explorer once said: 'The extraordinary is in what we do, not who we are.'"--Lara Croft from Tomb Raider 2013
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#2 Old 2nd Jun 2012 at 7:00 PM Last edited by The Creeper : 2nd Jun 2012 at 7:24 PM.
Genius! You should totally continue this story, I loved it to the bits! Also, it reminded me of a girl who used to have a crush on me, and I was really harsh to her. I feel really bad now, but it won't change anything, I'm sure.

Evil doesn't worry about not being good. - The Warden, Dragon Age Origins
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#3 Old 2nd Jun 2012 at 9:02 PM
I love this story! It's really great!
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#4 Old 3rd Jun 2012 at 2:15 AM
@The Creeper: Awww. Poor girl But hey I am glad that you two are okay ^.^ And thank you, I was thinking adding more But not sure how to jump into it just yet.

@Hladgunnr: Thank you, thank you. I needed to make a love story, and make it cute ^.^

"Queen of the Damned seeks knight in shining piercings for pleasure, pain and purring"--Scary Mary from the Urbz: Sims In The City

"A Famous Explorer once said: 'The extraordinary is in what we do, not who we are.'"--Lara Croft from Tomb Raider 2013
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#5 Old 3rd Jun 2012 at 8:46 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Levera
And thank you, I was thinking adding more But not sure how to jump into it just yet.


Definitely looking forward to it!

Evil doesn't worry about not being good. - The Warden, Dragon Age Origins
Top Secret Researcher
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#6 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 4:03 AM
------------------------------------------Part 2----------------------------

Raven and Angelina had gotten married, well, married in their eyes. Raven's band "Alice Project" had made things huge. They were always on tour, Angelina joined them on some, and watched some on the television. She was so happy that her and Raven had finally announced their love, and show their affection. Raven plastered that she had found the love of her life. She was very faithful. She even gave up drinking and smoking. And with her friends as the band mates they did the same. Everything seemed to be a very happy ending. Only Raven saw this. Angelina was starting to get lonely, and she needed attention. And who did she seek, her ex flame, Marcus.

Marcus came over when Raven wasn't around, of course, Angelina and Marcus wouldn't do anything, just talk, and laugh. Angelina was surely missing, Raven. By this time the tour was coming to a close, which meant Raven was going to be home soon, and Angelina was ecstatic. Marcus, however, wasn't. He wanted to get back together with Angelina. And Angelina, well, she was starting to grow feelings for Marcus. Their flame hadn't been put out completely. In fact, Marcus was willing to take the friendship to the next level.

Alone in the house, Marcus was sitting next too Angelina, "You know, we've been hanging out a lot. And maybe we can do something else than sit here and talk." Marcus smiled, as his hand rested his hand on Angelina's leg, "Alright, I guess we can." Angelina leaned in and began to kiss Marcus. Though Angelina knew this was wrong, she knew that this also felt amazing to feel a touch that she longed for. Soon, Angelina and Marcus were in Raven and Angelina's bed, making out. Their kiss only intensified into something more. And that night, Angelina and Marcus had sex. Rough, raw sex. Angelina didn't regret anything nor did Marcus.

Early the next morning they had sex again, and then Marcus left. Raven just had landed, and was going to go home to see her wife. Razor shook his head when he saw that eager smile upon Raven's features, "You and that girl." Raven smiled, "Well, you are married as well, but, she gets to go on tour with us. Angelina can't on some." Razor nodded, as he hugged Raven, "I love ya, girl!" Everyone went and hugged Raven. Raven just smiled, and got into the limo. Four hours went by, Raven's eyes were out the window of the limo, she was just so eager. And once she got home, she hurriedly grabbed her bags, and ran inside.

Raven looked around for Angelina, and finally found her, "Baby!" She exclaimed, as she dropped her luggage, and ran to her. She immediately picked Angelina up, and spun her around. Raven slowly slid Angelina downward, to where their eyes could meet. Angelina was very happy to see Raven, but her heart was now torn. She leaned and kissed Raven hard, with raw and intense passion. Her body collapsed into Raven's arms, as their tongues made a dance of love. Soon, Raven and Angelina were in their bed, and made love. Angelina felt this pain in her heart, and she rested her head on Raven's shoulder. She wasn't sure who to choose, seeing, she had expressed her eternal love to Raven, and yet was going to marry Marcus.

Months had went by, Raven was still home, but when she went to rehearse, Marcus was over. Angelina and Marcus were having a very heated affair. One day they made a mistake, and were at a museum, where they kissed each other. And Damsel and Razor happened to see this, "Razor...Look." She whispered, "Oh my god..." Razor whispered, "We need to tell Raven." Damsel nodded in agreement. They rushed out of the museum, and headed towards Raven's house.

