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#26
7th Jun 2015 at 6:19 PM
Posts: 293
Quote: Originally posted by lil bag2
Quick question. Would using photoshop for minor effects like blood be okay? |
When it comes to doing any photo editing outside of what is allowed in Story Rules 8 & 9, you'll have to decide if it's worth the risk of a possible loss of Presentation points. That's #7 under Scoring. It includes having a completed entry form, being within word/picture count, & adhering to the rules. As using effects breaks the rules, it will be up to each individual judge's discretion on what to do-- if they think it's worth taking off points for and, if so, how many points to deduct. They can take off as little as .5pts to as much as 5pts. It's their opinion of how severe they believe the violation is. There's no way to tell how okay one judge will be with it versus another. (At least, not until you see how they score & comment.) Even minor effects would be breaking the photo editing rule. Ultimately, you'll have to decide if you believe that's worth the risk of losing Presentation points or not.
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#27
10th Jun 2015 at 2:50 AM
For the bonus: Does the quote chosen have to be the one relating to the archetype chosen? My chosen archetype was Ms Exposition, but I discovered that I only needed to change a few words to manage to smoothly fit in "like something only partly of mankind," and I think I like it better like this.
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#28
10th Jun 2015 at 6:20 AM
Posts: 293
Quote: Originally posted by Ghost sdoj
For the bonus: Does the quote chosen have to be the one relating to the archetype chosen? My chosen archetype was Ms Exposition, but I discovered that I only needed to change a few words to manage to smoothly fit in "like something only partly of mankind," and I think I like it better like this. |
This round, you can use any of the quotes. It doesn't have to be the one that goes with the archetype you chose.
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#29
13th Jun 2015 at 4:43 AM
Last edited by Qnshr5 : 15th Jun 2015 at 11:00 PM.
Posts: 293
Last Week for Entries!
Just a Reminder! This is the start of the last week before round 1 ends! It's also the last full weekend so if you have the time take advantage of it. I know many of you are working hard and I can't wait to see what everyone comes up with. :DAlso, there is one more opening for an emergency judge, if anyone is interested.
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#30
15th Jun 2015 at 11:01 PM
Last edited by livmusic : 15th Jun 2015 at 11:30 PM.
Posts: 10
My Entry
Story Title: I am part of the future's damageGenre: sci-fi
Word/Picture Count: 130 words no pictures
Round Element: Young mutant Elise has to rebel against her father to show her odd but true mutant ability
Synopsis & Recap: (recap starting in rd 2)
Entry 1
Round Element: I stare my dad into the eyes (or I thought I did) I say, "Dad I love you but I'm not like you I want to be an Avenger"
entry 1: My name is Elise and I've been a mutant for a year now. Sadly my father Tony didn't accept me his only kid is different. Tony knows I want to become an Avenger but after second Cival war ( I was a 3 yr old then) he said I can't become an Avenger I know one reason why I'm blind but I can see stuff before it happens. Today I did it I looked into his eyes (or I thought I did) I say, "Dad I love you but I'm not like you I want to be an Avenger." He looks at me sadly and says "I know." What I didn't realize is the Avengers knew about me already. Thor already knew what I knew is about two years from know the avengers and other superheros that are foggy to me would be in this fight over dangours wepons called the infinity stones. While I processed the future shown to me we were attacked I blacked out.
We awoke in a room I was strapped to a chair I knew about one other power I had it's almost as dangorus as the infinity stones themselves lights flickered I saw the avengers I yelled, " What the heck was that for." No one answered Thor stepped forward and told me you are an infinity stone Elise.
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#31
17th Jun 2015 at 1:21 PM
Last edited by blatant07 : 17th Jun 2015 at 10:12 PM.
Posts: 6
Chapter 1
Story Title: Darkness Falls Genre: Sci Fi
Word/Picture Count: 2499 Words / 22 Pictures
Round Element: Expendable
Synopsis: Captain Zakeel's home planet is at war, to help the situation he is sent to planet Earth to recruit help.
Cover Picture:
Entry:
Whilst sitting in his command chair overlooking his team, General Racaba, the Herzians most experienced military officer, is informed by the ship's AI, Ira, that there is an important message coming through. “General Racaba you have an urgent communication transmission coming in from The Council.”
The General leaps up from his chair, shocked as it is very unusual for The Council to contact him directly. “Bring the ship to a halt Mayler, I have a feeling we’re going to be changing direction.” The General demands to receive the communication in his own personal quarters and heads to them immediately. Upon entering his quarters he locks the door behind him and turns to the communication device on his wall, switching it on. The display slowly starts to reveal The Council and they call out his name in unison and begin to explain a problem they are facing back on Zireha, the Herzians home planet. “General Racaba! We are vastly outnumber and losing this war. You are our last hope. Priorities have now changed, we must find a suitable planet to recruit from.”
The news stunned Racaba, he took a step back and sat on the end of his bed. He muttered to himself “This cannot be.” He looked up, now with an angry expression on his face. “I should have been there!” The Council began whispering to each other, and then all together they turned to face the General. “The decision is final, locate the nearest suitable planet and begin the mission! Failure is not an option. May the light illuminate our path during this time of darkness.” Racaba stood up and saluted the Council. “I will not fail. The light will illuminate our path!.”
Zakeel sneaked up behind Arelyia, his sister, who was in her laboratory and made a loud scary noise. She quickly turned around, slapping his arm. “You buttface! You scared the crap out of me!”
Zakeel laughed it off while peeking around her to see what she was doing. “Arey! You’re supposed to destroy these stupid things. You’re supposed to be the smart one, that follows the rules!” Arelyia quickly grabbed the small pink hairy space critter before he could seize it. “But they’re so unique and well I think this one is cute!” Zak scratched his head, unable to understand her obsession with the furball. “Well at least hide it!”
Zakeel suddenly noticed a dark figure standing in the doorway, the figure slowly moved forward towards the light revealing itself to be General Racaba. “Hide what?!” Zakeel stepped forward towards the General, blocking his view of Arey, so she could hide the fluffy item. “Oh erm… Arey was just showing me erm… a present for someone.” Racaba stepped forward, staring into Zakeel’s eyes.
He placed his hand, with a firm grip, on Zakeel’s shoulder. “Good. Now, Captain T’sorva, I need you to join me in the briefing room, we have much to discuss.” Zakeel stood to attention. “Of course sir!” The General released his grip on Zakeel’s shoulder, turning around to lead the way to the briefing room. Zak quickly looked back at his sister, Arelyia, with a worried look on his face. Racaba, as if he had eyes in the back if his head, noticed Zakeel was not following him. “Now, son!” Zakeel whipped his head forwards and followed his father to the briefing room.
After updating Captain Zakeel on the news from back home, General Racaba began to explain the mission ahead. “We have located a suitable planet, Ira has calculated that the planet is a 90% replica of our own. I am sending you in to help us gather biological data and intelligence.” Zakeel, still struggling to take in the news that the war is almost lost on Zireha, looks at the image of Earth on the display whilst rubbing his brow. “Do we have any images of the lifeform on this planet? Cause I really don’t want to be disguised as a slimey worm again!” The General leans forward on the briefing table, placing both hands on it and smirks. “Ira, show him the images we have of the lifeform on the planet.” The display shows multiple pictures of humans, male and female, on the display. Zakeel lets out a sigh of relief as he views the images. He turns around, leaning forward and also places both hands on the briefing table. “Okay sir. I’m on board.”
Racaba looks his son in the eyes. “This is important son, the future of your race is at stake… but I have faith in your abilities to come through for us.” General Racaba stands to attention, salutes and heads off back to his quarters, leaving Zak to study the information at hand in the briefing room.
Zakeel, after gathering all the information he could, heads to Arelyia’s laboratory. “New mission Arey, got any new toys for me?’ Arelyia looks back from the seat of her desk while wondering if she has anything new. “Oh! I’ve been working on a new implant, this one connects up with Ira, I’ve been trying to add communication to it as well, but I have only have it linked with my implant so far.” Zakeel strides forward to the medical bed and jumps on to it, landing on his back. “Sounds great! This time though, watch where you’re poking in there! Dam leg was shaking for days after last time!” Arelyia giggles as she makes her way over to the surgical interface unit. “I may have done that on purpose!”
Arelyia begins the surgical process, a small cloud of green gas, that they extract from plants, shoots out of the circular object above the bed, putting Zak into a comatose state. A red laser begins to beam out of the object. She starts by removing his previous implant and finally recreating the one she had been working on, with great precision. “All done. And no shakes this time.. although, no. I should do his disguise though, that will freak him out!” Another small cloud of gas shoots out, this time yellow. Zakeel sits up as soon it hits his face. “I’ll never get used to that darkness.” Zakeel stands up, catching a reflection of himself in the mirror. “Ahhhhhhh!”
The whole crew is in the shuttle bay, to send off Zakeel on his important mission. Zakeel is inside the shuttle, making last minute checks with Ira on the co-ordinations, as the General steps inside. “Everything good?” Zak finishes entering some data and turns around to face his father. “Yes sir. Everything is in order and I am ready to launch.” Racaba leans in and whispers to Zakeel. “Good luck son.”
General Racaba steps out of the shuttle, locking the door behind him, and steps back to stand with the rest of the crew. The lights start flashing blue and white as Ira counts down for the launch. “3… 2… 1… Shuttle launch initiated.” The locking mechanisms release and the shuttle drops away, energising its invisibility cloaking before blasting off towards earth. The Crew all turn to the display behind them to see his safe launch. Racaba grabs his daughter's hand and mumbles to himself. “May the light illuminate your path!”
A month had passed since Zakeels launch from the scout ship, the Voltanha. After a rough adjustment period to yet another dark and revolting planet, unlike his home, Zak was able to find a job plus accommodation thanks to his military background and Destiny, a friendly stranger that he met at an advertisement board. He was recruited as a bouncer at a local nightclub where Destiny worked as a waitress.
Zakeel slumps down into the old leather chair that was stuck in front of the television. He switches the television on to distort his communication with Arey. “Ira, link me up with Arey please.”
Zak uses his implant to communicate with Arey, making daily reports about Earth. “Arey, this planet… I think it’s altering me some how. I feel drained…” Arelyia checks his vitals on the interface in front of her. “Hmm... let me check. Intriguing, based on the info we've gathered, the physiology of humans requires them to have 6 to 8 hour period of recharging. Called sleeping."
Zak's eyes light up when he hears the word sleeping. “Ah! I’ve seen this on the entertainment cube, after announcing they’re sleepy they just lie down and close their eyes.” Arey is surprised by this, they didn’t anticipate any planetary effects to occur. “Then I would suggest you attempt to replicate this action and see if it solves your problem.” Zak reluctantly gets up off the chair. “Okay sis, sounds stupid… but I guess I’ll give it a shot.” Zak takes a step before falling on to the bed, landing on his side, he then proceeds to shut his eyes. Zakeel jolts upright as he is awoken by loud banging on his apartment door. “Ah! What the hell was that!” The loud banging happens again, but this time it is followed by Destiny’s voice. “Zak, c’mon, we’re gonna be late!” Zak looks over at his clock and is surprised at the time, over 8 hours had passed. “Woah. Err… yea, crap, i’ll be right out!”
Destiny is cleaning some glasses behind the bar in preparation for the night. Zak is sitting at the bar in front of her with a zoned out expression, still confused over the time loss. “Zak!” He quickly snaps out of it, and looks across the bar at Destiny. “What the hell is up with you?” Zak shrugs. “Oh erm… nothing i’m fine.”
Destiny puts the glass down and leans forward. “C’mon today we were almost late! Since we met that hasn’t even come close to happening.” Zak looks her in the eyes, while rubbing his brow. “Eh... Had a vision while recharging... “ Destiny quickly interrupts Zak. “Ah, bad dream huh, how about we take your mind off it, tell me about your necklace.” Zak looks down at his medallion, he grabs it and rubs it with his thumb. He smiles and lets his mind wonder to memories of the beautiful nature on his home planet before realising Destiny is still waiting for an answer. “Oh this. It’s… just a family heirloom. Nothing special.” Destiny picks the glass back up and continues cleaning. “Oh. Well we better get back to work.”
The night is winding down, most of the regulars at the club have left. Destiny shiftily looks around, making sure nobody sees her. She heads into the locker room, once again checking behind her, noticing that Zak is heading this way. Destiny pulls out her phone from the locker, along with a vial of green fluid. She quickly enters 999 on her phone.
“Hello, I would like to report a murder at Forbidden Desire.” She drinks the whole vial, her body feels numb and slowly starts to sway before she collapses to the ground. Zak hears a thud on his way to the locker room. As he gets closer he begins to hear the muffled voice of the police operator from the phone. He walks in and notices Destiny sprawled out on the floor. Zak steps closer, now realising that she is unresponsive.
“Erm… Dest…? Oh shit!” Before Zak can even react to the situation two police officers appear at the locker room door. “Sir, remain calm and step away from the body!” Zak turns around like a deer caught in headlights. “No, no, no. This wasn’t me!”
The two police officers step forward. “Sir, we need you to place both your hands behind your head!” Zak sighs, gets up and complies with the officers. One of the officers applies handcuffs to Zak, while the other calls the crime in. After a short while, two detectives arrive on the scene, Karen Blakely and Layne Davidson. They question Zakeel, but don’t have any substantial evidence to hold him, so they just warn him not to leave the city.
After being released, Zakeel is now worried he’s being framed and will end up in prison, which would jeopardize his whole mission. Zak stops for a second and mumbles to himself in Herzian, calming his mind. His eyes light up as he comes up with a risky plan that involves getting Destiny’s body to Arelyia. He crouches down behind a couple of boxes and waits for his opportunity. After twenty minutes of patiently waiting, the forensics team load up the body into the back of their van. Zak lets out a sigh of relief and whispers to himself.. “Ok time for action, Ira, energize my invisibility cloak.” Zak slowly starts to vanish from head to toe, as Ira warns him. “Zak, you only have about five minutes of invisibility available.” Zak wipes the sweat from his forehead, and sprints into action. He runs into the club through the open entrance, picking up the closest stool and throwing it behind the bar smashing a lot of the glass. He quickly retreats back to the door, the forensics team and remaining officers run inside to check out the noise. Zak slips out, still cloaked and unnoticed. His invisibility cloak is starting to expose him, so Zak drags the body out from the van, slinging it over his shoulder and heads off down the back alley, towards his shuttle.
Zak plonks the body down onto one of the passenger seats and slams the shuttle door shut. “Ira, contact Arelyia.”
“Arey! Arey... listen up. I got a body coming up. I erm… ran into some trouble.” Arelyia gets up from her desk and heads towards the shuttle bay. “Alright, remain calm and tell me what has happened.” Zak then proceeds to let her in on everything that has happened tonight. “Okay, okay, don’t worry, go back to your apartment. I’ll let you know when I’m done.” Zakeel hastily retreats from the shuttle that is about to take off. Ira, lets Arey know that the shuttle has arrived. She collects the body from the shuttle and takes it to her lab, placing it on the medical bed. Arey steps behind the surgical interface unit and begins her initial scan on the body. “WHAT?! This.. she is a Herzian!”
