Hello all, so I am a writer and I absolutely adore the sims, so much that I decided to create a new story that includes photos. So far I've only posted the character biographies, still working on the story itself.

I was wondering if you all on the net could do me a big favor and read/comment on the character biographies and tell me honestly what you think? Is this a story you want to read or do you think there's more I need to add to it?

The neighborhood they all live in is known as Port Sienna (I'm working on a story name) with the downtown district being called Downtown Varina.

The seaside city is famous for it being an old pirate bay that was redeveloped into a livable community.

Once again please tell me what you think and I hope to see a long discussion on this series.

http://theores.deviantart.com/

I'd change the title of this topic. "Please like/comment" comes across more as begging for attention and popularity, whereas the post itself sounds more like just wanting feedback on the project, which is a whole different matter. The title should be representative of the post, and the current title can come across as obnoxious which a shame since your post isn't

I don't read stories, so I can't give you any feedback on that, but I hope you don't mind getting feedback on this post instead.

Eh, isn't this the third time you post about your story?
(And should this be in the Sims Stories subforum anyways?)

No - AFAIK that's for proper stories only.

Maybe they plan on making it one? So far all I see are bios. OP write a story and you can post it in the story section.