Once there they knocked on the door, Raven opened the door and smiled. She was preparing a romantic dinner for her and Angelina. "Can we talk?" Razor had a very serious tone, "Razor, when you talk like that, its usually very serious." Raven whispered, "Well come in." Raven invited them in. Damsel was quiet, and Razor didn't know how to tell Raven. He just fiddled with his thumbs for about twenty minutes. "Raven..." Razor began, "Angelina is seeing Marcus...She is cheating on you." Raven stood with an annoyed features on her face, "Sure, you come over, and tell me, my wife of five years is cheating on me?!" Damsel lowered her eyes, Damsel never lied, "I saw them, Raven. Razor and I watched them kiss." Raven was disgusted, "Get the hell out of my house!" She screamed, Razor and Damsel immediately left. "Dammit, I don't want her to get hurt." Razor whispered.

When Angelina came home, everything was perfect. From the meal to the bed scene where they made love, repeatedly. Raven was just so very happy with Angelina, and couldn't see her life without her. Angelina felt the same, but wanted Marcus as well. On a day when Raven had to rehearse, she kissed Angelina and left. Marcus once again came over when the coast was clear. Angelina and Marcus were getting mighty close in the bedroom, when Raven had come back, she wanted to take Angelina to a surprise lunch, but when she went to the bedroom, and opened the door, her heart dropped into her stomach.

"An...Angel..." She whispered, Angelina looked up, "I thought you were rehearsing." Angelina stated, "I thought you were faithful..." Raven whispered as tears began to take away her vision as the tears filled the rim of her eyes, "Marcus, you should leave." Angelina spoke to her lover, "Rave, I love you, I truly do. But you are gone so long, Marcus was there, and made me feel special." Raven gulped before speaking with a cracking voice, "Yeah, I can...See that." Raven's right hand went to her left ring finger, and she removed the ring, "You can have the house, the cars, everything." Raven mustered as she went to her dresser, and began to take out clothes, "Raven, baby, please lets work things out. Please." Angelina pleaded, "I am sorry, I can't be in a house that has so many memories." Raven replied. Raven put her clothes into a suitcase, and walked towards the front door, "You can tell Marcus, I'm leaving." Raven opened the door, and left. Angelina immediately fell to her knees and realized she made the biggest mistake in her life, but a not mistake that would soon to come.

--------------------------------Three Months Later---------------------------

Raven was now living with Razor and Damsel. Raven couldn't stop thinking about Angelina. Sure the band had concerts. But Raven wasn't the same, "Hey, sweetie." Damsel began, "How are you doing?" But before words could fall away from Raven's lips, she hugged Damsel, and cried into her. Damsel patted her back, and looked over to Razor, Damsel even began to have tears form in her eyes, as she felt Raven's body shake hard against her's. "Let it all out, sweetie." Damsel whispered.

"I...I...I...Jus..Just can...Can't be..believe her...." Raven whispered within her crying, Damsel only held onto Raven, she knew Raven had lost the love of her life, because Angelina couldn't keep her damn legs shut. Damsel didn't know how to help Raven out.

----------------------------------Meanwhile--------------------------------

Angelina and Marcus were now once again a couple, but Angelina couldn't stop thinking about Raven, technically, her heart still belonged to Raven. But Angelina just needed a little more, in which she needed a guy. Because apparently she never heard of a thing that can make a woman, have a package, even if the package wasn't real feeling. Marcus was concerned for Angelina, and knew only one way to make her smile again, or well forget Raven.

"You know, baby, I know a way for you to forget her." Angelina looked at Marcus, "Yeah, and what's that?" She asked, Marcus just smiled, and rubbed his thumb against her cheek, "Just a simple accident." Marcus smiled, "Lets invite her over, and have a cook out." Marcus continued to smile, Angelina smiled as well, "Alright, I wouldn't mind seeing her again, and maybe we could make amends." But what Angelina didn't know, that this would be the last time she saw Raven. Angelina called Raven, and invited her over. Angelina was now smile this big happy smile, seeing she was going to see Raven again.

Raven agreed to hang out with the couple, "Are you sure you want to do this?" Razor asked, Raven simply nodded, "I have too. I need to end this pain, once and for all. As in say goodbye. And move on." Raven smiled briefly. And got ready to hang out with her ex. "I'll be back in a couple hours." Raven hugged Razor and Damsel, not knowing this would be the last time she would hug them.

Raven left the house, and drove towards her old home. Once there, she saw Angelina and Marcus. Her smile was huge when she saw Angelina but vanished when she saw Marcus. Raven went up to the door, hugged Angelina and shook Marcus's hand, was invited in. Marcus looked around, then shut the door. Marcus sat down on the Lazy-Boy. Were as Raven and Angelina sat down on the love seat, "So have you two been?" Raven asked, Marcus smiled, "Very good, thank you." Marcus stated, Raven nodded. She was pretty quiet during dinner, and listening to them talk. Raven stood, "Well, I need to go. I promised Razor and Damsel I would be home in two hours, and now its been four." As Raven turned, a loud boom echoed through the house, and Raven fell to the floor, making a loud thudding sound. Angelina watched Raven fall to the floor, "Marcus...What have you done?" She asked, Angelina rushed to Raven, and held her in her arms, "Raven...Raven..." Angelina shook her.

