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Fragrance Designer Career

by DarinClark2004 Posted 2nd Feb 2009 at 2:35 PM - Updated 18th Nov 2013 at 5:24 AM by leefish
 
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Test Subject
#2 Old 2nd Feb 2009 at 4:54 PM
thank you very much! =D
Scholar
#3 Old 2nd Feb 2009 at 6:21 PM
This is a really cool idea!
Especially if you have a sims and that sims likes to make herself up. (instead of making her into .. I Dunno, Ballet dancer XD)

C-A
Field Researcher
#4 Old 2nd Feb 2009 at 6:48 PM
Yay! this is so cool. Thank you!

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heh... 13 contacts that's a lot. Good thing I make my sims addicted to phone calling.
Test Subject
#5 Old 3rd Feb 2009 at 1:11 AM
Great idea! Any chance of making a modelling career too?
Inventor
#6 Old 3rd Feb 2009 at 3:22 AM
Oh, wow. This is a neat idea for a career. Thanks.

Panic! At The Disco ... I'm Down With The Panic!
My Chemical Romance ... With The Band Members.
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Test Subject
#7 Old 3rd Feb 2009 at 11:25 AM
Unique! I love this ^^
Lab Assistant
#8 Old 3rd Feb 2009 at 2:46 PM
Wow really excited about this one. Its so unique! Thanks so much
Forum Resident
#9 Old 3rd Feb 2009 at 6:17 PM
This is a really great career, but I did notice a few spelling & grammar errors in the level descriptions (that sorta thing bugs me...). I'd be happy to proof-read/edit them for you (chance cards too if you want to send me the texts). PM me if you are interested!
#10 Old 3rd Feb 2009 at 7:16 PM
Interesting. Better than most.

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Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#11 Old 4th Feb 2009 at 2:53 AM
Quote: Originally posted by harlequin_eyes
This is a really great career, but I did notice a few spelling & grammar errors in the level descriptions (that sorta thing bugs me...). I'd be happy to proof-read/edit them for you (chance cards too if you want to send me the texts). PM me if you are interested!

I did use Microsoft Word to check spelling and grammer of every description and chence card and the monitoring staff at this site checks it again after I do so I am pretty confidant that I did find the majority of them already. Thank you anyway.
Forum Resident
#12 Old 4th Feb 2009 at 4:21 AM
Quote: Originally posted by DarinClark2004
I did use Microsoft Word to check spelling and grammer of every description and chence card and the monitoring staff at this site checks it again after I do so I am pretty confidant that I did find the majority of them already. Thank you anyway.


Well, most of the ones I noticed are correct in that the words are spelled right, they're just not the correct words. Ex. in the second step of your career you have a sentence that says, "The actual lab is very different from what they teach you in school and you loose your sense of smell by the end of your shift every day." The word should be "lose," as in you no longer have something you once had, instead of "loose," as in something that needs to be tightened. Each word is correctly spelled so I can see why your spell check didn't catch it, but the word is still wrong. Computers are only as smart as the people who program them.

If you're happy with how it is, that's fine, but I will not be downloading it because of spelling & grammar errors. Feel free to contact me in the future if you want a human spell-checker.
#13 Old 4th Feb 2009 at 4:32 AM
DarinClark2004, please take harlequin_eyes up on her kind offer. That sort of thing bugs me too.

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Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#14 Old 4th Feb 2009 at 2:09 PM
Quote: Originally posted by harlequin_eyes
Well, most of the ones I noticed are correct in that the words are spelled right, they're just not the correct words. Ex. in the second step of your career you have a sentence that says, "The actual lab is very different from what they teach you in school and you loose your sense of smell by the end of your shift every day." The word should be "lose," as in you no longer have something you once had, instead of "loose," as in something that needs to be tightened. Each word is correctly spelled so I can see why your spell check didn't catch it, but the word is still wrong. Computers are only as smart as the people who program them.

If you're happy with how it is, that's fine, but I will not be downloading it because of spelling & grammar errors. Feel free to contact me in the future if you want a human spell-checker.

OK Harlequin, just email me the errors and I'll look into them but I have had some bad experiences with people who have offered me spelling corrections. Extremely bad experiences.
Lab Assistant
#15 Old 4th Feb 2009 at 3:57 PM
Wow---this is amazing!! I can't wait to use this in game for serious fashionistas. Thanx SO much!! (^_^)V!
Test Subject
#16 Old 4th Feb 2009 at 7:42 PM
Very original! Any chance that you might add a career reward object? : )
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#17 Old 5th Feb 2009 at 2:13 AM
Quote: Originally posted by vkk
Very original! Any chance that you might add a career reward object? : )

It was given the bioware station as the career reward because it was the moste appropriate item while keeping it base-game compatable.
Forum Resident
#18 Old 5th Feb 2009 at 3:49 AM
Quote: Originally posted by DarinClark2004
OK Harlequin, just email me the errors and I'll look into them but I have had some bad experiences with people who have offered me spelling corrections. Extremely bad experiences.


PMed to you since you don't allow people to email you from here (per your profile). I just made a few preliminary edits for you but I could certainly get deeper into it if you'd like me to.
Test Subject
#19 Old 5th Feb 2009 at 10:03 PM
Quote: Originally posted by DarinClark2004
It was given the bioware station as the career reward because it was the moste appropriate item while keeping it base-game compatable.

Ahh... are you planning to make one? > w< Maybe like a designer fragrance deco object... that would be cool : )
Lab Assistant
#20 Old 6th Feb 2009 at 12:27 AM
So this is the track those crazy people at the mall who sufficate me with sented sprays have. Heh. Very inventive. Cool.
Lab Assistant
#21 Old 6th Feb 2009 at 12:27 AM
So this is the track those crazy people at the mall who sufficate me with sented sprays have. Heh. Very inventive. Cool.
Test Subject
#22 Old 6th Feb 2009 at 12:32 AM
You! You are my hero. Thank you very much. This is a thing of beauty.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#23 Old 6th Feb 2009 at 2:36 AM
Quote: Originally posted by jewely2951
So this is the track those crazy people at the mall who sufficate me with sented sprays have. Heh. Very inventive. Cool.

No those crazy sprayers are only level 3. This career track goes beyond that.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#24 Old 11th Feb 2009 at 4:05 PM
I have made the grammer and sentence-structure corrections that were requested.
Scholar
#25 Old 8th Mar 2009 at 7:20 PM
thank you for making this, can't wait to get one of my sims into this track. Any chance you might be making a jewelry designer or fashion designer career in the future? I'd love to have both in my game.
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