Arey unable to contain her excitement and concern, runs to tell Racaba. She bursts into his private quarters, announcing what she has found. Meanwhile the scan finishes, recognising Destiny is in a deep comatose state and auto releases the yellow gas, waking her up. Suddenly she hears voices coming from the hallway, she sits up with her eyes open wide, instantly realising her plan had worked, she was on the ship. Destiny leaps up onto the bed, switching on the surgical laser and aiming it at the door. The door slides open and she fires the laser. A red beam blasts Arelyia in the chest. She drops to the ground motionless when Destiny quickly dashes forward and pushes the General to the side, he gets out his gun turns and shoots after the target.
Round Element: Expendable - Arelyia
#32
17th Jun 2015 at 3:47 PM
I was hoping to enter, but after fighting with my game, starting a new game in the same world 8 times now, forgetting what the rooms looked like in some of the pictures that I did successfully get and taking more pictures that are unusable because the rooms don't match, taking so long to get everybody posed that it was no longer the right time of day (solved with Relativity set so that time is running a LOT more slowly) and finding an otherwise almost perfect custom world with the water table at ground level so my initial basements are all flooded and only the basement tool basements work, I have managed to get 7 usable pictures. Seven. I'm still working on an entry, but don't count on it getting in. Sorry.
I am Ghost. My husband is sidneydoj. I post, he downloads, and I wanted to keep my post count.
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#33
17th Jun 2015 at 7:29 PM
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Quote: Originally posted by Ghost sdoj
I was hoping to enter, but after fighting with my game, starting a new game in the same world 8 times now, forgetting what the rooms looked like in some of the pictures that I did successfully get and taking more pictures that are unusable because the rooms don't match, taking so long to get everybody posed that it was no longer the right time of day (solved with Relativity set so that time is running a LOT more slowly) and finding an otherwise almost perfect custom world with the water table at ground level so my initial basements are all flooded and only the basement tool basements work, I have managed to get 7 usable pictures. Seven. I'm still working on an entry, but don't count on it getting in. Sorry. |
It may be too late to mention this but you could also try Cmo's Time/Weather Change Mod. You can shift the time forward or back to whatever you need it to be as well as changing the weather and overcast. Here's hoping you can get a story in!
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"On the internet, you can be anything you want. It's strange that so many people choose to be stupid."
#34
18th Jun 2015 at 5:43 AM
Last edited by Qnshr5 : 18th Jun 2015 at 3:41 PM.
Posts: 293
@Ghost sdoj: If pictures are the main thing holding you back you only need 5 more to meet the minimum of 12. I say "only" but I know how difficult that can be when the game won't cooperate with you. Pictures and words just have to be within the range. They don't have to match like 1500 wds/15pics. It can be 2000 wds/12 pics or whatever. It's ok to rely on with words what you're unable to show in picture! I'm also hoping you're able to get in, but understand if you're unable to.
@livmusic: I'm not sure if you're planning on adding more to your entry or not, but since there's only a couple days left, I want to point out that your word and picture count need to fall within the range of 1200-2500 words and 12-25 pictures before I can add you to the contest. Ignore if you're already expanding/adding to your story.
Still need 3 more completed entries to move on to round 2. There's less than 2 days left! Plenty of time to put yours together.
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@livmusic: I'm not sure if you're planning on adding more to your entry or not, but since there's only a couple days left, I want to point out that your word and picture count need to fall within the range of 1200-2500 words and 12-25 pictures before I can add you to the contest. Ignore if you're already expanding/adding to your story.
Still need 3 more completed entries to move on to round 2. There's less than 2 days left! Plenty of time to put yours together.
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#35
19th Jun 2015 at 5:45 AM
Story Title: Between Two Worlds
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 2227 words. 12 pictures.
Round Element: Ms. Exposition
Synopsis & Recap: In a world ruled by a necromancer who uses the undead as his enforcers, Amara discovers that she is destined to bring change. Whether she wants to or not.
Cover Picture:
Amara realized that she had lost track of time in the library again. It was dark. With any luck, the fang-faces would be prowling around the more populated areas, but it was still important to be careful. The vampires were not authorized to act unless they read a treasonous thought in their victim's mind, but having the vampire punished after the fact still wouldn't help the victim much.
As she hurried out of the library, she realized that she was out of luck. A male vampire in very filthy clothes was approaching her.
"Hello, my lady. Might I have the pleasure of your company for a while?"
She tried to edge around him, but he blocked her. "Please?" he said gently.
She looked at him. "One would think that a highly placed government official would not look as though he needs to go dumpster diving," she said with a faint smile.
He blinked. "Pardon me?"
"Oh, please. You're obviously a vampire, which means that you are one of the Lord Emperor's secret police. And you look as though you haven't even heard of laundry."
"Does this mean that you are refusing to allow me the pleasure of your company? Surely you are aware that the innocent have nothing to fear."
"Yes, it means that I am refusing to go anywhere with you. The fact that the Lord Emperor will use you as a component of a longevity spell if you have defied his orders won't help me much if I've become a midnight snack. And I don't like vampires."
"Suppose I were to tell you that I am a renegade. I do not serve the Lord Emperor."
She shook her head. "That's not possible. You are a vampire. Undead. He is a necromancer, which means he has power over the undead. And he has had at least 3,000 years to increase his power. There is no way a vampire within the boundaries of his territory can avoid being his minion unless they are bound to someone equally powerful who is defending the creature. If you claim you are not his minion, you are either lying or deluded. Or there is a war in progress and nobody has noticed it yet."
He nodded. "Or the vampire is living in the shadows. Not drawing attention to himself. Feeding only from a willing thrall, and only in sips. Being so minor that he is not worth paying attention to. Dumpster diving for furniture. Avoiding contact, until one of his thralls had a premonition that someone who loves books and has flowers in her hair can free his brethren from the slavery to which they are bound." He bowed to her. "Please, my lady. Rose has never been wrong. I ask again for the pleasure of your company."
"Just because she has never been wrong doesn't mean that she's not wrong now. And even if she were right, she seems to have skipped the bit where I don't like fang-faces, and I see nothing wrong with them being kept under control. Even if I could help you, why would I want to?"
Just then, a group of people came around the corner, and something about one of them felt as though there was another vampire in the group. He also noticed. "This is too important for me. I will find you again," he whispered as he ducked into a nearby sewer grate.
"Not if I see you first," she muttered as she headed home. She didn't see the other vampire give her a long look, and then motion to her thralls.
That night she woke up to the sound of someone in her house. She grabbed a clove of garlic, smeared garlic juice onto a decorative sword hanging on the wall, and headed downstairs to confront what she thought was that stupid vampire again. It wasn't. It was the other vampire accompanied by a tiger lycanthrope. She tried to fight them, but two skilled warriors attacking a girl with more knowledge of theory than practice only has one outcome even if the girl is wielding a sword that can poison one of her attackers.
"The Black Queen's daughter is MINE!" she heard the vampire exult as she felt herself being bitten. Something exploded inside her head. Memories that were not her own rushed in, along with a feeling of a door in her mind opening and flooding her body with power. If this was what it was like to be made a vampire's thrall, she finally understood the attraction. Suddenly another girl came into the room, followed by the vampire who had accosted her at the library. She was dropped to the floor, which felt quite nice for some reason, and the two vampires glared at each other. "You're too late, renegade. I've tasted her blood now. Not only can I turn in the Black Queen's daughter, I can bring a renegade for his Lordship's spell. I shall feast well for a long time over this!"
The thrall smiled. "Too late? Only for you. You've tasted her blood. Was it human? Or was it like something only partly of mankind? We were hoping that she would consent to have her power awakened, but you've done that for us. You've even taken all the risks that my master was willing to take if she allowed it. I think you will find that the only blood which will satisfy you now is hers. If she is unwilling or unable to feed you, you will starve. And you have done nothing that would make her willing to keep you alive."
The first vampire came over to her and then looked at his thrall. "Rose? Is it safe to leave her here now?" Rose closed her eyes for a moment. "No. HE has already learned of what has occurred. His forces are mobilizing to neutralize the threat before she is fully formed." She looked at the others. "You are not fighting a child anymore. If you continue to try to bring her before your former master, you will die. If you fail to bring her before your former master, you will die. Even if you join us you may die, but your chances are better than either alternative. Her father planted the seeds of his own destruction when he raped her mother, and now he fears that those seeds have matured. It is rather ironic that his own actions will force her to oppose him simply to survive. "
"My father? I'm an orphan. I was a ward of the state until I reached maturity. I think you have the wrong person." Amara tried to get up, but the floor was just too comfortable.
Rose shook her head. "Your father is the Lord Emperor. Your mother is the Black Queen of the fey. We suspect that she left you to mature in the mortal realm to ensure your freedom. By now your father is not entirely human, and your mother never was. But you were born in the mortal realm, matured in the mortal realm, and now came into your power in the mortal realm. Your mother's blood gives you freedom of the fey realms, and now your history gives you freedom of the mortal realm. Heaven and Hell could still pose trouble, but you should have no reason to go there. And we need to get out of here NOW!" She turned to her master. "Antoine? She'll need to be carried."
The tiger stepped forward. "I Nathaniel. Mistress won't say, but we yours. I feel. I protect you now. So does mistress."
Someone lifted her. This felt even nicer than the floor. She closed her eyes, and was vaguely aware of noises around her. Finally she felt herself being laid on a nice soft bed. She promptly curled up and fell into a deeper sleep. When she awoke, she was in a strange room. The vampiress who had bitten her was sitting in a chair near her bed.
She rolled out of bed on the opposite side and looked around for something to use as a weapon. The vampiress sighed.
"Mistress, if you want me dead, say the word and I will be forced to kill myself. Or simply refuse to feed me, and watch me starve. If I could go back and undo what I did, believe me I would be glad to do so. But I can't. And now I am yours, for better or worse. My name is Camilla. I believe you know my Nathaniel. None of my other thralls survived getting you to safety. And it appears that Antoine only has his Rose, so your army is currently two vampires, a tiger thrall, and a precog. If I had known THAT before I committed to you I would probably have tried to take you to the Lord Emperor and hoped for mercy. But done is done. If he catches me now, the best that I could hope for is to die quickly. And that isn't likely. I'm not happy about it, but I'm yours. And that precog was right. Even Nathaniel's blood couldn't sustain me. I was lucky that Antoine had some potions to help me recover from the injuries I sustained while protecting you. Apparently he's been in hiding for a long time."
Amara was startled. "So you're saying that despite the fact that you attacked me, and would have preferred to turn me over to the Lord Emperor, if I tell you to drop dead you would kill yourself? And if I don't let you bite me again, you will starve? Fine. Drop dead!"
Camilla slowly stood up and bowed. "As you wish, my mistress. If Antoine can show me a way to the surface that is unlikely to lead trackers to you, I shall stand outside until I succumb to sunburn. You should be able to monitor safely from here." She turned to leave.
About half an hour later, Rose came in, looking sad and carrying a crystal ball. "I didn't expect you to be someone to execute a minion in a fit of pique. But she's only a vampire, isn't she. Are you going to share the pain of her death, or just watch?"
"She's doing it !?"
Rose nodded. "She has no choice. She bound herself to you, and you commanded it. She did ask me to be sure Nathaniel was cared for. He's not just her thrall, he's also her son." Amara looked at the crystal ball, which showed Camilla out in the sunlight beginning to smoke. "Bring her back in." Camilla jumped, as if startled. Rose smiled. "She hears you. Countermand your order and call her in. It will be faster."
"Camilla!" shouted Amara. "Don't do this. Come in!" She sighed, and added in a more normal voice. "I have no idea how I'm going to feed her, because I don't need to keep getting knocked out like that, but I can't just let her die either."
"Oh, that's easy!" Rose exclaimed and handed her a book. "One drop of your blood in a pint of pure water, cast this spell, and you have a pint of blood. And the best part is that the created blood retains the water's ability to stay fresh until used, so you can safely make gallons of blood to use as needed. It's usually how I keep Antoine fed." She blushed. "Although sometimes a direct feeding is nice too." She handed Amara some bottled water. "And you had better practice that spell, because you've got a wounded and starving vampire heading your way now."
Fortunately, the spell was as easy as it sounded, and by the time Camilla arrived there were several bottles of blood waiting for her. She cautiously sipped from the first, then drank thirstily as her burns healed. When she was back to herself, she bowed to Amara. "My thanks, Mistress. May I hope to know why you changed your mind?"
Amara smiled sadly. "I still don't LIKE vampires. I'm not sure how much I trust either you or Antoine. I'm not sure that I believe anything that's been told to me. But I'm not going to deny that vampires are people, and I can't just let people suffer or die if I have the power to save them. Which, apparently, I do. But don't call me Mistress. My name is Amara."
Just then Antoine entered the room carrying an egg. "It was exactly where Rose said it would be," he commented as he set it on the floor. It shook. "And it seems to be hatching," he added unnecessarily as the shell cracked. A reptilian snout appeared, followed soon afterward by the rest of the baby dragon. It looked around the room, and then with a "MEEP!" it headed for Amara.
Camilla laughed. "So now your army is two vampires, a tiger thrall, a precog, and a 5 minute old baby dragon. We should have no trouble taking out a 3,000 year old sorcerer with thousands of ghosts, vampires, and other undead at his command and the ability to conjure more any time they are needed. Not to mention the special forces in the army that are all lycanthropes."
Antoine nodded and turned to her. "Well, my lady, that war that you joked about earlier has begun. May fortune favor the underdog."
Round Element: Ms. Exposition- Rose
I am Ghost. My husband is sidneydoj. I post, he downloads, and I wanted to keep my post count.
Group for Avatar Makers* Funny Stories *2017 Yearbook
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 2227 words. 12 pictures.
Round Element: Ms. Exposition
Synopsis & Recap: In a world ruled by a necromancer who uses the undead as his enforcers, Amara discovers that she is destined to bring change. Whether she wants to or not.
Cover Picture:
Amara realized that she had lost track of time in the library again. It was dark. With any luck, the fang-faces would be prowling around the more populated areas, but it was still important to be careful. The vampires were not authorized to act unless they read a treasonous thought in their victim's mind, but having the vampire punished after the fact still wouldn't help the victim much.
As she hurried out of the library, she realized that she was out of luck. A male vampire in very filthy clothes was approaching her.
"Hello, my lady. Might I have the pleasure of your company for a while?"
She tried to edge around him, but he blocked her. "Please?" he said gently.
She looked at him. "One would think that a highly placed government official would not look as though he needs to go dumpster diving," she said with a faint smile.
He blinked. "Pardon me?"
"Oh, please. You're obviously a vampire, which means that you are one of the Lord Emperor's secret police. And you look as though you haven't even heard of laundry."
"Does this mean that you are refusing to allow me the pleasure of your company? Surely you are aware that the innocent have nothing to fear."
"Yes, it means that I am refusing to go anywhere with you. The fact that the Lord Emperor will use you as a component of a longevity spell if you have defied his orders won't help me much if I've become a midnight snack. And I don't like vampires."
"Suppose I were to tell you that I am a renegade. I do not serve the Lord Emperor."
She shook her head. "That's not possible. You are a vampire. Undead. He is a necromancer, which means he has power over the undead. And he has had at least 3,000 years to increase his power. There is no way a vampire within the boundaries of his territory can avoid being his minion unless they are bound to someone equally powerful who is defending the creature. If you claim you are not his minion, you are either lying or deluded. Or there is a war in progress and nobody has noticed it yet."
He nodded. "Or the vampire is living in the shadows. Not drawing attention to himself. Feeding only from a willing thrall, and only in sips. Being so minor that he is not worth paying attention to. Dumpster diving for furniture. Avoiding contact, until one of his thralls had a premonition that someone who loves books and has flowers in her hair can free his brethren from the slavery to which they are bound." He bowed to her. "Please, my lady. Rose has never been wrong. I ask again for the pleasure of your company."