Marcus bent down and grabbed her wrist, "Come on! Lets go!" He yelled, he picked Angelina up, and dropped the gun near Raven's body. Marcus and Angelina ran to the car, and drove off, leaving the front door wide open.

---------------------------------Meanwhile----------------------------

"I'm worried, Razor, she isn't home yet. She said two hours." Damsel was now pacing, "Call her." Razor nodded, and called her, and heard the answer machine, "Hey, you've reached Raven! Sorry I can't come to phone, I'm either rehearsing, in a middle of a concert, or alone with my wife. Leave a message!" Razor was now getting sick to his stomach, "Come on." Razor and Damsel ran to the car, and got in, they drove as fast as they could, rushing to Raven's old house. And when they got there, they noticed the front door was wide open. Razor and Damsel ran from the car and into the house. Damsel fell to her knees, and reached out, "No..." She whispered, Razor stopped as he saw his best friend since First Grade dead on the floor.

Razor ran to her, and picked her up, "Raven...Raven, please wake up. You gotta wake up girl. Please don't leave us. Please..." Razor began to shake Raven, trying to wake her up, begging her to wake up. "Please girl...Please, Raven! PLEASE!" He was now crying, his tears was rolling from his face down Raven's. By this time, Damsel had called 911. They were now there: Cops, EMTs, and even the Fire Crew. People were now out of their houses watching everything happen. Everyone who was on Raven's block, loved her, and now feared the worse. Damsel was now holding Raven, and Razor began to hit the wall, "Raven..Sweetie. Please...Please wake up." Damsel's forehead was against Raven's. Her best friend since the third grade. Damsel's hand and legs were soaked in Raven's blood.

The EMTs, slowly pulled Damsel away, everything seemed so slow, since Damsel and Razor got there, "RAVEN!!!" Damsel screamed, Razor held his wife, and they cried together. They watched the EMTs put Raven in a body bag, and hold her off to the ambulance. Her neighbors now even broke down crying, knowing that their friend was now dead. They always considered Raven like family, and now she was gone. Razor slowly took his cell phone out of his pocket, and called Raven's mother. He could barely speak,

"Mrs. Van Dawn..." Razor began, "Yes, Greg...What is it? Is everything okay?" Raven's mother asked, "No...Raven...Raven..." Razor began to cry only harder, "Raven is gone. She is dead." Raven's mother broke down and cried hard, Razor could only whisper the words, "I'm sorry." Damsel took the time to call Rage and Tinkerbell, and the began to cry. And soon enough this story hit the news.

------------------------------------News Cast----------------------------------

"The world was taken by surprise, as the lead singer from The Alice Project was shot and killed, here at her own home. Were the gunmen left the gun, and fled the scene. Raven Van Dawn was only 27, and in a week The Alice Project was set on their European Tour, unfortunately, the loss of Raven will impact a lot of people's live. Adored by her fans, and loved by her family and friends. Raven will be surely missed. There is no leads on who shot her. And no one knows why this loving person was murdered. She was not only an inspiration to a lot people, but a friend to us all. She only cared for the well being of others, even if they took this all for granted." The Reporter took a moment.

"Raven being the only singer to actually win several awards not for singing but her song writing. She wrote from the heart, and in the end, she was murdered. More of this story at ten." The reporter looked towards the house, and even she began to cry.

---------------------------------Meanwhile------------------------------------

"I can't believe you, Marcus! You killed Raven! I thought you were going to fucking scare her, and yet, instead you shot her!" Angelina screamed, "Ah, come on baby, we can finally be alone, and actually be ourselves." Angelina sighed, as tears rolled down her cheeks, "I just wanted to scare her, not kill her." Marcus rolled his eyes, and slapped Angelina, "Shut the hell up! You knew you wanted this. From the moment we got back together. From the moment we had sex. I knew you would come running back. So deal with it, and let us move on." Marcus grinned, "Besides, we can live our lives in Mexico or something." Angelina nodded and tried to smile.

Angelina was thinking about her friend, lover, and ex wife. A woman she knew since they were in grade school together. Her hand rested against the necklace, that they both shared. The necklace was half of a heart. Angelina had one piece, and Raven had the other. And now the necklace would never be complete, seeing Raven was now gone. Angelina tried to stop thinking of what she had seen, but she couldn't.

------------------------------------Back To The Scene-------------------------

Razor couldn't believe that all these years, Raven would be dead. He couldn't believe that his best friend was now gone forever. "Razor..." Damsel had trails down her cheeks from where the tears ran down, "Razor..." She repeated, "I can't believe she is gone. I feel a sickness in my gut. I feel like...I know who did this, but don't want to accept it." He mustered. He watched the police officers go inside, and began to look around, "In her own house. A house that she gave to, THAT FILTHY SLUT!" Razor screamed, he heard a voice, "She didn't deserve this. Raven was the sweetest person you would ever meet, and yet some cold blooded bastard took her life, for what? A house? A girl? Raven...May she rest in peace." Razor nodded to his words.

