So I finally posted my Sims 2 fiction story (the first chapter) along with some images.

I ask you all to tell me what you think of this, I tried really hard to work out the story and make it interesting. I thank all of you for your help and ask that you please tell me what you think of the first chapter. Is is something you'd want to read more of?

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Congratulations on posting your first chapter! It does seem more appropriate in the Sims 2 Stories section, where it might also get some more attention from MTS2 users. But nonetheless, I am not a mod, and it takes a lot of courage to share your creative work on a public forum (I know from prior experience), so thank you for sharing it with us!

I haven't read it yet, so not comments to add. If I'm able to read it at some point this semester I'll be sure to give you my two cents.