"Just because she has never been wrong doesn't mean that she's not wrong now. And even if she were right, she seems to have skipped the bit where I don't like fang-faces, and I see nothing wrong with them being kept under control. Even if I could help you, why would I want to?"
Just then, a group of people came around the corner, and something about one of them felt as though there was another vampire in the group. He also noticed. "This is too important for me. I will find you again," he whispered as he ducked into a nearby sewer grate.
"Not if I see you first," she muttered as she headed home. She didn't see the other vampire give her a long look, and then motion to her thralls.
That night she woke up to the sound of someone in her house. She grabbed a clove of garlic, smeared garlic juice onto a decorative sword hanging on the wall, and headed downstairs to confront what she thought was that stupid vampire again. It wasn't. It was the other vampire accompanied by a tiger lycanthrope. She tried to fight them, but two skilled warriors attacking a girl with more knowledge of theory than practice only has one outcome even if the girl is wielding a sword that can poison one of her attackers.
"The Black Queen's daughter is MINE!" she heard the vampire exult as she felt herself being bitten. Something exploded inside her head. Memories that were not her own rushed in, along with a feeling of a door in her mind opening and flooding her body with power. If this was what it was like to be made a vampire's thrall, she finally understood the attraction. Suddenly another girl came into the room, followed by the vampire who had accosted her at the library. She was dropped to the floor, which felt quite nice for some reason, and the two vampires glared at each other. "You're too late, renegade. I've tasted her blood now. Not only can I turn in the Black Queen's daughter, I can bring a renegade for his Lordship's spell. I shall feast well for a long time over this!"
The thrall smiled. "Too late? Only for you. You've tasted her blood. Was it human? Or was it like something only partly of mankind? We were hoping that she would consent to have her power awakened, but you've done that for us. You've even taken all the risks that my master was willing to take if she allowed it. I think you will find that the only blood which will satisfy you now is hers. If she is unwilling or unable to feed you, you will starve. And you have done nothing that would make her willing to keep you alive."
The first vampire came over to her and then looked at his thrall. "Rose? Is it safe to leave her here now?" Rose closed her eyes for a moment. "No. HE has already learned of what has occurred. His forces are mobilizing to neutralize the threat before she is fully formed." She looked at the others. "You are not fighting a child anymore. If you continue to try to bring her before your former master, you will die. If you fail to bring her before your former master, you will die. Even if you join us you may die, but your chances are better than either alternative. Her father planted the seeds of his own destruction when he raped her mother, and now he fears that those seeds have matured. It is rather ironic that his own actions will force her to oppose him simply to survive. "
"My father? I'm an orphan. I was a ward of the state until I reached maturity. I think you have the wrong person." Amara tried to get up, but the floor was just too comfortable.
Rose shook her head. "Your father is the Lord Emperor. Your mother is the Black Queen of the fey. We suspect that she left you to mature in the mortal realm to ensure your freedom. By now your father is not entirely human, and your mother never was. But you were born in the mortal realm, matured in the mortal realm, and now came into your power in the mortal realm. Your mother's blood gives you freedom of the fey realms, and now your history gives you freedom of the mortal realm. Heaven and Hell could still pose trouble, but you should have no reason to go there. And we need to get out of here NOW!" She turned to her master. "Antoine? She'll need to be carried."
The tiger stepped forward. "I Nathaniel. Mistress won't say, but we yours. I feel. I protect you now. So does mistress."
Someone lifted her. This felt even nicer than the floor. She closed her eyes, and was vaguely aware of noises around her. Finally she felt herself being laid on a nice soft bed. She promptly curled up and fell into a deeper sleep. When she awoke, she was in a strange room. The vampiress who had bitten her was sitting in a chair near her bed.
She rolled out of bed on the opposite side and looked around for something to use as a weapon. The vampiress sighed.
"Mistress, if you want me dead, say the word and I will be forced to kill myself. Or simply refuse to feed me, and watch me starve. If I could go back and undo what I did, believe me I would be glad to do so. But I can't. And now I am yours, for better or worse. My name is Camilla. I believe you know my Nathaniel. None of my other thralls survived getting you to safety. And it appears that Antoine only has his Rose, so your army is currently two vampires, a tiger thrall, and a precog. If I had known THAT before I committed to you I would probably have tried to take you to the Lord Emperor and hoped for mercy. But done is done. If he catches me now, the best that I could hope for is to die quickly. And that isn't likely. I'm not happy about it, but I'm yours. And that precog was right. Even Nathaniel's blood couldn't sustain me. I was lucky that Antoine had some potions to help me recover from the injuries I sustained while protecting you. Apparently he's been in hiding for a long time."
Amara was startled. "So you're saying that despite the fact that you attacked me, and would have preferred to turn me over to the Lord Emperor, if I tell you to drop dead you would kill yourself? And if I don't let you bite me again, you will starve? Fine. Drop dead!"
Camilla slowly stood up and bowed. "As you wish, my mistress. If Antoine can show me a way to the surface that is unlikely to lead trackers to you, I shall stand outside until I succumb to sunburn. You should be able to monitor safely from here." She turned to leave.
About half an hour later, Rose came in, looking sad and carrying a crystal ball. "I didn't expect you to be someone to execute a minion in a fit of pique. But she's only a vampire, isn't she. Are you going to share the pain of her death, or just watch?"
"She's doing it !?"
Rose nodded. "She has no choice. She bound herself to you, and you commanded it. She did ask me to be sure Nathaniel was cared for. He's not just her thrall, he's also her son." Amara looked at the crystal ball, which showed Camilla out in the sunlight beginning to smoke. "Bring her back in." Camilla jumped, as if startled. Rose smiled. "She hears you. Countermand your order and call her in. It will be faster."
"Camilla!" shouted Amara. "Don't do this. Come in!" She sighed, and added in a more normal voice. "I have no idea how I'm going to feed her, because I don't need to keep getting knocked out like that, but I can't just let her die either."
"Oh, that's easy!" Rose exclaimed and handed her a book. "One drop of your blood in a pint of pure water, cast this spell, and you have a pint of blood. And the best part is that the created blood retains the water's ability to stay fresh until used, so you can safely make gallons of blood to use as needed. It's usually how I keep Antoine fed." She blushed. "Although sometimes a direct feeding is nice too." She handed Amara some bottled water. "And you had better practice that spell, because you've got a wounded and starving vampire heading your way now."
Fortunately, the spell was as easy as it sounded, and by the time Camilla arrived there were several bottles of blood waiting for her. She cautiously sipped from the first, then drank thirstily as her burns healed. When she was back to herself, she bowed to Amara. "My thanks, Mistress. May I hope to know why you changed your mind?"
Amara smiled sadly. "I still don't LIKE vampires. I'm not sure how much I trust either you or Antoine. I'm not sure that I believe anything that's been told to me. But I'm not going to deny that vampires are people, and I can't just let people suffer or die if I have the power to save them. Which, apparently, I do. But don't call me Mistress. My name is Amara."
Just then Antoine entered the room carrying an egg. "It was exactly where Rose said it would be," he commented as he set it on the floor. It shook. "And it seems to be hatching," he added unnecessarily as the shell cracked. A reptilian snout appeared, followed soon afterward by the rest of the baby dragon. It looked around the room, and then with a "MEEP!" it headed for Amara.
Camilla laughed. "So now your army is two vampires, a tiger thrall, a precog, and a 5 minute old baby dragon. We should have no trouble taking out a 3,000 year old sorcerer with thousands of ghosts, vampires, and other undead at his command and the ability to conjure more any time they are needed. Not to mention the special forces in the army that are all lycanthropes."
Antoine nodded and turned to her. "Well, my lady, that war that you joked about earlier has begun. May fortune favor the underdog."
Round Element: Ms. Exposition- Rose
"...like something only partly of mankind...” spoken by Rose to Camilla.
Author's Note. I really should have remembered about CMO's mod, since I had favorited it when he first announced at simlogical that it was finished.. Thank you for reminding me. Also, if it's not obvious, the crystal ball is the crystal ball computer on an OMSP and without the pedestal/ desk, although the one on the end table is joninmobile's crystal ball table light.
Author's Note. I really should have remembered about CMO's mod, since I had favorited it when he first announced at simlogical that it was finished.. Thank you for reminding me. Also, if it's not obvious, the crystal ball is the crystal ball computer on an OMSP and without the pedestal/ desk, although the one on the end table is joninmobile's crystal ball table light.
I am Ghost. My husband is sidneydoj. I post, he downloads, and I wanted to keep my post count.
Group for Avatar Makers* Funny Stories *2017 Yearbook
#36
19th Jun 2015 at 9:35 AM
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Just gotta put the finishing touches on and my entry should be up sometime today
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#37
19th Jun 2015 at 4:10 PM
Posts: 218
Mine will be up when I get back from work.
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#38
19th Jun 2015 at 8:12 PM
Last edited by Letcupcake : 20th Jun 2015 at 11:10 PM.
Posts: 166
Story Title: The Linessis Chronicles
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 1.277 Words // 21 Pictures
Round Element: Mr./Mrs. Exposition
Synopsis & Recap: Nova wakes up with no memories. In a world full of magic, who can she thrust?
Bonus: "What are you, the narrator?"
"Guys, I think she's waking up!" Said someone.
"Hey Nova, are you ok?" Asked a stronger voice.
Before I opened my eyes, I went back in my memories. The last thing I remember? Nothing. Just blank.
"NOVA!?" Someone shouted.
Nova... So that is my name. That's when I opened my eyes. I looked around and saw three smiling faces looking towards me. They looked about 18. The first one was a girl. She had green hair and brown eyes. She was the only girl apart from me. The second was a boy with blue hair and playful green eyes. The third one was very handsome, I admit. He had fiery red hair and brown eyes.
I was sitting down on the floor of a very dark room. I had no idea what was going on.
"Shut up Arlo!" Said the girl, while playfully punching the guy with blue hair. "Nova, you got us worried."
I didn't know what to say. They seemed to know me...
"Kali, stop worrying the girl! Let her breathe!" Said the guy with red hair. "So how are you feeling Nova?"
Let's get this straight, I thought. Then I stood up.
"I'm sorry. Who are you?" I asked, reluctantly
"Ha! Nova, even in coma doesn't lose her sense of humor!" Said who I thought was Arlo.
"No, I'm serious. Who are you?" I asked again.
"Nova. What is the last thing you remember?" The girl said.
"Nothing. Just that I'm here now." I answered
The guy with the red hair brushed my hair with his fingers. I don't know him. Who he think he was?! I don't know what happened then. But when I looked again, he was 5 meters away with a surprised look on his face.
"Jax! What are you doing! HOW DO YOU THINK SHE WOULD REACT, HUM?! Leave!"
Then 'Jax' left with a sad look on his face.
"How would 'I' react?" I quoted her
"You sort of have a explosive personality. It's in your blood." Said the girl, smiling. "Let's make introductions then. I'm Kali and this is my brother Arlo." She pointed to the guy with blue hair. "You're Nova, and that was Jax who just left."
"Ok. But that doesn't explain why he flew 5 meters away!"
"That's because you can move things without touching them." This time, Arlo answered.
"Like telekinesis?"
"Exactly like telekinesis."
"How do I have telekinesis?"
"Nobody knows. Some people are born with diferent kinesis. Or magic if you prefer." Kali answered. "I have geokinesis, Arlo has hydrokinesis and Jax has pyrokinesis."
"That means..."
"I can control the minerals underground. Arlo can control water and Jax, fire."
"Ok. Last question for now. Why did I lose my memory. What happened?"
"We were ambushed by the Federation and you hit your head pretty bad."
"Why would the 'Federation' ambush us? And what is the 'Federation'?"
"Federation is one of the main kingdoms in this land. Linessis is the how we call this world." She made and invisible bow in the air." They are ranging war against the Republic. But neither will ever win without destroying the whole of Linesssis. Unless one of them uses us, people born with magic. So now, the Federation and the Republic are on a race to see who gets more 'wizards', as they call."
"What are you, the narrator?" I joked
Arlo laughed and Kali smiled.
"Do you want to go your fabulous room, your majesty?" Arlo said handing me over his hand.
"I shall accept it, brave knight!" I took he's hand.
Kali couldn't hold it any longer. She burst out laughing.
"You know you have a boyfriend, right?
"Um... No I don't. Who is he?"
"Jax."
Oh Really?! He is a jerk, but at least he is cute! I thought.
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We went through dark corridors with many exits, like maze. Turning here and there, I wondered if I would ever find my way through here. That's when I realized we were on an abandoned building. Oh yeah, I remembered we're refugees.
The next turn, a door appeared. Arlo opened it.
"Home sweet home." He said.
It was a relatively light room, compared to the corridors. That was pretty much the only 'nice' thing about it. The curtains were ripped to pieces, the floorboard creaked, the door was falling apart, there was a dead animal smell...
"It's nice..." I said.
"Good thing you like it." I didn't notice but Jax was there.
Awkward. I literally blew him off. But my mind got off it when I saw a mirror. I looked in it and saw a short girl with dark hair looking at me.
"Oh. That's how I look?"
"Yes. And I find you very beautiful." My 'boyfriend' answered.
"Is he like that ALL the time?" I asked.
"Yup." Kali answered, rolling her eyes.
I took my time to look at myself in the mirror. I had really dark black hair and grey-ish eyes. My face was round, my nose was small and my eyes big. My body was slim and agile.
That got me wondering...
"How old am I again?" I asked
"17, you're the youngest." Arlo quickly answered.
"Oh ok." How much does he know about me. That was kind of creepy. Maybe he liked me...
I looked over at one bed, just the matress. That looked really comfortable. I yawned and went to sleep right there on that old bed.
The first dream I had, I was a young child, about 7 years old. I was playing with a boy that also had black hair. He looked like me. I also saw a man and a woman arguing about something.
A new dream took place. I saw myself running from some people chasing me. By my side were Arlo, Jax and Kali. We were running through an abandoned library, and I was making books fall on the guys chasing us and Jax was setting the books on fire. I was beautiful.
Then the dream changed. I was at a house. I could feel that I was about 14 years old. I was talking to a woman. She told me to come with her. I refused. Then we started arguing.
I said I would go and never come back. She told me she didn't care. So I packed my stuff and left the house.
One last time the dream changed. This time, I was on my present self. A woman, the same from the last dream, was standing in front of me. She looked relieved.
"Hello, Nova." She said.
"Hello." I chose the safe answer.
"I think is time for you to come home, sweetie." The woman said.
"This is just a dream. My dream. You can't tell me what to do!"
"Of course I can. I'm your mother."
"What?"
"I've seen that you lost your memories. What lies are those people filling you with now?"
"But this is just a dream! How can you be talking to me?"
"I have onerokinesis. I can manipulate dreams. I do think is time for you to come home now."
"Where is home? And why should I thrust you?"
"Home is with me and your brother." I had a brother? "And I'm answering your question with another question: why should you thrust them? How can you be sure they are not lying?"
"I- I can't" I admitted, sadly.
"Find me. Search for the Oak Tree. We'll meet you there. You have until tomorrow night to come. I won't give you this opportunity again. Ask about it to your 'friends'. They know of it."
She started to fade.
"Wait! Please don't go!"
"Goodbye, child."