"Why her? Why Raven? Why couldn't it be that damn slut, Angelina?" Razor asked, "Don't think like that, Razor! Don't." Razor nodded, and hugged his wife. He knew the next few months, hell, even years will be hard as hell to get through. And he knew the hardest step was going to be saying goodbye.

----------------------------------------The Funeral (Yes this is televised)---------------------------------

Razor, Damsel, Rage, and Tinkerbell all stood over Raven's grave. The snow had been falling, and their breath hit the air. All of them stood next to Raven's mother. Raven's mother was a wreck her only child was now dead. And they couldn't believe that she was gone. Everyone's make-up was now running, as they listened to the Priest:

"Dearly beloved we are gathered here to mourn the death of Raven Van Dawn. A lovely woman, who had the biggest heart. She was a daughter of a mother that loved her. And she was dearly loved friend. A band mate, and a sister to a lot of people. She smiled when there was nothing to smile about. She was one of those wonderful people that cared for others, when they didn't care about anything or even her. Her death was a cruel fate, and she didn't deserve this. But she is no longer suffering. She lived a life that a lot of us would wish for. And she lived that life with proud. With a family to support her. No longer fans, or friends, but family. She stood in front of everyone and sang, and even gave people hope. Raven will be missed greatly. And may she rest in peace."

Razor began to speak, "I knew Raven since the first grade. I was an outcast, and yet she welcomed me in. She was like a bright light, that never had a dimming switch. She held onto so many things. Gave everyone this light, that even when trying to shut it off, you couldn't. She made me laugh, so hard I was crying. She showed me love and affection, when my parents didn't have the time. But the one thing I will always remember for, is her smile. She always lit up the room with her smile. And her heart." Razor couldn't finish talking because he broke down crying. Damsel then began to speak,

"I loved Raven. I loved her for her heart. Her smile, and her sexy eyes. Her personality was so over met. With one word, you just felt like the world had stopped. She knew how to make you smile, and laugh. Even if she was crying on the inside. She did what was best to make people happy." Tinkerbell now began to talk, "Raven, I know you can hear us. And I just want to say thing, I love you. I miss you. But there is one thing I can't say. And that is goodbye. I don't know why, but I can't think of you as being gone...I..It" Tinkerbell leaned into Rage, and cried into him, Rage couldn't even speak he was crying so hard. Raven's mother finally spoke,

"I raised Raven alone. The more she grew, I knew she was going to be a handful. But every time, I looked at her she was getting more and more gorgeous as the days passed. Raven was so amazing, she could write these poems, that even I couldn't write. She could draw these amazing pictures, and I can only draw stick figures. But there was something Raven had, a lot of us don't. She had a heart of gold. She loved people, even if they didn't love her back. She was strong, and still is." Raven's mother began to cry hard, "Raven...Mommy loves you." She rested her hand against Raven's closed casket, and then placed the first rose against on the top.

People who were watching this were bawling, as they watched Raven's friends and family weep. Even people Raven didn't know was there. All of her old class mates were there, even her teachers. All of her friends, and all of her family was there. As Razor placed his rose, "I love ya girl." He whispered. Tinkerbell was next, "I can't say goodbye. I love you, Raven." Rage was too follow, "Dammit! WHY?! WHY HER?!" Rage fell to his knees, "Why..." Tinkerbell and Razor helped her up, and he rested his rose against her casket. Damsel was the last one, she rested her rose, and kissed the casket, "Love ya." The group began to hum their song,

"Friends to the end, hey hey hey! Even if we fall, die, and cry. We will stand, hi hi hi ho!!! Friends oh friends oh friends to the end! HEY!" Razor, Damsel, Tinkerbell, and Rage walked with Raven's mother, as they left the cemetery.


--------------------------Fin of Part 2-------------------------

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#7 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 12:46 PM
Oh, my, I didn't expect that. Even so, awesome story, and, to be frank, I feel like killing Marcus and Angelina both myself now.

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#8 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 3:14 PM Last edited by Hladgunnr : 4th Jun 2012 at 4:29 PM.
Didn't see that coming... but it makes the story a lot more interesting. Please tell me that Marcus and Angelina get run over by a steamroller...
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#9 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 5:58 PM
LMAO xD Ah man. Yes do not worry there is a part three coming I had to make a little twist in the story. And do not worry, when writing the story, I wanted to kill them both. Grrr. But yes, there is more to come :D

And we will see what happens to Marcus and Angelina. I personally love Raven.

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#10 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 6:37 PM
^Part 3? Woo! Another thing I didn't expect. You're apparently full of surprises, Levera. :D

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#11 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 7:08 PM
As always ^.^ Well, there needs to be a part 3. We can't just have Marcus and Angelina run into the sunset. Those assholes. When I wrote part 3, oh I cried when Razor and Damsel found her body. Did I cry

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#12 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 8:03 PM
^I know the feeling. When I write stuff, I get so deeply involved that I forget about everything around me and hate or love my characters. It's awesome.