And then, I woke up.
Round Element: Mrs. Exposition - Kali
Author's Note - Please tell me if there is anything missing or wrong so I can fix it before the dead-line!
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 1.277 Words // 21 Pictures
Round Element: Mr./Mrs. Exposition
Synopsis & Recap: Nova wakes up with no memories. In a world full of magic, who can she thrust?
Bonus: "What are you, the narrator?"
"Guys, I think she's waking up!" Said someone.
"Hey Nova, are you ok?" Asked a stronger voice.
Before I opened my eyes, I went back in my memories. The last thing I remember? Nothing. Just blank.
"NOVA!?" Someone shouted.
Nova... So that is my name. That's when I opened my eyes. I looked around and saw three smiling faces looking towards me. They looked about 18. The first one was a girl. She had green hair and brown eyes. She was the only girl apart from me. The second was a boy with blue hair and playful green eyes. The third one was very handsome, I admit. He had fiery red hair and brown eyes.
I was sitting down on the floor of a very dark room. I had no idea what was going on.
"Shut up Arlo!" Said the girl, while playfully punching the guy with blue hair. "Nova, you got us worried."
I didn't know what to say. They seemed to know me...
"Kali, stop worrying the girl! Let her breathe!" Said the guy with red hair. "So how are you feeling Nova?"
Let's get this straight, I thought. Then I stood up.
"I'm sorry. Who are you?" I asked, reluctantly
"Ha! Nova, even in coma doesn't lose her sense of humor!" Said who I thought was Arlo.
"No, I'm serious. Who are you?" I asked again.
"Nova. What is the last thing you remember?" The girl said.
"Nothing. Just that I'm here now." I answered
The guy with the red hair brushed my hair with his fingers. I don't know him. Who he think he was?! I don't know what happened then. But when I looked again, he was 5 meters away with a surprised look on his face.
"Jax! What are you doing! HOW DO YOU THINK SHE WOULD REACT, HUM?! Leave!"
Then 'Jax' left with a sad look on his face.
"How would 'I' react?" I quoted her
"You sort of have a explosive personality. It's in your blood." Said the girl, smiling. "Let's make introductions then. I'm Kali and this is my brother Arlo." She pointed to the guy with blue hair. "You're Nova, and that was Jax who just left."
"Ok. But that doesn't explain why he flew 5 meters away!"
"That's because you can move things without touching them." This time, Arlo answered.
"Like telekinesis?"
"Exactly like telekinesis."
"How do I have telekinesis?"
"Nobody knows. Some people are born with diferent kinesis. Or magic if you prefer." Kali answered. "I have geokinesis, Arlo has hydrokinesis and Jax has pyrokinesis."
"That means..."
"I can control the minerals underground. Arlo can control water and Jax, fire."
"Ok. Last question for now. Why did I lose my memory. What happened?"
"We were ambushed by the Federation and you hit your head pretty bad."
"Why would the 'Federation' ambush us? And what is the 'Federation'?"
"Federation is one of the main kingdoms in this land. Linessis is the how we call this world." She made and invisible bow in the air." They are ranging war against the Republic. But neither will ever win without destroying the whole of Linesssis. Unless one of them uses us, people born with magic. So now, the Federation and the Republic are on a race to see who gets more 'wizards', as they call."
"What are you, the narrator?" I joked
Arlo laughed and Kali smiled.
"Do you want to go your fabulous room, your majesty?" Arlo said handing me over his hand.
"I shall accept it, brave knight!" I took he's hand.
Kali couldn't hold it any longer. She burst out laughing.
"You know you have a boyfriend, right?
"Um... No I don't. Who is he?"
"Jax."
Oh Really?! He is a jerk, but at least he is cute! I thought.
_______________________________________________________________
We went through dark corridors with many exits, like maze. Turning here and there, I wondered if I would ever find my way through here. That's when I realized we were on an abandoned building. Oh yeah, I remembered we're refugees.
The next turn, a door appeared. Arlo opened it.
"Home sweet home." He said.
It was a relatively light room, compared to the corridors. That was pretty much the only 'nice' thing about it. The curtains were ripped to pieces, the floorboard creaked, the door was falling apart, there was a dead animal smell...
"It's nice..." I said.
"Good thing you like it." I didn't notice but Jax was there.
Awkward. I literally blew him off. But my mind got off it when I saw a mirror. I looked in it and saw a short girl with dark hair looking at me.
"Oh. That's how I look?"
"Yes. And I find you very beautiful." My 'boyfriend' answered.
"Is he like that ALL the time?" I asked.
"Yup." Kali answered, rolling her eyes.
I took my time to look at myself in the mirror. I had really dark black hair and grey-ish eyes. My face was round, my nose was small and my eyes big. My body was slim and agile.
That got me wondering...
"How old am I again?" I asked
"17, you're the youngest." Arlo quickly answered.
"Oh ok." How much does he know about me. That was kind of creepy. Maybe he liked me...
I looked over at one bed, just the matress. That looked really comfortable. I yawned and went to sleep right there on that old bed.
The first dream I had, I was a young child, about 7 years old. I was playing with a boy that also had black hair. He looked like me. I also saw a man and a woman arguing about something.
A new dream took place. I saw myself running from some people chasing me. By my side were Arlo, Jax and Kali. We were running through an abandoned library, and I was making books fall on the guys chasing us and Jax was setting the books on fire. I was beautiful.
Then the dream changed. I was at a house. I could feel that I was about 14 years old. I was talking to a woman. She told me to come with her. I refused. Then we started arguing.
I said I would go and never come back. She told me she didn't care. So I packed my stuff and left the house.
One last time the dream changed. This time, I was on my present self. A woman, the same from the last dream, was standing in front of me. She looked relieved.
"Hello, Nova." She said.
"Hello." I chose the safe answer.
"I think is time for you to come home, sweetie." The woman said.
"This is just a dream. My dream. You can't tell me what to do!"
"Of course I can. I'm your mother."
"What?"
"I've seen that you lost your memories. What lies are those people filling you with now?"
"But this is just a dream! How can you be talking to me?"
"I have onerokinesis. I can manipulate dreams. I do think is time for you to come home now."
"Where is home? And why should I thrust you?"
"Home is with me and your brother." I had a brother? "And I'm answering your question with another question: why should you thrust them? How can you be sure they are not lying?"
"I- I can't" I admitted, sadly.
"Find me. Search for the Oak Tree. We'll meet you there. You have until tomorrow night to come. I won't give you this opportunity again. Ask about it to your 'friends'. They know of it."
She started to fade.
"Wait! Please don't go!"
"Goodbye, child."
And then, I woke up.
Round Element: Mrs. Exposition - Kali
Author's Note - Please tell me if there is anything missing or wrong so I can fix it before the dead-line!
#39
19th Jun 2015 at 10:57 PM
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#40
19th Jun 2015 at 11:18 PM
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20th Jun 2015 at 12:24 AM
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Story Title: Anne Arbor
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 2,469 Words / 20 Pictures
Round Element: Non-Human Human: Pretty much the whole town.
Synopsis: The Garrets are a family of sorcerers living in Anne Arbor, a town that's well known for its rich history with the supernatural. Like every family, they've had a lot of problems that they've been able to bounce back from. But how well will they be able to stick together in wake of a terrible tragedy?
CHAPTER 1: WELCOME TO ANNE ARBOR
- Brandon’s POV
If I had a penny for every ghost story and urban legend I’ve heard that links back to Anne Arbor, I could afford to leave this place behind for good. Though I guess it’s not really fair to call them “Urban Legends”. That makes it sound like none of the stories are true.
Nobody’s exactly sure when it started, but for as long as even the oldest citizens can remember, this town has had a long and intimate history with the occult. For centuries, it’s been the birthplace for most of the world’s supernatural population. Witches, ghosts, vampires, werewolves, beings who are like something only partly of mankind. You name the creature, and odds are, it came from Anne Arbor. It’s where we’ve all been born. And it’s where most of us die. The ones who get out usually find that their kind aren’t very well received by humanity.
Humans have never really warmed up to the idea of sharing the world with other sentient beings. Sorcerers are usually okay since there’s no way to physically distinguish them from humans, but if you’re anything else, well…good luck starting a life outside of Anne Arbor. For most of us, this town is our only safe haven. It’s our home and our prison. Our protector and our oppressor.
My name is Brandon Garret. I’m a 28 years old. I come from a long line of sorcerers. And I’m a detective who specializes in Supernatural crimes.
Like any town, Anne Arbor isn’t devoid of crime. But, unlike any other town, the crimes here can get a little….weird. Just last week, I had to bust a fairy for siphoning his children’s blood and selling it to vampires. Before that, I’d spent a whole month tracking down a serial killing ghost who possessed the bodies of his victims. And then there was that turf war between the goblins and the trolls….no those aren’t just some stupid gang nickname. I’m talking about real, short, angry, green skinned goblins. And real, 8 foot tall, trolls.
Sure it’s a dangerous job, but somebody’s gotta do it. And, honestly, I love every minute of it; even when stuff’s trying to kill me. I just wish that it hadn’t come in between me and my family. My parents were never too keen on the idea of me being a cop. My mom thought it was too dangerous. And as for my old man, well…the two of us never really saw eye to eye to begin with. I could never really live up to his standards the way my younger siblings can. I wasn’t smart like my sister and brother. I wasn’t an athlete like my youngest brother. And I was never very good at magic until I was an adult. As a result, he’s had me labeled as a lazy underachiever ever since I was twelve.
But I think what the real problem is my Dad’s general dislike of Police Officers. When I was too young to really remember, he was a pretty well-known crime boss. He never went into details about any of the awful things he did but, more than twenty years after he quit, most of the town still fears him.
Seeing as we’ve always been at each others' throats, it wouldn’t be very farfetched to believe that I became a cop (and a damn good one) just to spite him….well that’s because it’s totally what I did. The first thing I did after barely passing high school was enrolling in the Anne Arbor Police Academy. Long story short: We got into a big fight; ended up saying things that I’m sure neither of us regrets; and now we haven’t spoken in ten years. On the bright side, I don’t have to deal with him judging every move I make. On the downside, I don’t really get to see my mom and my siblings as often as I’d like to. But it’s a relatively small price to pay as long as that man is out of my life.
- Aries’ POV
“Aries” she called “Aries wake up, dear.”
I’ve always appreciated how my mom comes to wake me every morning. Between Brandon’s ten year feud with Dad, and all the other crap my family’s gone through over the years, I don’t know how she always stays so pleasant. But I’d rather wake up to her gentle voice than an alarm clock any day.
“Good morning, Mom” I yawned “What’s up?”
She smiled “What’s ‘up’, is that it’s almost noon and you and the boys are still asleep. Do me a favor and wake them up while I get started on breakfast.”
I sighed as I slowly began to sit up. I started to ask her if I could sleep in for a few more minutes but by the time my eyes had fully adjusted to the light, she was already out the door. I debated with myself over I should just go back to sleep but I decided against it. If all three of us weren’t down stairs in the next few minutes, she’d probably send Dad up to get us. Last time she did that, he thought it’d be funny to wake me up with an infestation curse. Wanting to avoid spending another morning picking roaches out of my bra, I used what little energy I had to get out of bed and make my way to Trent’s room.
“Trent” I called as I entered his room “Come on. Mom’s making breakfast.”
Trent let out a small groan and rolled over in his bed, making no effort to get up.
“I’m serious. Get up!” I demanded
“Go away” he grumbled before burying his head under his pillow
“Don’t be a brat, Trent.” I sighed “It’s almost noon”
He raised his hand and with a gentle wave, the door behind me flew open.
“Get out!” He groaned
I rolled my eyes and walked over to his bed. I tried to tap him on the shoulder but he swatted my hand away.
“Look, kid. Either you get up now or Dad’ll be up here next. You remember what he did to you last time, right?”
“Fine, I’m up.” He said as he reluctantly got out of bed “But I thought Mom said he’s not allowed to turn us into ferrets again.”
I laughed and patted my little brother on the head “Yeah, because everyone in this house is so good at doing what they’re told. Hurry up and go to the dining room before you see just how well he listens to Mom. I’ll be down after I wake up Micah.”
“Good luck with that.” He said as he walked away “When I talked to him last night, he said he felt another vision coming.”
I stood outside of Micah’s door and prepared for the absolute worst. Part of me wanted to just let him sleep. But the new meds he’s on should make his visions a little easier to handle, so maybe today won’t be so bad for him.
There he was, sound asleep. If only his dreams were as peaceful as he looked right now. I guess a little explanation is in order. My brother, Micah, is a Seer. Seers are Sorcerers who occasionally have visions of the future in their sleep. It’d be a pretty helpful gift to have if it weren’t for all of the drawbacks that come with it, like having absolutely no control over when or how often you have one and feeling completely drained when it’s over.
From what Micah’s told me, the whole thing is horrible experience. He’ll experience headaches and nausea hours before one even happens. When he’s asleep, the visions play in his brain like a dream….a jumbled and confusing mess of a dream. He always says that making sense out of his visions is like trying to watch 4 television shows at the same time. All of the events play at once and overlap each other. He’s usually unable to make one out until it’s already come true. And on the very rare times he’s able to predict something before it happens, he usually ends up missing a lot of key details.
“Micah” I whispered “Wake up.”
No response. I got closer to his bed and lightly shook him.
“Micah, come on. I know you had a rough night but your doctor said you gotta stop lying in bed all day.”
His eyes slowly opened. He’s had these powers for three years and the yellow eyes that come with them still give me the creeps. He breathed heavy, as if he just finished running a marathon, and started to sit up.
He looked at me with a weak smile
“Hey sis” His voice was so quiet it could have almost passed for a whisper
“Hey. How bad was it?”
He shrugged “The meds helped a little. I still feel like shit but it’s not as bad.”
“You okay to get up for breakfast. It smells like Mom’s making your favorite.”
I watched as he struggled to get up. He was able to get his feet on the ground but as soon as he tried to stand, he went crashing back down onto his bed. That’s an improvement. Usually, he can barely even lift his head for the first hour, let alone almost stand.
“Micah, don’t push yourself. I’ll bring the food to you.”
“No. No, it’s cool.” He said, trying to stand again “I feel better.”
He managed to stand up this time. I was still a little worried but seeing him walk around his room made me feel slightly better.
He smiled “See? I’m okay”
I still remember the day his powers manifested. He was thirteen. We were all eating dinner when he ran down the stairs in a panic. He was crying too hard to speak in a coherent sentence. The only word we could get out of him was “eyes”. But it’s not like we needed much of an explanation, as we almost immediately noticed his, previously blue, eyes glow bright yellow.
The first couple of visions were pure torture. He used to wake up screaming in pain at least twice a week. They’ve gotten easier since then, usually happening only once or twice a month now, and the new medication his doctor gave him helps even more. But I can tell it still takes a big toll out of him.
Micah needed help getting down the stairs but after that. He insisted on getting to the table by himself though, saying he didn’t “want Dad to see me so messed up.”
Dad lowered his newspaper to look at Micah. Mom stared out of the corner of her eye while she made breakfast.
“You look like hell, son.” Dad said bluntly
“Sorry, sir” he mumbled
“Was it another vision?” Mom asked
“Yes”
“I thought the meds were supposed to take care of that.” Dad complained
“It’s not a cure. They just help take some of the pain away.” Micah answered
Dad grumbled something about “good for nothing doctors” before retreating back to his newspaper.