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#13 Old 4th Jun 2012 at 8:48 PM
Oh, I know. I mean...When Angelina did that too Raven. I wanted to reach through my laptop and slap her. And then I realized, I can't. And I hate Marcus with a flying passion. Because he is a cruel heartless jerk wad. -.-" But yeah, there is more to come. Oh, I can't wait.

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#14 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 12:56 AM
Yeah I really hoped that you would make a part three. *Prays that Marcus and Angelina get run over by a steamroller*
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#15 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 8:31 AM
o.O You and the steamroller, Hladgunnr. You'll see in the next episode of:

"Oh my gosh this is like ten times better than days of our lives"

Or for short

OMGTILTTBTDAOOL

>.>

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#16 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 3:37 PM
YAY! I only got obsessed with steamrollers cuz I had a dream where I ran over Justin Bieber and The Twilight Trio. It was the best dream of my life. *Prays that Marcus and Angelina get run over by a steamroller more than once*
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#17 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 4:14 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Hladgunnr
I ran over Justin Bieber and The Twilight Trio.


I think I just found my idol. :D

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#18 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 4:36 PM
Quote: Originally posted by The Creeper
I think I just found my idol. :D
LOL! Thanks. In fact LOTS of people say that. *Keeps praying for Marcus and Angelina get run over by a steamroller some more*
Yeah I'm obsessed with steamrollers.
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#19 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 5:47 PM
@Hladgunnr: LMAO xD Wooow. Your a hoot. But I guess we will have to see if the steamroller runs them over o.O

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#20 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 6:02 PM
^Marcus deserves to be run over twice, in my opinion. And then be fed to Cthulhu. I really, REALLY hate that guy, I can't help it.

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#21 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 6:07 PM
Quote: Originally posted by The Creeper
^Marcus deserves to be run over twice, in my opinion. And then be fed to Cthulhu. I really, REALLY hate that guy, I can't help it.
Yeah I agree. C'mon you damn steamroller! Run them over! *keeps praying*
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#22 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 6:11 PM
LMAO xD Oh my gosh. And do not worry, I hate Marcus as well. I mean Raven and Angelina could have had a perfect life together. And yet she went with it, and watched her lover, and her best friend die. I mean Razor wants to kill him, so does Rage, Tinkerbell and Damsel. And along with Raven's parents. But believe me, the steamroller idea, I like it :P

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#23 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 6:44 PM
^Also, can you bring Raven back to life? Turn her into some kind of Jesus, or something, I don't know.

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#24 Old 5th Jun 2012 at 11:34 PM
OOH GOOD IDEA! Just remember the steamroller. CM'OM STEAMROLLER!!! KILL MARCUS ALREADY!!!! *Keeps on praying*
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#25 Old 6th Jun 2012 at 6:09 AM
----------------------------------------------Part 3--------------------------------------------------

Marcus and Angelina were nearly to Texas. Marcus was so excited to start a new life or well, chapter with Angelina. Angelina, however, realized that she had made the biggest mistake of her life, not only did she watch the love of her life die right before her eyes, but she let all of that go with getting back with Marcus. A guy that she had thought was sane, but she now realized that she was completely and utterly wrong. Angelina was thinking hardcore, and didn't want to believe that Raven was dead. Tears started to swallow her eyes, letting her vision become blurry. Marcus scoffed, "What the hell are you crying for? You have me, remember? A guy that loves you, and wants to please you." Angelina shook her head, "But the difference is, Raven LOVED me, and wanted me to be me. Not change who I am, like you freaking do!" She exclaimed, Marcus pulled the car over, and punched Angelina hard, Angelina immediately grabbed her face where she was hit, "Shut up, you dumb bitch! You had your chance to save her!" Marcus leaned in and kissed Angelina, but Angelina pushed him back.

"Yeah, well, I never thought you were going to fucking shoot her and kill her." Angelina was now tears, "I loved her, I still love her." Marcus laughed, "Should have thought about that before you and I had sex." Angelina turned in disgust, and looked out the window, "Why are we going to Texas, anyway?" She asked, "There is just one more loose end to take care of. Then you and I can really start our lives together." Marcus stated, Angelina was surely regretting everything now.

----------------------------------------------Meanwhile---------------------------------------

The Sheriff decided he needed to address the issue, "Sheriff, Sheriff!" Reporters were calling out, he pointed to one person,

'Yes, Barabara from Channel 5 news, is there any leads in the case of Raven's death?" She asked, everyone then went silent, "No, there are no leads as of yet, we are currently wiping the gun for any fingerprints that may be on the murder weapon." He then pointed to another reporter, "Johnathen from Midnight Enquire, will these monsters be found and brought to justice?" He asked, the Sheriff nodded, "Once we find the people or person who did this tasteless crime, they or that person will be brought to justice." One of the reporters looked confused, and immediately rose her hand, "Yes, you there." She smirked, "Jennifer from the San Diego Tribune, you stated people or they. Are you believing that there are more than one person?" The Sheriff went silent and sighed, "Yes, we believe there is more than one person. But that is all I can say at this time. Thank you." The Sheriff left the stand and went inside.

He walked over to the morgue, and saw the guy at work, "This is one strange case." He whispered, "Why?" The Sheriff asked, "Well, there isn't one bullet wound, but two. As if one was to not kill her, and one got pissed and ended her life." The Sheriff walked over, "Two?" The male pointed out the bullet wounds, "One looks unsteady, the other looks like they knew exactly what they were doing. And thats not the worse." The male sighed, "She was raped before getting shot." The Sheriff shook his head, "Have we gotten any DNA from whom raper her?" The Sheriff asked, the guy smiled, "Oh yes, we do. In fact we also got three fingerprints off the gun." The Sheriff was shocked, "Three?!" The male nodded, "The three belong to: Raven Van Dawn, Marcus Halliwell, and Angelina Hollbrok. In my conclusion, Angelina shot her, Marcus then shot her. But during that time, Raven went to defend herself." The Sheriff nodded, and called the California state.

"We need a PV on a Marcus Halliwell and Angelina Hollbrok. Immediately. They are the top suspects of the murder of Raven Van Dawn." The Sheriff stated in a very stern and cold tone.

-------------------------------------------------Meanwhile------------------------------------------

Marcus and Angelina were at Marcus's house, "Why are we here? Who lives here?" Angelina asked, "I do." He responded, "I thought you lived in Cali." Marcus chuckled, "I lied." Angelina was passed regretting everything. Marcus and Angelina entered the home, and looked around. Angelina began to see pictures of Marcus with another woman, "Marcus, who is this?" She asked, "My wife. Well, soon to be dead wife." Angelina was shocked, "You told me you were single!" Marcus chuckled again, "I lied." He replied. He handed Angelina a gun, "You can shoot her, seeing I shot Raven." Angelina gulped, as she sat down waiting for Marcus's wife to return. During this time, a Texas man called the California stat police, and gave them information on Marcus Halliwell. Immediately Texas dispatched someone to Marcus's wife's work.

"Mrs. Halliwell?" The officer stood next to her, "Yes, I am she." The officer sighed, "We have some information about your husband." He took her into an office, and spilled everything, "THAT PRICK!" She screamed, "Go get that bastard." She snarled. By this time, cops were already at Marcus's house. A female posed as his wife, and walked in, "Darling, I am home." Marcus smiled, "Well, go get her." Angelina stood, with tears staining her face. Soon enough a gun was next to Angelina's head, "Angelina Hollbrok, you are under arrest for the murder of Raven Van Dawn." Another cop got Marcus. Marcus was pissed as listened to the officer state what he needed too, and they hauled them off to California. When they got back, they were under tough interigation.
The Sheriff took on Marcus, and his deputy took on Angelina.

----------------------------------------------------Marcus------------------------------------------------

"Marcus, Marcus. Your in a lot of trouble, son. I just don't get why you shot, Raven. What was the reasoning in killing an innocent woman?" The Sheriff asked, "I didn't kill nobody! I wasn't even there when she was killed, I was at the movie theater with my wife." Marcus replied, "Well, son, your wife claims you hadn't been home for a week. Don't lie to me, Marcus. Why did you shoot, Raven?" He asked again, "I didn't! I told you already I was at the movie theater!" Marcus once again stated, "Well, son, if thats the truth, you weren't with your wife, were you? Marcus, don't waste my damn time!" The Sheriff slammed his hands against the table, "Just do the damn favor of shutting the hell up, and telling the truth! You, oh you, were there when Raven was shot and killed. Was it you who killed Raven or was it Angelina? One of you had to pull the trigger that killed Raven. Both of your prints were on the gun."

"I want my lawyer." Marcus stated, "Well, thats fine." The Sheriff nodded, and an officer came in, and took him to his cell, "This going to be one hell of a long time. We need to get one of them to crack."

-----------------------------------------------------Angelina-----------------------------------------------

"Angelina, do you know what you have done?" The Deputy asked, "No. Because I didn't do anything." Angelina whispered, the female deputy sighed, "Angelina, Marcus has already pinned the finger on you, that you are the one that pulled the fatal trigger, and killed your ex lover, Raven." Angelina looked up at her shocked, "That's bullshit, Marcus would never do that!" The female smiled, "But he did. He took the deal. Unless you tell us otherwise, besides both of your fingerprints were on the gun. The same gun that killed Raven. The same gun that showed no mercy and took an innocent life. You still can make a deal, but you only have a twenty-four hour window." Angelina lowered her eyes, "I want my lawyer." The deputy shook her head, and let the officer take her away.
The next day, Angelina broke down, and wanted to talk. "I want to make a deal." The Deputy smiled, but knew that Angelina's window was already closed. "It was Marcus that pulled the trigger and killed Raven. I only shot her in the shoulder to scare her away. And she fought back, so Marcus shot her. I didn't mean for this to happen. I didn't mean for any of this to happen. I loved Raven! I LOVED HER!" The Deputy laughed, "Yeah, enough to kill her. But sweetheart, you lost your chance for the deal. Take her away."