Breakfast was stressful, to say the least. We could all tell Dad was frustrated, and it’s usually best to keep quiet when he’s in one of his moods. The awkward silence was finally broken when Dad finished eating.
“Aries, do you have any plans today?”
“No sir.” I said
“Good. I need you to watch the boys while your mother and I go out to run a few errands today.”
“Watch us? Even if she did have plans today, why would you need somebody to ‘watch’ us? I’m thirteen, I don’t need a babysitter” Trent complained
“Kids who still sleep with their parents when they have a nightmare don’t get to play the age card.” I scoffed
Trent held his hand out but before he could curse me, Dad rolled the newspaper and smacked him on the back of the head with it. Whatever spell he was about to cast was disrupted by Dad’s hit making his breakfast explode in his face. Micah and I howled with laughter. Mom just rolled her eyes and grabbed a napkin as she started to wipe the food off of Trent’s face.
“Why does every meal have to turn into a battlefield?” she asked with a sigh
Mom was busy cleaning Trent while Dad was busy scolding him. I was the only one who noticed the worried look on Micah’s face.
“What’s wrong?” I asked
“Nothing…at least I don’t think.” He shook his head “I just have this really bad feeling.”
“Does it have to do with your vision?”
“Yeah. I’m starting to remember bits and pieces of it. A black van….an old warehouse…..and Brandon?”
Mom and Dad both stopped what they were doing to look at Micah.
“Did you say Brandon?” Mom asked “You saw Brandon in your vision?”
“Just a short glimpse. I don’t know what he was doing but it looked he was here.”
Trent beamed “Brandon’s coming? Awesome! We haven’t seen him since Christmas!”
Dad groaned and started reading his paper again. I sighed. It’s been ten years since they got in that big fight and they’re both too proud to apologize to each other. I don’t blame Dad for being upset though. It’s not easy, knowing your oldest child will go to such incredible lengths to piss you off.
“Miranda, let the boy clean himself. We’re running late.” Dad said
“Fine” Mom said, going over Trent’s face one last time with a wash cloth “I wish I was better at cleaning spells. I could have taken care of this in no time. Just go take a shower.”
Trent did as he was told and walked to the bathroom, leaving a trail of syrup and scrambled eggs behind him. Mom gave Micah and I quick hugs before making her way to the front door.
“That vision of yours. What more do you know about it?” Dad asked Micah “Brandon hasn’t set foot in this house in ten years. Why’s he coming back now?”
“I don’t know. I’m Sorry.”
Dad sighed “I hope I’m not home when he gets here.”
He grabbed his car keys from the rack and started to walk out of the kitchen
“Where are you guys going?” I asked
“Don’t worry about it. We’ll be back in a few hours.”
For a split second I could see a worried, almost scared, look on Dad’s face. I wanted to say something. I should have said something. But I didn’t. I just watched him follow Mom out the door. I don’t know if it was my fault for letting them leave. Or all of our faults for not taking Micah’s vision more seriously. But to this day I still try to think of ways things could have turned out differently. Maybe if we had just thought things over some more, this wouldn’t have become the worst day of our lives.
This story has lurked in the back of my head for a VERY long time and has gone through MANY changes before reaching this point? How many changes, you ask? I have versions of this family in TS2, TS3, and TS4 (In TS3's case, there are two versions) and the only thing consistent about all of them is that they involve estranged siblings with magical powers.
Sorry if this entry was a little dull. I wanted to spend the first chapter setting up the world and the characters before we got deeper into the more exciting parts of living in a town full supernatural beings.
I'm home for the rest of the day (7:30 pm here) so let me know if there's anything I need to change before the round is over.
The Receptacle still lives!
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 2,469 Words / 20 Pictures
Round Element: Non-Human Human: Pretty much the whole town.
Synopsis: The Garrets are a family of sorcerers living in Anne Arbor, a town that's well known for its rich history with the supernatural. Like every family, they've had a lot of problems that they've been able to bounce back from. But how well will they be able to stick together in wake of a terrible tragedy?
CHAPTER 1: WELCOME TO ANNE ARBOR
- Brandon’s POV
If I had a penny for every ghost story and urban legend I’ve heard that links back to Anne Arbor, I could afford to leave this place behind for good. Though I guess it’s not really fair to call them “Urban Legends”. That makes it sound like none of the stories are true.
Nobody’s exactly sure when it started, but for as long as even the oldest citizens can remember, this town has had a long and intimate history with the occult. For centuries, it’s been the birthplace for most of the world’s supernatural population. Witches, ghosts, vampires, werewolves, beings who are like something only partly of mankind. You name the creature, and odds are, it came from Anne Arbor. It’s where we’ve all been born. And it’s where most of us die. The ones who get out usually find that their kind aren’t very well received by humanity.
Humans have never really warmed up to the idea of sharing the world with other sentient beings. Sorcerers are usually okay since there’s no way to physically distinguish them from humans, but if you’re anything else, well…good luck starting a life outside of Anne Arbor. For most of us, this town is our only safe haven. It’s our home and our prison. Our protector and our oppressor.
My name is Brandon Garret. I’m a 28 years old. I come from a long line of sorcerers. And I’m a detective who specializes in Supernatural crimes.
Like any town, Anne Arbor isn’t devoid of crime. But, unlike any other town, the crimes here can get a little….weird. Just last week, I had to bust a fairy for siphoning his children’s blood and selling it to vampires. Before that, I’d spent a whole month tracking down a serial killing ghost who possessed the bodies of his victims. And then there was that turf war between the goblins and the trolls….no those aren’t just some stupid gang nickname. I’m talking about real, short, angry, green skinned goblins. And real, 8 foot tall, trolls.
Sure it’s a dangerous job, but somebody’s gotta do it. And, honestly, I love every minute of it; even when stuff’s trying to kill me. I just wish that it hadn’t come in between me and my family. My parents were never too keen on the idea of me being a cop. My mom thought it was too dangerous. And as for my old man, well…the two of us never really saw eye to eye to begin with. I could never really live up to his standards the way my younger siblings can. I wasn’t smart like my sister and brother. I wasn’t an athlete like my youngest brother. And I was never very good at magic until I was an adult. As a result, he’s had me labeled as a lazy underachiever ever since I was twelve.
But I think what the real problem is my Dad’s general dislike of Police Officers. When I was too young to really remember, he was a pretty well-known crime boss. He never went into details about any of the awful things he did but, more than twenty years after he quit, most of the town still fears him.
Seeing as we’ve always been at each others' throats, it wouldn’t be very farfetched to believe that I became a cop (and a damn good one) just to spite him….well that’s because it’s totally what I did. The first thing I did after barely passing high school was enrolling in the Anne Arbor Police Academy. Long story short: We got into a big fight; ended up saying things that I’m sure neither of us regrets; and now we haven’t spoken in ten years. On the bright side, I don’t have to deal with him judging every move I make. On the downside, I don’t really get to see my mom and my siblings as often as I’d like to. But it’s a relatively small price to pay as long as that man is out of my life.
- Aries’ POV
“Aries” she called “Aries wake up, dear.”
I’ve always appreciated how my mom comes to wake me every morning. Between Brandon’s ten year feud with Dad, and all the other crap my family’s gone through over the years, I don’t know how she always stays so pleasant. But I’d rather wake up to her gentle voice than an alarm clock any day.
“Good morning, Mom” I yawned “What’s up?”
She smiled “What’s ‘up’, is that it’s almost noon and you and the boys are still asleep. Do me a favor and wake them up while I get started on breakfast.”
I sighed as I slowly began to sit up. I started to ask her if I could sleep in for a few more minutes but by the time my eyes had fully adjusted to the light, she was already out the door. I debated with myself over I should just go back to sleep but I decided against it. If all three of us weren’t down stairs in the next few minutes, she’d probably send Dad up to get us. Last time she did that, he thought it’d be funny to wake me up with an infestation curse. Wanting to avoid spending another morning picking roaches out of my bra, I used what little energy I had to get out of bed and make my way to Trent’s room.
“Trent” I called as I entered his room “Come on. Mom’s making breakfast.”
Trent let out a small groan and rolled over in his bed, making no effort to get up.
“I’m serious. Get up!” I demanded
“Go away” he grumbled before burying his head under his pillow
“Don’t be a brat, Trent.” I sighed “It’s almost noon”
He raised his hand and with a gentle wave, the door behind me flew open.
“Get out!” He groaned
I rolled my eyes and walked over to his bed. I tried to tap him on the shoulder but he swatted my hand away.
“Look, kid. Either you get up now or Dad’ll be up here next. You remember what he did to you last time, right?”
“Fine, I’m up.” He said as he reluctantly got out of bed “But I thought Mom said he’s not allowed to turn us into ferrets again.”
I laughed and patted my little brother on the head “Yeah, because everyone in this house is so good at doing what they’re told. Hurry up and go to the dining room before you see just how well he listens to Mom. I’ll be down after I wake up Micah.”
“Good luck with that.” He said as he walked away “When I talked to him last night, he said he felt another vision coming.”
I stood outside of Micah’s door and prepared for the absolute worst. Part of me wanted to just let him sleep. But the new meds he’s on should make his visions a little easier to handle, so maybe today won’t be so bad for him.
There he was, sound asleep. If only his dreams were as peaceful as he looked right now. I guess a little explanation is in order. My brother, Micah, is a Seer. Seers are Sorcerers who occasionally have visions of the future in their sleep. It’d be a pretty helpful gift to have if it weren’t for all of the drawbacks that come with it, like having absolutely no control over when or how often you have one and feeling completely drained when it’s over.
From what Micah’s told me, the whole thing is horrible experience. He’ll experience headaches and nausea hours before one even happens. When he’s asleep, the visions play in his brain like a dream….a jumbled and confusing mess of a dream. He always says that making sense out of his visions is like trying to watch 4 television shows at the same time. All of the events play at once and overlap each other. He’s usually unable to make one out until it’s already come true. And on the very rare times he’s able to predict something before it happens, he usually ends up missing a lot of key details.
“Micah” I whispered “Wake up.”
No response. I got closer to his bed and lightly shook him.
“Micah, come on. I know you had a rough night but your doctor said you gotta stop lying in bed all day.”
His eyes slowly opened. He’s had these powers for three years and the yellow eyes that come with them still give me the creeps. He breathed heavy, as if he just finished running a marathon, and started to sit up.
He looked at me with a weak smile
“Hey sis” His voice was so quiet it could have almost passed for a whisper
“Hey. How bad was it?”
He shrugged “The meds helped a little. I still feel like shit but it’s not as bad.”
“You okay to get up for breakfast. It smells like Mom’s making your favorite.”
I watched as he struggled to get up. He was able to get his feet on the ground but as soon as he tried to stand, he went crashing back down onto his bed. That’s an improvement. Usually, he can barely even lift his head for the first hour, let alone almost stand.
“Micah, don’t push yourself. I’ll bring the food to you.”
“No. No, it’s cool.” He said, trying to stand again “I feel better.”
He managed to stand up this time. I was still a little worried but seeing him walk around his room made me feel slightly better.
He smiled “See? I’m okay”
I still remember the day his powers manifested. He was thirteen. We were all eating dinner when he ran down the stairs in a panic. He was crying too hard to speak in a coherent sentence. The only word we could get out of him was “eyes”. But it’s not like we needed much of an explanation, as we almost immediately noticed his, previously blue, eyes glow bright yellow.
The first couple of visions were pure torture. He used to wake up screaming in pain at least twice a week. They’ve gotten easier since then, usually happening only once or twice a month now, and the new medication his doctor gave him helps even more. But I can tell it still takes a big toll out of him.
Micah needed help getting down the stairs but after that. He insisted on getting to the table by himself though, saying he didn’t “want Dad to see me so messed up.”
Dad lowered his newspaper to look at Micah. Mom stared out of the corner of her eye while she made breakfast.
“You look like hell, son.” Dad said bluntly
“Sorry, sir” he mumbled
“Was it another vision?” Mom asked
“Yes”
“I thought the meds were supposed to take care of that.” Dad complained
“It’s not a cure. They just help take some of the pain away.” Micah answered
Dad grumbled something about “good for nothing doctors” before retreating back to his newspaper.
Breakfast was stressful, to say the least. We could all tell Dad was frustrated, and it’s usually best to keep quiet when he’s in one of his moods. The awkward silence was finally broken when Dad finished eating.
“Aries, do you have any plans today?”
“No sir.” I said
“Good. I need you to watch the boys while your mother and I go out to run a few errands today.”
“Watch us? Even if she did have plans today, why would you need somebody to ‘watch’ us? I’m thirteen, I don’t need a babysitter” Trent complained
“Kids who still sleep with their parents when they have a nightmare don’t get to play the age card.” I scoffed
Trent held his hand out but before he could curse me, Dad rolled the newspaper and smacked him on the back of the head with it. Whatever spell he was about to cast was disrupted by Dad’s hit making his breakfast explode in his face. Micah and I howled with laughter. Mom just rolled her eyes and grabbed a napkin as she started to wipe the food off of Trent’s face.
“Why does every meal have to turn into a battlefield?” she asked with a sigh
Mom was busy cleaning Trent while Dad was busy scolding him. I was the only one who noticed the worried look on Micah’s face.
“What’s wrong?” I asked
“Nothing…at least I don’t think.” He shook his head “I just have this really bad feeling.”
“Does it have to do with your vision?”
“Yeah. I’m starting to remember bits and pieces of it. A black van….an old warehouse…..and Brandon?”
Mom and Dad both stopped what they were doing to look at Micah.
“Did you say Brandon?” Mom asked “You saw Brandon in your vision?”
“Just a short glimpse. I don’t know what he was doing but it looked he was here.”
Trent beamed “Brandon’s coming? Awesome! We haven’t seen him since Christmas!”
Dad groaned and started reading his paper again. I sighed. It’s been ten years since they got in that big fight and they’re both too proud to apologize to each other. I don’t blame Dad for being upset though. It’s not easy, knowing your oldest child will go to such incredible lengths to piss you off.
“Miranda, let the boy clean himself. We’re running late.” Dad said
“Fine” Mom said, going over Trent’s face one last time with a wash cloth “I wish I was better at cleaning spells. I could have taken care of this in no time. Just go take a shower.”
Trent did as he was told and walked to the bathroom, leaving a trail of syrup and scrambled eggs behind him. Mom gave Micah and I quick hugs before making her way to the front door.
“That vision of yours. What more do you know about it?” Dad asked Micah “Brandon hasn’t set foot in this house in ten years. Why’s he coming back now?”
“I don’t know. I’m Sorry.”
Dad sighed “I hope I’m not home when he gets here.”
He grabbed his car keys from the rack and started to walk out of the kitchen
“Where are you guys going?” I asked
“Don’t worry about it. We’ll be back in a few hours.”
For a split second I could see a worried, almost scared, look on Dad’s face. I wanted to say something. I should have said something. But I didn’t. I just watched him follow Mom out the door. I don’t know if it was my fault for letting them leave. Or all of our faults for not taking Micah’s vision more seriously. But to this day I still try to think of ways things could have turned out differently. Maybe if we had just thought things over some more, this wouldn’t have become the worst day of our lives.
This story has lurked in the back of my head for a VERY long time and has gone through MANY changes before reaching this point? How many changes, you ask? I have versions of this family in TS2, TS3, and TS4 (In TS3's case, there are two versions) and the only thing consistent about all of them is that they involve estranged siblings with magical powers.