----------------------------------The Trial (Months Later)-------------------------------------------

The court room was packed, and camera crews standing there. The Prosecuter looked over too Angelina and Marcus. When the judge walked in, everyone rose. The Judge looked towards the defendants. "How do you plead?" He asked, the lawyer stood, "They please not guilty." The Judge nodded, "Then let us begin, Prosecutions your open arguement."

"Ladies and gentlemen of the jury. We are here to prove that those two cold hearted..." He pointed to Angelina and Marcus, "Bastards killed Raven Van Dawn, in cold blood. They shot her, then ran off, for her friends to come and find her. When they found her, they were just too late, there was no chance of bringing her back. She died in a place she called home, with Angelina. With memories of happiness, but now betrayel. They took the gun, and shot her, without asking themselves why. I do not know what Raven's last words were. But mine would be the simple question. Why. Why did they do this to an innocent woman. Why did they just gun down a person that didn't do anything to them. They are going to argue that she was abusive, but anyone who was close with Raven, would beg to differ." The attorney sat down, and the defense lawyer stood.
"Ladies and gentlemen of the jury, I will prove that my clients shot Raven in self defense. And Angelina was scared of Raven because she was getting abused by Raven. When Raven was home, she was getting beat by Raven. And blamed Angelina for the most dumbest things. So, I'll prove that my clients are innocent of this hideous crime." He walked back to the table and sat down. "Prosecution, your first witness." The lawyer nodded, "The Prosecution calls, Greg Larson to the stand."

Greg, aka, Razor walked up to the stand, "Do you swear to tell truth, the whole truth, nothing but the truth, so help you god?" Razor nodded, "I do." He sat down in the seat, "Now, Greg, well, Razor. You said you were at home when Raven was shot, is this correct?" He asked, "Yes sir." The male nodded, "Why did you go to Raven's house?" Razor gulped trying to hold back tears, as he continued to see that image, "I went to check up on her. She said she would be back in a couple hours. And..." The lawyer nodded, "So when she didn't come back, you went to see if she was okay?" Razor nodded, "Yes sir." The male took in a deep breath, "And what did you see when you got there?" He asked, "I..I..." Razor began to cry, "I saw R..Raven dead on the floor." Razor lowered his head, "Thats all, your honor." The defense lawyer stood, "The defense rests."
Three hours in, everyone listened as they argued. But there was about to be a huge twist in the case, something that no one saw coming. "We the Prosecution call in the Coroner." The man walked to the stand, and stated the I do or I promise.

"Now, you saw that there were two bullet wounds in the female, correct?" The male nodded, "Yes, sir." The Coroner replied, "And the gun had not only Marcus's but Angelina's fingerprints on the gun, correct?" He once again nodded, "Yes, sir." The lawyer smirked, "And the DNA sample at the crime scene would claim, and show that Raven was shot and killed, isn't that correct?" He asked, the Coroner looked at him, "No, the DNA sampled collected from the victim was not Raven Van Dawn's blood. The victim is Sydney Mitchell." The lawyer coughed, as everyone in the room gasped, as the murmured, "Order in the court room, I said order! This case had gotten rather bizzare, however, seeing that these two still stand trial for killing an innocent woman, I have no other excuse, but to continue on. " The Prosecuter nodded, "So, Mr. Lin, Sydney would have died instantly?" He asked, Mr. Lin shook his head, "No. You see she was shot in the shoulder, and therefore, she would have been able to live for about thirty to forty-five minutes once the bullet entered the wound, after that, she would have died from blood loss and shock." The Prosecuter nodded, "Thank you, Mr. Lin."

The Defense Lawyer stood, "Mr. Lin, is there anyway Sydney could have shot the first round, and Marcus and Angelina were just defending themselves?" Mr. Lin shook his head, "No, there would have to be a bullet within the home, and there was no evidence of that. In fact, we looked over that crime scene, including the entire house, over a dozen times. Marcus and Angelina shot first." The Defense Lawyer sighed, "The Defense Rests." The judge nodded, "Do you have anymore witnesses?" He asked, "We do." The Defense Lawyer stood, "We would like to call Angelina Hollbrok Van Dawn to the stand." The Prosecuter laughed a little bit. "Don't you fucking dare call her a Van Dawn! She will never be a Van Dawn nor will she be my fucking daughter!" Raven's mother spoke, she hated the fact Angelina was in their life. Not to mention she was very close to Sydney's family.
Angelina sat down and after she promised to tell the truth, "Now, Ms. Hollbrok, can you tell the jury why you wanted to kill or hurt Raven Van Dawn?" Angelina didn't look up, "She was abusive." The lawyer looked at her, "How was she abusive?" Angelina continued to look down, "She raped me, beat me, and abused me emotionally." The Lawyer looked towards the Judge, "That's all I got." The Prosecuter stood, "Watch this you son of a bitch." He stated to Defense Lawyer, "Ms. Hollbrok, you said you wanted to hurt Raven for her abusing ways, correct?" He asked, "Yes." She replied, "Ms. Hollbrok, may I remind you are under oath? See, what I do not get, you wanted to hurt Raven, and yet you and Marcus killed an innocent woman. Why? What was your motive?" Angelina shook her head, "I wanted the abuse to stop." She whispered, he smiled, "Can I tell you a story? I was part of case where the husband was beating his wife. And she was so scared of him, that she cried the entire time of her testimony. She had a restraining order against him and everything. And do you know what she said? She told the jury that she didn't want her kids around him, nor did she want to be around him. So if you were indeed being abused, why in the hell would you want to see her?" He asked, "I..I don't know." He now went on, "And if you did want to see her, it wasn't for a visit was it? You wanted to do more than having a small chat, because she was abusing you. And if she wasn't, then why in the hell did you not tell her the truth about your relationship with Marcus?" Angelina's eyes widen as she looked at the lawyer.