Sorry if this entry was a little dull. I wanted to spend the first chapter setting up the world and the characters before we got deeper into the more exciting parts of living in a town full supernatural beings.
I'm home for the rest of the day (7:30 pm here) so let me know if there's anything I need to change before the round is over.
The Receptacle still lives!
#42
20th Jun 2015 at 4:29 AM
Posts: 293
Quote: Originally posted by Letcupcake
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Memory Games A Sims 3 Thriller Mystery
#43
20th Jun 2015 at 5:49 AM
Posts: 218
Title: Avalanche
Genre: Science Fiction
Word/Picture Count: 2497 / 18
Round Element: Mr. Exposition
Synopsis: The Jovians came to Earth to escape slavery and genocide; instead, they found a more subtle form of both waiting inside their gilded cage. When tension between the humans and descendents of the refugees is higher than ever, a chance encounter between two wanted criminals championing the Jovian cause will have repercussions far beyond what either side could have imagined.
“... initially placed the death toll at two hundred, though as the futility of the rescue efforts becomes more apparent, authorities believe most of the nearly five hundred Jovians inside the hospital could be lost...”
Two days had passed, and it was still impossible to turn on a radio without hearing about what had become known as “the Anchorage incident.” The first-class lounge car of the 6:28 to Fairbanks was no exception. The dozen or so passengers with me in that room were a grim lot as the correspondent reiterated the known details of the event: the landslide that came without warning, the gas leak and fire that followed, the collapse that buried the hospital's lower levels after the first rescue team made their way inside. Nature's wrath, they said, but there were whispers of something else...
“Is this seat taken?”
One of the other passengers, an attractive, well-dressed woman, indicated the open barstool next to mine. I noticed her hours ago, when I first came aboard, but paid her little heed then. Her beauty and bearing made her memorable, and memorable people were rarely dangerous. I shook my head. “Help yourself.”
She sat, eying the glass of whiskey before me with interest. “Let me guess: Yukon straight rye? You have good taste.” A smile directed at the bartender brought him over. “The Yukon for me, Jasper, and another round for my friend.”
The bartender hurried away to fetch the drinks, and I studied my companion with new appreciation. She turned her smile back to me. “I'm Shinobu Sato.”
“Gael de Garmo.” It was as good a name as any, and today, it was mine.
“... joined now by Hiro Hashimoto of Denali University...”
I took a drink to camouflage the twitch of surprise I felt at hearing that name on the radio. I was familiar with the work of Hiro Hashimoto. A historian, and known advocate for Jovian rights, it seemed odd for him to comment on geologic events.
“Hashimoto?” Shinobu repeated, sounding somewhat confused herself. “That's interesting.”
I gave a noncommittal grunt and examined my glass.
“... fourth incident of this type in three years,” came the soft, somber voice of Hiro Hashimoto.
“You said something similar after the collapse of the Mackenzie uranium mine,” said the correspondent. “Can you elaborate?”
“The official report said Mackenzie mine was 'tragic accident.' Before then, the same thing was said about the so-called natural disasters at Beaufort Glacier and Mount Juneau. Each of those events occurred at a location with significant civic or economic value to the Jovians. Why?”
“He makes it sound like someone's targeting Jovians, doesn't he?” Shinobu asked. “If so, then whoever is behind this has the cunning of Himalia Prime and the ruthlessness of Avalanche.”
As if on cue, the correspondent made the same observation, with the references to Himalia Prime and Avalanche listed among several other notable attacks on Jovians in the last decade. I took another drink instead of responding, and vaguely wondered what I had done to incur Shinobu's attention.
“Jovians have always been targets,” replied Hashimoto. “One must only look at their history to know this. Three hundred years ago, humans explored the moons of Jupiter for the first time and encountered the Jovians. We were surprised at how much they resembled us, yet were different, like something only partly of mankind. This gentle, peace-loving folk welcomed us; they learned our language, taught us much about their worlds, and allowed us access to their abundant natural resources. I fear it was our presence that attracted the Raalkin warlords a century later. They had little interest in Earth, but Jupiter's moons, particularly the Jovian homeworld of Ganymede, were another matter.”
Hashimoto went on for several minutes in this manner, and the lounge car was treated to a textbook summary of the Raalkin war, the desolation of Ganymede, the Jovian exodus to Earth, and the promise of rights and dignity for the refugees that had yet to arrive two hundred years later. Several other passengers looked uncomfortable. Two left. It was fashionable, I knew, for people of society to have their pet causes, but even among them it was bold to speak of Jovians as equals.
“... and then, of course, everything changed when humans discovered the extraordinary properties of Jovian blood,” continued Hashimoto. “They are nearly immune to the negative effects of radiation, which proved invaluable to the medical community. When provided with a serum derived from Jovian blood, a cancer patient can withstand doses of radiation therapy that would otherwise kill a human. The developed world has not seen a single death from cancer in fifty years.”
I noticed he conveniently left out exactly how the remarkable healing properties of Jovian blood were discovered. A final swig finished off the contents of my glass, and I considered the one brought for me at Shinobu's request. It was excellent whiskey, but we were only thirty minutes from Fairbanks, and I needed a clear head.
“And what,” said Hashimoto, his voice rising for the first time, “do they receive as thanks for this service? We deny them reproductive rights and force them to pay the blood tax, and what's worse-”
I never found out what was worse. The rest of Hashimoto's declaration was lost under the demand of a man further down the bar. “Turn it off, Jasper,” he said, his words slightly slurred. “I'm sick of hearing about those goddam moon men.”
An undercurrent of murmuring passed through the car; “moon men” was not a term one usually heard in polite conversation. Anger flashed in Shinobu's eyes, anger that did not entirely disappear when she gave me here most charming smile yet. “Can I trouble you? I've had pin come loose on the back of my dress, and I can't reach it.” She turned away, and touched the lace that skirted the base of her alabaster neck. “Up here somewhere.”
I leaned forward, searching for the offending pin, when she suddenly turned again, putting our faces only inches apart. Before I could move back, she grasped my arm and leaned so her lips were brushing against my ear. “I know what you are,” she whispered, “and you're in terrible danger. Kiss me.”
Perhaps the whiskey had finally gotten the better of me, but I followed the order. I kissed her long and deep, certainly beyond the bounds of propriety for two strangers in the first-class lounge. Tempting as she was, I focused on her words rather than her sensuality. I know what you are. I doubted that, but if she perceived a threat, it was worth the trouble to find out why.
She broke away and stood up, flashing a coy grin as she moved to the exit. “You coming?”
I followed her into the hallway. As soon as the door to the lounge closed behind us, her arms were around my neck and she was kissing me again. It startled me how much her strength exceeded my own. She's strong, or you're weaker than you realized. Maybe both.
Shinobu pulled me down the hallway, occasionally knocking into a wall or window, until we reached another door. She took one hand off of me long enough to turn the doorknob, and when it swung open, the momentum of our passion carried us into a small washroom. Once the door was closed behind us, she released me and secured the lock. “Sorry about that,” she said. “I had to get you out of there, and fast. We don't have much time.”
“Don't be,” I said, still somewhat stunned. “And why? What's happening?”
“Harvesters.” She spoke rather nonchalantly of the universally-despised brotherhood of mercenaries, and became very interested in the panel between the mirror and door frame. “Come on, Rocky,” she muttered. “Where did you put it?”
“Harvesters?” I repeated.
“Ah!” She slid her fingers beneath the panel and began to pry it loose. “Yes, Harvesters. They're on the train. Your false papers won't save you – they're testing blood. Everyone's.”
“I don't know what you're talking abou-”
“Yes, you do.” She paused her work to give me an appraising look. “You're good, Gael, but I'm better. If they find out you're impersonating a human, they'll kill you, no matter how much your blood is worth.”
She was good, and there was no point in arguing that which had already been revealed. “How do you know about the Harvesters?”
The panel gave way, and Shinobu let out a cry of triumph as she retrieved the spoils of her search: a long, thin, ancient-looking sword. “The same way I knew about this: I had someone on the inside.” She lifted the pocketwatch affixed to her dress. “Let's move. Our ride should be here any moment.”
She drove the hilt of the sword through the window, and demanded that I climb out through it and get to the roof. “I'll be right behind you,” she assured me. The thought was hardly a comfort; I didn't even know her, and within minutes she had gone from kissing me to waving a sword in my face. What choice did I have?
They were waiting for us.
There were two of them, each clad in the standard-issue Harvester black robes. One carried an ax, the other, a single pistol. It was this one I came the closest to fearing. Only Harvesters were allowed to carry guns, and only for a very specific purpose. I was that purpose – me, and the people like me.
A whistle sounded, and I saw a smaller, faster train coming up alongside ours. Must be the ride, I concluded. This was confirmed when Shinobu made the leap to its roof and beckoned to me. The invitation was not extended to our challengers, though they came anyway. I suspected they were about to make the same mistake I did earlier, and underestimate Shinobu Sato.
“Stand down!” Shinobu cried, brandishing her sword. “Stand down, or I will kill you!”
The one with the ax made the first move. Shinobu, with the effortless grace of a master, shoved me out of harm's way and sidestepped our attacker, letting the deadly edge glance harmlessly off her blade. She shouted something at me, but the only thing I heard between the howl of the wind and the clang of metal on metal was “hatch.” I was halfway to the hatch on the car behind us when two shots rang out. I heard one ricochet off the combatants' blades; the other grazed the collar of my coat. Too close, I thought, and knelt beside the hatch. I doubted I would be so lucky next time.
Halfway through the second turn of the wheel, the hatch opened from the inside. I found myself looking into the dark eyes of a brown-skinned teenaged boy. Before either of us could react, another shot rang out, and blinding pain erupted from my shoulder. You're in trouble now, moon man, was the last thought before darkness took me.
For a minute, maybe two, I knew nothing but pain. When my vision returned, I found myself lying on a cold, hard floor. The young man from before was beside me, hands pressed to my wound. Nearby was Shinobu, panting and blood-spattered. Another boy, a mirror image of the first, was staring at her with his mouth agape. He found his words only after a shake of his head. “You're not Rocky.”
“Rocky's dead. They found him before I did.” She studied the boy, her brow furrowed as if recalling some long-lost memory. “You're one of the Horn twins, aren't you? Dana?”
“Henry,” the boy corrected.
“I'm Dana,” said my attendant.
Shinobu smiled. “Forgive me. I haven't seen you in, oh, perhaps twelve years. I'm Shinobu Sato. Your uncle Massaud was... was a good friend.”
“And still is, I hope.”
A man emerged from the shadows, and Shinobu dropped her sword. He looked at me, then at her. Something between hope and caution was in his eyes, as if he was not entirely sure what sort of greeting he could expect. “Picking up illegal aliens again, I see.”
“I had to,” she explained. “We were compromised. Rocky... and Gael, well, he just happened to be there. Oh, Massaud...”
He closed the distance between them and embraced her. “I can't wait to hear why you were on the train in the first place, when you're supposed to be safe in San Francisco.”
“Who else is here?”
“Henry Senior is driving, and Kosta went to finish off the rest of your Harvester friends.”
“Why is he bleeding so much?” asked Dana. “I can't make it stop!”
The man released Shinobu and approached us. “Harvesters lace their bullets with selenium dichloride. It prevents Jovian blood from clotting. Henry, get the tetra.” He knelt down beside me. “Massaud Kosalim. You met my nephews. Gael, is it?”
“Is this really the time for introductions?” I said through gritted teeth.
“No, I suppose not,” he agreed.
“He's a Jovian?” exclaimed Dana.
Massaud nodded. “One of the most human-like I've seen. You must be, what, a fourth-generation?”
“A pure third,” I answered. Massaud whistled, and even Shinobu looked impressed. Henry joined our party on the floor, holding a syringe filled with dark liquid. Tetra, the street name for the drug that countered selenium dichloride, was highly regulated and nearly impossible for ordinary citizens to obtain. “Who are you people?”
Massaud gave me a wry smile as Henry passed him the syringe. “We're friends of Hiro Hashimoto. This should hold you together until we get you to him.”
Before he could give me the injection, the door to the car opened. A hulking figure, two heads taller than a normal man and thrice as broad, ducked inside. “It's done,” he announced. “They...”
His voice trailed off when he saw me. Something flashed in his lone gray eye. Something unmistakable. Something worse than the copious amounts of blood draining from my body.
Recognition.
Only three people knew my name, and that I belonged to it. Two of them, I killed. The last place I ever expected to see the third was in a boxcar full of Jovian sympathizers.
“You.” We both said it.
He lunged at me with a cry, knocking aside Massaud and the twins to seize me by the neck and pin me to the wall. “Stay back, all of you!”
“Kosta, wha... why?” Shinobu stammered.
“He's a Jovian terrorist.” He tightened his grip and snarled. “You know him as Avalanche.”
Round Element: The Round Element character, Mr. Exposition, is Hiro Hashimoto.
Bonus: "... like something only partly of mankind" is spoken by Hiro Hashimoto when he speaks of humanity's first encounter with Jovians
Genre: Science Fiction
Word/Picture Count: 2497 / 18
Round Element: Mr. Exposition
Synopsis: The Jovians came to Earth to escape slavery and genocide; instead, they found a more subtle form of both waiting inside their gilded cage. When tension between the humans and descendents of the refugees is higher than ever, a chance encounter between two wanted criminals championing the Jovian cause will have repercussions far beyond what either side could have imagined.
I know in the past, it's been okay to add the (non-weighted) element of background music to the story. Please enjoy Nameless by Miracle of Sound as you read the opening chapter of my saga.
“... initially placed the death toll at two hundred, though as the futility of the rescue efforts becomes more apparent, authorities believe most of the nearly five hundred Jovians inside the hospital could be lost...”
Two days had passed, and it was still impossible to turn on a radio without hearing about what had become known as “the Anchorage incident.” The first-class lounge car of the 6:28 to Fairbanks was no exception. The dozen or so passengers with me in that room were a grim lot as the correspondent reiterated the known details of the event: the landslide that came without warning, the gas leak and fire that followed, the collapse that buried the hospital's lower levels after the first rescue team made their way inside. Nature's wrath, they said, but there were whispers of something else...
“Is this seat taken?”
One of the other passengers, an attractive, well-dressed woman, indicated the open barstool next to mine. I noticed her hours ago, when I first came aboard, but paid her little heed then. Her beauty and bearing made her memorable, and memorable people were rarely dangerous. I shook my head. “Help yourself.”
She sat, eying the glass of whiskey before me with interest. “Let me guess: Yukon straight rye? You have good taste.” A smile directed at the bartender brought him over. “The Yukon for me, Jasper, and another round for my friend.”
The bartender hurried away to fetch the drinks, and I studied my companion with new appreciation. She turned her smile back to me. “I'm Shinobu Sato.”
“Gael de Garmo.” It was as good a name as any, and today, it was mine.
“... joined now by Hiro Hashimoto of Denali University...”
I took a drink to camouflage the twitch of surprise I felt at hearing that name on the radio. I was familiar with the work of Hiro Hashimoto. A historian, and known advocate for Jovian rights, it seemed odd for him to comment on geologic events.
“Hashimoto?” Shinobu repeated, sounding somewhat confused herself. “That's interesting.”
I gave a noncommittal grunt and examined my glass.
“... fourth incident of this type in three years,” came the soft, somber voice of Hiro Hashimoto.
“You said something similar after the collapse of the Mackenzie uranium mine,” said the correspondent. “Can you elaborate?”
“The official report said Mackenzie mine was 'tragic accident.' Before then, the same thing was said about the so-called natural disasters at Beaufort Glacier and Mount Juneau. Each of those events occurred at a location with significant civic or economic value to the Jovians. Why?”
“He makes it sound like someone's targeting Jovians, doesn't he?” Shinobu asked. “If so, then whoever is behind this has the cunning of Himalia Prime and the ruthlessness of Avalanche.”
As if on cue, the correspondent made the same observation, with the references to Himalia Prime and Avalanche listed among several other notable attacks on Jovians in the last decade. I took another drink instead of responding, and vaguely wondered what I had done to incur Shinobu's attention.
“Jovians have always been targets,” replied Hashimoto. “One must only look at their history to know this. Three hundred years ago, humans explored the moons of Jupiter for the first time and encountered the Jovians. We were surprised at how much they resembled us, yet were different, like something only partly of mankind. This gentle, peace-loving folk welcomed us; they learned our language, taught us much about their worlds, and allowed us access to their abundant natural resources. I fear it was our presence that attracted the Raalkin warlords a century later. They had little interest in Earth, but Jupiter's moons, particularly the Jovian homeworld of Ganymede, were another matter.”
Hashimoto went on for several minutes in this manner, and the lounge car was treated to a textbook summary of the Raalkin war, the desolation of Ganymede, the Jovian exodus to Earth, and the promise of rights and dignity for the refugees that had yet to arrive two hundred years later. Several other passengers looked uncomfortable. Two left. It was fashionable, I knew, for people of society to have their pet causes, but even among them it was bold to speak of Jovians as equals.
“... and then, of course, everything changed when humans discovered the extraordinary properties of Jovian blood,” continued Hashimoto. “They are nearly immune to the negative effects of radiation, which proved invaluable to the medical community. When provided with a serum derived from Jovian blood, a cancer patient can withstand doses of radiation therapy that would otherwise kill a human. The developed world has not seen a single death from cancer in fifty years.”
I noticed he conveniently left out exactly how the remarkable healing properties of Jovian blood were discovered. A final swig finished off the contents of my glass, and I considered the one brought for me at Shinobu's request. It was excellent whiskey, but we were only thirty minutes from Fairbanks, and I needed a clear head.
“And what,” said Hashimoto, his voice rising for the first time, “do they receive as thanks for this service? We deny them reproductive rights and force them to pay the blood tax, and what's worse-”
I never found out what was worse. The rest of Hashimoto's declaration was lost under the demand of a man further down the bar. “Turn it off, Jasper,” he said, his words slightly slurred. “I'm sick of hearing about those goddam moon men.”
An undercurrent of murmuring passed through the car; “moon men” was not a term one usually heard in polite conversation. Anger flashed in Shinobu's eyes, anger that did not entirely disappear when she gave me here most charming smile yet. “Can I trouble you? I've had pin come loose on the back of my dress, and I can't reach it.” She turned away, and touched the lace that skirted the base of her alabaster neck. “Up here somewhere.”
I leaned forward, searching for the offending pin, when she suddenly turned again, putting our faces only inches apart. Before I could move back, she grasped my arm and leaned so her lips were brushing against my ear. “I know what you are,” she whispered, “and you're in terrible danger. Kiss me.”
Perhaps the whiskey had finally gotten the better of me, but I followed the order. I kissed her long and deep, certainly beyond the bounds of propriety for two strangers in the first-class lounge. Tempting as she was, I focused on her words rather than her sensuality. I know what you are. I doubted that, but if she perceived a threat, it was worth the trouble to find out why.
She broke away and stood up, flashing a coy grin as she moved to the exit. “You coming?”
I followed her into the hallway. As soon as the door to the lounge closed behind us, her arms were around my neck and she was kissing me again. It startled me how much her strength exceeded my own. She's strong, or you're weaker than you realized. Maybe both.
Shinobu pulled me down the hallway, occasionally knocking into a wall or window, until we reached another door. She took one hand off of me long enough to turn the doorknob, and when it swung open, the momentum of our passion carried us into a small washroom. Once the door was closed behind us, she released me and secured the lock. “Sorry about that,” she said. “I had to get you out of there, and fast. We don't have much time.”
“Don't be,” I said, still somewhat stunned. “And why? What's happening?”
“Harvesters.” She spoke rather nonchalantly of the universally-despised brotherhood of mercenaries, and became very interested in the panel between the mirror and door frame. “Come on, Rocky,” she muttered. “Where did you put it?”
“Harvesters?” I repeated.
“Ah!” She slid her fingers beneath the panel and began to pry it loose. “Yes, Harvesters. They're on the train. Your false papers won't save you – they're testing blood. Everyone's.”
“I don't know what you're talking abou-”
“Yes, you do.” She paused her work to give me an appraising look. “You're good, Gael, but I'm better. If they find out you're impersonating a human, they'll kill you, no matter how much your blood is worth.”
She was good, and there was no point in arguing that which had already been revealed. “How do you know about the Harvesters?”
The panel gave way, and Shinobu let out a cry of triumph as she retrieved the spoils of her search: a long, thin, ancient-looking sword. “The same way I knew about this: I had someone on the inside.” She lifted the pocketwatch affixed to her dress. “Let's move. Our ride should be here any moment.”
She drove the hilt of the sword through the window, and demanded that I climb out through it and get to the roof. “I'll be right behind you,” she assured me. The thought was hardly a comfort; I didn't even know her, and within minutes she had gone from kissing me to waving a sword in my face. What choice did I have?
They were waiting for us.
There were two of them, each clad in the standard-issue Harvester black robes. One carried an ax, the other, a single pistol. It was this one I came the closest to fearing. Only Harvesters were allowed to carry guns, and only for a very specific purpose. I was that purpose – me, and the people like me.
A whistle sounded, and I saw a smaller, faster train coming up alongside ours. Must be the ride, I concluded. This was confirmed when Shinobu made the leap to its roof and beckoned to me. The invitation was not extended to our challengers, though they came anyway. I suspected they were about to make the same mistake I did earlier, and underestimate Shinobu Sato.
“Stand down!” Shinobu cried, brandishing her sword. “Stand down, or I will kill you!”
The one with the ax made the first move. Shinobu, with the effortless grace of a master, shoved me out of harm's way and sidestepped our attacker, letting the deadly edge glance harmlessly off her blade. She shouted something at me, but the only thing I heard between the howl of the wind and the clang of metal on metal was “hatch.” I was halfway to the hatch on the car behind us when two shots rang out. I heard one ricochet off the combatants' blades; the other grazed the collar of my coat. Too close, I thought, and knelt beside the hatch. I doubted I would be so lucky next time.
Halfway through the second turn of the wheel, the hatch opened from the inside. I found myself looking into the dark eyes of a brown-skinned teenaged boy. Before either of us could react, another shot rang out, and blinding pain erupted from my shoulder. You're in trouble now, moon man, was the last thought before darkness took me.
For a minute, maybe two, I knew nothing but pain. When my vision returned, I found myself lying on a cold, hard floor. The young man from before was beside me, hands pressed to my wound. Nearby was Shinobu, panting and blood-spattered. Another boy, a mirror image of the first, was staring at her with his mouth agape. He found his words only after a shake of his head. “You're not Rocky.”
“Rocky's dead. They found him before I did.” She studied the boy, her brow furrowed as if recalling some long-lost memory. “You're one of the Horn twins, aren't you? Dana?”
“Henry,” the boy corrected.
“I'm Dana,” said my attendant.
Shinobu smiled. “Forgive me. I haven't seen you in, oh, perhaps twelve years. I'm Shinobu Sato. Your uncle Massaud was... was a good friend.”
“And still is, I hope.”
A man emerged from the shadows, and Shinobu dropped her sword. He looked at me, then at her. Something between hope and caution was in his eyes, as if he was not entirely sure what sort of greeting he could expect. “Picking up illegal aliens again, I see.”
“I had to,” she explained. “We were compromised. Rocky... and Gael, well, he just happened to be there. Oh, Massaud...”
He closed the distance between them and embraced her. “I can't wait to hear why you were on the train in the first place, when you're supposed to be safe in San Francisco.”
“Who else is here?”
“Henry Senior is driving, and Kosta went to finish off the rest of your Harvester friends.”
“Why is he bleeding so much?” asked Dana. “I can't make it stop!”
The man released Shinobu and approached us. “Harvesters lace their bullets with selenium dichloride. It prevents Jovian blood from clotting. Henry, get the tetra.” He knelt down beside me. “Massaud Kosalim. You met my nephews. Gael, is it?”
“Is this really the time for introductions?” I said through gritted teeth.
“No, I suppose not,” he agreed.
“He's a Jovian?” exclaimed Dana.
Massaud nodded. “One of the most human-like I've seen. You must be, what, a fourth-generation?”
“A pure third,” I answered. Massaud whistled, and even Shinobu looked impressed. Henry joined our party on the floor, holding a syringe filled with dark liquid. Tetra, the street name for the drug that countered selenium dichloride, was highly regulated and nearly impossible for ordinary citizens to obtain. “Who are you people?”
Massaud gave me a wry smile as Henry passed him the syringe. “We're friends of Hiro Hashimoto. This should hold you together until we get you to him.”
Before he could give me the injection, the door to the car opened. A hulking figure, two heads taller than a normal man and thrice as broad, ducked inside. “It's done,” he announced. “They...”
His voice trailed off when he saw me. Something flashed in his lone gray eye. Something unmistakable. Something worse than the copious amounts of blood draining from my body.
Recognition.
Only three people knew my name, and that I belonged to it. Two of them, I killed. The last place I ever expected to see the third was in a boxcar full of Jovian sympathizers.
“You.” We both said it.
He lunged at me with a cry, knocking aside Massaud and the twins to seize me by the neck and pin me to the wall. “Stay back, all of you!”
“Kosta, wha... why?” Shinobu stammered.
“He's a Jovian terrorist.” He tightened his grip and snarled. “You know him as Avalanche.”
Round Element: The Round Element character, Mr. Exposition, is Hiro Hashimoto.
Bonus: "... like something only partly of mankind" is spoken by Hiro Hashimoto when he speaks of humanity's first encounter with Jovians
"Passion makes no accommodation for self-preservation."
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20th Jun 2015 at 7:30 AM
Last edited by elphaba2 : 20th Jun 2015 at 10:45 AM.
Posts: 41
Story Title: Isolation
Genre: Science Fiction
Word/Picture Count: 1,754 words; 12 pictures
Round Element: Mr. Exposition
Synopsis: When the crew of The Providence becomes stranded after an accident, they are forced to make difficult decisions and sacrifices in order to survive.
One
Audra’s body awakened before she did. Her ears were alert for the sound of a baby’s whimper or quiet snoring in the dark bedroom, her torso light and empty without the weight of his tiny form clinging to her side. She blinked twice and her eyes flitted to the window and the dim, distant stars, and then she remembered.
It had been over a month and she still wasn’t used to waking up here. The training had been brutal. There were long nights that blended into long days with no sleep. But they at least could anticipate the rising and falling of the sun, a marker for the beginning and the end of each day. Without a sun, the days were defined by clocks, timers, and schedules.
Audra sighed and took a few more moments to stare at the scratched metal ceiling and gather herself before she finally kicked the sheets from her body and sat up.
Once dressed, she made her way to the lounge. Riona and Leo were already at the table with breakfast. Leo’s shift in the cockpit had just ended, Riona’s was soon to begin. They were likely equally tired, though it was harder to tell with Riona. She was the one who dressed business casual onboard, makeup and all, while the others lounged in their T-shirts - anything to have some semblance of a normal routine, Audra supposed.
Audra fixed herself a packet of microwave oatmeal and a cup of coffee and joined the two of them at the narrow table.
“Morning,” she greeted. Leo nodded wearily in acknowledgement.
“Sleep well? Or at all?” Riona asked, idly stirring her coffee. Audra shrugged her shoulders and leaned her elbows into the table, yawning.
“No worse than usual.” She took a bite of the stale oatmeal and washed it down with a sip of bitter coffee. “And you?”
Riona shrugged. “Fine. No dreams, though. Does that happen to you?”
“What?”
“Not having dreams in space. Happens every time I’m out here.”
“I have dreams,” Audra said.
Riona frowned and stirred her coffee. “I don’t. There’s something strange about being out here. It’s like my body forgets how to be a person.”
Leo snorted, his arms folded across his chest. “It’s in your head. Maybe you’re cracking up.”
Riona nudged him. “Shut up. You can’t tell me being out here doesn’t have some effect on you.”
“It does. But it’s all part of the job. I just don’t talk about it.”
“No, instead you drown your sorrows in cheap liquor.” He nudged her back, and she laughed and slapped his arm. He jabbed her in the side, eliciting a half-yelp half-laugh from her, and she gave him a gentle shove.
Audra rolled her eyes, though she was smiling. “Jesus you two, get a room.” Before either of them could reply, the door hissed open, and in walked Ethan, combing his fingers through dark strands of hair. He waved to the group and prepared a cup of tea, taking a seat beside Audra.
“Morning, Ethan,” she said. He simply nodded, sipping at his tea. After a few moments he cleared his throat.
“So. I have good news. Jerrod’s found a shortcut, and if all goes according to plan we should arrive at Dido in just a few weeks.” Audra smiled a little. That was no time at all – and if they took the shortcut both ways, they could return months early. “I might actually be home for Tristan’s birthday,” she murmured.
Riona didn’t seem thrilled. She looked up from her coffee and frowned in uncertainty, her black almond-shaped eyes narrowed. “The shortcut—did he clear it with headquarters first?”
“Well obviously not, it would be weeks before we heard back.”
Riona shook her head. “It’s not protocol. What kind of shortcut could you have found, anyway?”
Ethan huffed and leaned back in his seat. “We swing around Delta H. and that propels us directly to Dido. We get there in a couple weeks, find out what’s happening with the colony, we’re in, we’re out, we go home.”
Riona paused. “I still think we should wait for approval from ISEA.”
“Relax. Jerrod knows what he’s doing.”
“That’s not the point, the route wasn’t approved. How do you know that we won’t end up wasting fuel?”
“We won’t. That’s the reason we’re doing this. The less time we have to spend navigating around all the moons, the less fuel we use. This route puts us on a direct trajectory for Dido.”
Riona sighed. “I just don’t think it’s a good idea.”
“You don’t have to.”
“If this doesn’t work and we end up somewhere we’re not supposed to be, or we end up wasting our backup resources, I don’t think ISEA is going to be too happy.” She stirred her coffee.
“Look, it wasn’t my idea. Talk it over with the captain if you’re so concerned.” The room went silent.
Audra stirred her coffee. “So—it’ll be a few weeks?”
“Most likely.”
She nodded. “Doesn’t sound so bad. If the colony is in trouble then we need to be there to help as soon as possible.” She hesitated. “Speaking of—have we heard anything?”
Ethan shook his head solemnly, and Audra cursed. “It just doesn’t make sense… No distress signal, no updates. ”
“It could’ve been an equipment failure,” he pointed out. “It’s possible that they’re perfectly fine and they just can’t reach us... Or there might’ve been an emergency. There’s no way to know, and that’s why we’re in a hurry.”
Audra nodded and went back to eating her breakfast. Riona stood a few moments later and dumped the remainder of her coffee into the sink, quietly exiting the room. Eventually the remaining three split up to return to their bunks.