"You see, Mrs. Halliwell, I dug up a marriage certificate, and proved that you and Marcus are legally married. Do you know what that means?" He asked, Angelina shook her head, "You aren't really married to Raven, which you would never have gotten the money if she were to have died. That means you would be a shit creek, because your marriage too Raven, isn't binding due to the fact you are still married to Marcus. And you wouldn't even get the money even if you were married to Raven, because you were taken out of the will. Her money was to go too her family and friends, but not you. Mrs. Halliwell, you killed an innocent woman for nothing." The Prosecuter smiled, and walked back to the desk.

"We will take a ten minute recess. And then we will return." The Judge stated, and the Prosecuter rose. He walked to the water fountain outside, and got himself a drink, "Are you the Prosecuter?" A male voice asked, "Yeah, I am." The guy lowered his eyes, "I have some news on Raven...She is in a coma. You see...I thought Raven was my...My..." The male began to cry, "My daughter. Seeing that they look so alike." He smiled briefly, "And I had the right to know what was going on, seeing everyone thought Raven was my child. They told me that her brake lines were cut. So, what I am saying, this was thought of..." The Prosecuter looked towards the male, "Do you have proof?" He asked, "Yes, sir. I brought the guy who worked on Raven's car with me, he had all the documents. And seeing I'm not Raven's father, he couldn't hand it over." The Lawyer looked to the Mechanic, "What's your name, son?" He asked, "Johnny, Johnny Reynolds." The Lawyer smiled, "Will you testify for me, son?" The Lawyer asked, "Yes, sir. I would like to see those assholes go down."

Once recess was over, the Prosecuter walked back in, everyone was now sitting, and silent. "Your honor, the Prosecution would like to call Johnny Reynolds to the stand." Johnny moved his blond locks out of his eyes, and went to the stand, he promised to tell the truth. "Johnny, on a scale 1-10, how good are you finding things? Such as bad brakes, that sort of thing." Johnny chuckled, "10, sir. I was taught by my pops, and he taught me everything he knew. He was a Mechanice." The Lawyer nodded, "Can you tell me whose car this is?" The Lawyer showed Johnny a picture of Raven's wrecked car, "That is Raven Van Dawn's car." The Lawyer showed the picture, "I'll put this in the evidence. Now, Johnny, how could a car be this wrecked?" He asked, "The brake lines were cut. See at first I thought that there was a possibility that the brakes just didn't work, and when coming to a closer inspection, I saw that they were snipped." The Lawyer smiled, "And would this sort of thing could have killed, Ms. Van Dawn?" He asked, "Yes, sir. Luckily she had air bags." The lawyer nodded, "The Prosecution rests." The defense lawyer was caught off guard, and didn't know what to say.

So another hour went by, both sides did their closing arguements, now the final thing was up to the jury.

-------------------------------------------------Deliberation-------------------------------------

"So, yeah, I vote guilty. I am sorry that stupid story I was abused. Come on. She didn't even cry. She didn't even try to make us believe that she was abused. So, I don't believe her at all." A female agreed, "Plus she would have been out of money anyway. So, yeah, they are guilty."

"Well, those who believe that Marcus and Angelina Halliwell are guilty, raise your hand?" Everyone rose their hand, "Well, then...Lets sign this and give our verdict." That was only three hours later.

Everyone returned to the court room. "Has the jury reached a verdict?" The foreman nodded, "We have your honor. We the jury find Marcus Halliwell, guilty of first degree murder. We the jury find Angelina Halliwell guilty of being an accomplice to murder and aggervated assault with a deadly weapon." He handed over the piece of paper. "Well, usually I have a second hearing, but I already know what I am going to do. Marcus and Angelina please rise. Marcus Halliwell I sentence you to life in prison, without the possibility of parole. And no chance at an appeal." Marcus broke down, and began to cry, "And as for you, Angelina, I sentence you to forty years in prison." He now banged the gavel, "Court adjourned."

Everyone cheered and the one question on everyone's mind was, "Is Raven going to make it?"

"Queen of the Damned seeks knight in shining piercings for pleasure, pain and purring"--Scary Mary from the Urbz: Sims In The City

"A Famous Explorer once said: 'The extraordinary is in what we do, not who we are.'"--Lara Croft from Tomb Raider 2013
 
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