The metal doors hissed open and slid shut behind Audra as she entered the corridor, her boots clanking against the grid covering the floor. The Providence was an old ship built long ago for a mission that was never executed. The interior was mostly lined in sheets and panels of aluminum and steel, the floor in some places padded with rubber mats. It reminded Audra of the factory where her father had worked when she was a child. It certainly wasn’t homey and it lacked the attractive, sleek look of some of the newer models, but in a way it felt soft of quaint, like an old house. Once in her bunk again, she sank into the chair at her desk and booted her computer to begin her work.
Days passed and things stayed relatively quiet as they had been. Jerrod alerted headquarters to their change of plans, though it was likely that they would arrive at Dido well before they heard back. He and Ethan spent a few days tweaking the route to ensure that they arrived at the right coordinates. It seemed things were going according to plan, and Dido was visible in the distance, growing ever closer. With any luck, they’d be there soon.
In the meantime, there was little for Audra to do other than go over research and keep tabs on the probe data feeds for Dido’s current conditions. The monsoonal season had passed and the weather had been clear, so she didn’t anticipate any issues with the landing – so far. But there was a small cloud formation over one of the coasts near base camp that concerned her, and she pulled up some satellite images to get a closer look, hoping this wasn't the start of a hurricane. She spent a few minutes glancing over the images, but her mind started to wander, and she found herself pulling up a tab for messages from home.
But there was nothing. Her heart sank. She wondered what was taking so long, when she would get another update on Tristan and maybe a photo of him. She ached to hear his laughter and babbling, to feel his tiny body next to her at night, safe and sound. She knew his grandparents would care for him and smother him with affection. But it devastated her to think that it could be months or years before she saw him again depending on the outcome of the mission. Perhaps he’d already be in school by the time she returned. She hoped he would remember her.
She was still poring over old messages when a thunderous bang filled her ears. It resonated through the floor and through her body. She grabbed the edge of her desk for stability with wide eyes, but before she could react, there was another bang and she was flung into the wall with a startled yelp.
Her skull buzzed from the impact, ears ringing with the reverberation of hard bones against steel. Gray filled her vision. The room was spinning, she was floating. But there was a strangely familiar lurch in her stomach and she realized that her body was no longer touching the floor. She blinked and found herself staring up at her ankles and the ceiling as a wave of nausea rolled over her. The computer chair drifted past her and bounced against the wall in the periphery of her vision.
The artificial gravity was off.
Shit, shit… She struggled to right herself with a kick of her legs, but that only sent her into a roll. She reached out just in time to catch herself as she tumbled into the wall, and then she rolled backwards again, this time with her face turned to the floor. The emergency alarms screamed to life. Finally, finally, her legs tapped the wall behind her and she managed to right herself, panting and fighting the urge to throw up. The light flickered. It was so tempting to just let go, she was so dizzy, but she kicked again and finally made her way to the door as the light blinked out completely.
The corridor was dark, but the emergency lights at either end had activated and began a steady blink. Aside from the barking of the alarms, there was an unnerving quiet. Audra tentatively kicked and drifted into the hall, away from the safety of her room. There was a hiss as the doors at the end of the corridor opened.
“Suit up, Adams, we’re evacuating.” Ethan kicked off from the wall and managed to half-walk to the center of the corridor where Audra was slowly drifting.
“E-ethan, what’s going on?”
“Asteroid strike, we need to get out.”
“Is everyone—”
“I don’t know. Come on, we need to get out.”
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Round Element Character:
Genre: Science Fiction
Word/Picture Count: 1,754 words; 12 pictures
Round Element: Mr. Exposition
Synopsis: When the crew of The Providence becomes stranded after an accident, they are forced to make difficult decisions and sacrifices in order to survive.
One
Audra’s body awakened before she did. Her ears were alert for the sound of a baby’s whimper or quiet snoring in the dark bedroom, her torso light and empty without the weight of his tiny form clinging to her side. She blinked twice and her eyes flitted to the window and the dim, distant stars, and then she remembered.
It had been over a month and she still wasn’t used to waking up here. The training had been brutal. There were long nights that blended into long days with no sleep. But they at least could anticipate the rising and falling of the sun, a marker for the beginning and the end of each day. Without a sun, the days were defined by clocks, timers, and schedules.
Audra sighed and took a few more moments to stare at the scratched metal ceiling and gather herself before she finally kicked the sheets from her body and sat up.
Once dressed, she made her way to the lounge. Riona and Leo were already at the table with breakfast. Leo’s shift in the cockpit had just ended, Riona’s was soon to begin. They were likely equally tired, though it was harder to tell with Riona. She was the one who dressed business casual onboard, makeup and all, while the others lounged in their T-shirts - anything to have some semblance of a normal routine, Audra supposed.
Audra fixed herself a packet of microwave oatmeal and a cup of coffee and joined the two of them at the narrow table.
“Morning,” she greeted. Leo nodded wearily in acknowledgement.
“Sleep well? Or at all?” Riona asked, idly stirring her coffee. Audra shrugged her shoulders and leaned her elbows into the table, yawning.
“No worse than usual.” She took a bite of the stale oatmeal and washed it down with a sip of bitter coffee. “And you?”
Riona shrugged. “Fine. No dreams, though. Does that happen to you?”
“What?”
“Not having dreams in space. Happens every time I’m out here.”
“I have dreams,” Audra said.
Riona frowned and stirred her coffee. “I don’t. There’s something strange about being out here. It’s like my body forgets how to be a person.”
Leo snorted, his arms folded across his chest. “It’s in your head. Maybe you’re cracking up.”
Riona nudged him. “Shut up. You can’t tell me being out here doesn’t have some effect on you.”
“It does. But it’s all part of the job. I just don’t talk about it.”
“No, instead you drown your sorrows in cheap liquor.” He nudged her back, and she laughed and slapped his arm. He jabbed her in the side, eliciting a half-yelp half-laugh from her, and she gave him a gentle shove.
Audra rolled her eyes, though she was smiling. “Jesus you two, get a room.” Before either of them could reply, the door hissed open, and in walked Ethan, combing his fingers through dark strands of hair. He waved to the group and prepared a cup of tea, taking a seat beside Audra.
“Morning, Ethan,” she said. He simply nodded, sipping at his tea. After a few moments he cleared his throat.
“So. I have good news. Jerrod’s found a shortcut, and if all goes according to plan we should arrive at Dido in just a few weeks.” Audra smiled a little. That was no time at all – and if they took the shortcut both ways, they could return months early. “I might actually be home for Tristan’s birthday,” she murmured.
Riona didn’t seem thrilled. She looked up from her coffee and frowned in uncertainty, her black almond-shaped eyes narrowed. “The shortcut—did he clear it with headquarters first?”
“Well obviously not, it would be weeks before we heard back.”
Riona shook her head. “It’s not protocol. What kind of shortcut could you have found, anyway?”
Ethan huffed and leaned back in his seat. “We swing around Delta H. and that propels us directly to Dido. We get there in a couple weeks, find out what’s happening with the colony, we’re in, we’re out, we go home.”
Riona paused. “I still think we should wait for approval from ISEA.”
“Relax. Jerrod knows what he’s doing.”
“That’s not the point, the route wasn’t approved. How do you know that we won’t end up wasting fuel?”
“We won’t. That’s the reason we’re doing this. The less time we have to spend navigating around all the moons, the less fuel we use. This route puts us on a direct trajectory for Dido.”
Riona sighed. “I just don’t think it’s a good idea.”
“You don’t have to.”
“If this doesn’t work and we end up somewhere we’re not supposed to be, or we end up wasting our backup resources, I don’t think ISEA is going to be too happy.” She stirred her coffee.
“Look, it wasn’t my idea. Talk it over with the captain if you’re so concerned.” The room went silent.
Audra stirred her coffee. “So—it’ll be a few weeks?”
“Most likely.”
She nodded. “Doesn’t sound so bad. If the colony is in trouble then we need to be there to help as soon as possible.” She hesitated. “Speaking of—have we heard anything?”
Ethan shook his head solemnly, and Audra cursed. “It just doesn’t make sense… No distress signal, no updates. ”
“It could’ve been an equipment failure,” he pointed out. “It’s possible that they’re perfectly fine and they just can’t reach us... Or there might’ve been an emergency. There’s no way to know, and that’s why we’re in a hurry.”
Audra nodded and went back to eating her breakfast. Riona stood a few moments later and dumped the remainder of her coffee into the sink, quietly exiting the room. Eventually the remaining three split up to return to their bunks.
The metal doors hissed open and slid shut behind Audra as she entered the corridor, her boots clanking against the grid covering the floor. The Providence was an old ship built long ago for a mission that was never executed. The interior was mostly lined in sheets and panels of aluminum and steel, the floor in some places padded with rubber mats. It reminded Audra of the factory where her father had worked when she was a child. It certainly wasn’t homey and it lacked the attractive, sleek look of some of the newer models, but in a way it felt soft of quaint, like an old house. Once in her bunk again, she sank into the chair at her desk and booted her computer to begin her work.
Days passed and things stayed relatively quiet as they had been. Jerrod alerted headquarters to their change of plans, though it was likely that they would arrive at Dido well before they heard back. He and Ethan spent a few days tweaking the route to ensure that they arrived at the right coordinates. It seemed things were going according to plan, and Dido was visible in the distance, growing ever closer. With any luck, they’d be there soon.
In the meantime, there was little for Audra to do other than go over research and keep tabs on the probe data feeds for Dido’s current conditions. The monsoonal season had passed and the weather had been clear, so she didn’t anticipate any issues with the landing – so far. But there was a small cloud formation over one of the coasts near base camp that concerned her, and she pulled up some satellite images to get a closer look, hoping this wasn't the start of a hurricane. She spent a few minutes glancing over the images, but her mind started to wander, and she found herself pulling up a tab for messages from home.
But there was nothing. Her heart sank. She wondered what was taking so long, when she would get another update on Tristan and maybe a photo of him. She ached to hear his laughter and babbling, to feel his tiny body next to her at night, safe and sound. She knew his grandparents would care for him and smother him with affection. But it devastated her to think that it could be months or years before she saw him again depending on the outcome of the mission. Perhaps he’d already be in school by the time she returned. She hoped he would remember her.
She was still poring over old messages when a thunderous bang filled her ears. It resonated through the floor and through her body. She grabbed the edge of her desk for stability with wide eyes, but before she could react, there was another bang and she was flung into the wall with a startled yelp.
Her skull buzzed from the impact, ears ringing with the reverberation of hard bones against steel. Gray filled her vision. The room was spinning, she was floating. But there was a strangely familiar lurch in her stomach and she realized that her body was no longer touching the floor. She blinked and found herself staring up at her ankles and the ceiling as a wave of nausea rolled over her. The computer chair drifted past her and bounced against the wall in the periphery of her vision.
The artificial gravity was off.
Shit, shit… She struggled to right herself with a kick of her legs, but that only sent her into a roll. She reached out just in time to catch herself as she tumbled into the wall, and then she rolled backwards again, this time with her face turned to the floor. The emergency alarms screamed to life. Finally, finally, her legs tapped the wall behind her and she managed to right herself, panting and fighting the urge to throw up. The light flickered. It was so tempting to just let go, she was so dizzy, but she kicked again and finally made her way to the door as the light blinked out completely.
The corridor was dark, but the emergency lights at either end had activated and began a steady blink. Aside from the barking of the alarms, there was an unnerving quiet. Audra tentatively kicked and drifted into the hall, away from the safety of her room. There was a hiss as the doors at the end of the corridor opened.
“Suit up, Adams, we’re evacuating.” Ethan kicked off from the wall and managed to half-walk to the center of the corridor where Audra was slowly drifting.
“E-ethan, what’s going on?”
“Asteroid strike, we need to get out.”
“Is everyone—”
“I don’t know. Come on, we need to get out.”
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Round Element Character:
Ethan
Author's note: Sorry if the round element character thing wasn't very clear. I originally intended to have one of them be the expendable and die during the accident, but I decided last minute that I want that character alive, so I threw in the bit about the colony instead.
Author's note: Sorry if the round element character thing wasn't very clear. I originally intended to have one of them be the expendable and die during the accident, but I decided last minute that I want that character alive, so I threw in the bit about the colony instead.
#45
20th Jun 2015 at 10:39 AM
Posts: 171
Thanks: 14325 in 25 Posts
Story Title: Erosion
Genre: Sci-Fi
Word/Picture Count: 1376/14
Round Element: Not the One
Synopsis & Recap: Secret police from the Fourth Caerulean Commonwealth look for a small cell of rebels supposedly based at Tack Krannert's mining outpost.
In the waning years of pre-galactic history, the Fourth Caerulean Commonwealth comprised the majority of developed planets on the Second Spiral Arm, and enjoyed the wealth and beauty of the fairest of the uncivilized worlds. But rather than following the path of its free and gentle forebears, the Fourth Commonwealth valued prosperity over peace, discipline over democracy, and order above all else.
Utopia Serenea, the capital city, was beautiful to look upon. But scratch away at the gleaming white surface, and underneath you would find some of the darkest corners of humanity. Underground prisons to hide the criminals. Torture chambers to pry secrets from the enemies of the state. And everywhere, the slavery of non-human races.
Paranoia reigned supreme. Only the noblest of families, those loyal to the government, were safe from the prying eyes of OrdSec, the Directorate of Order and Security. Anyone else was subject to arrest, disappearance, and summary execution. Or perhaps worse, a trip to one of the small cells at OrdSec headquarters, where operatives would use every means at their disposal to coerce a confession -- true or not.
Coded transmissions came in daily from the farthest reaches of the Commonwealth, reporting on offenses major, minor or simply imagined. It made no difference. Agents were dispatched to investigate and squash any hint of independence.
"Data obtained from Informant 5128336," said this particular brief accusation. "Terrorist Cell X-11-70, location T-00-YYD, name of commander confirmed as Krannert. Informant 5128336 deceased."
-----
Krannert was a name well known around the mining outpost on Timbok II. The Krannert Shipyards circled high above in orbit, and the bright blue Krannert logo was affixed to every one of the colony's nondescript pre-fab shelters, which were tumbled together around the mine shafts as though they'd been blown there by the planet's stiff winds. Down here, deep below the surface, miners extracted the raw materials needed to power each new starship's massive propulsion system.
Justin Tackalo Krannert -- known as Tack to his friends -- was the CEO and benevolent dictator over the settlement and, through the company he'd inherited, employer of nearly two-thirds of the dusty planet's population.
It was no surprise that he loved the place, and not just because he owned it. He'd been born on the frontier, and raised amidst the independent, hardworking spirit of the fringe worlds. He was almost as much a native of Timbok II as the green-skinned, leaf-headed locals known formally as Tendari, but more colloquially as Sprouts.
His wife was not so well suited for the outpost. He'd met the Lady Patima -- daughter of an aristocratic family, accustomed to high society -- while attending the Commonwealth University. Luckily for all concerned, her nobility manifested itself as an easy sort of grace, rather than the usual snobbery of the capital: if anyone had asked her why she'd come to a dusty, windblown rock at the edge of nowhere, she would have said something appropriately diplomatic about the beauty of untouched nature, and the good hearts of the miners and their families.
She would have left out any comment about the sand in every crevice and the ever-present shriek of shuttle engines and mining equipment. Because Tack loved it here, and she loved him like nothing else in the world.
So much so that she often ended up in his orbital office around lunch time, unpacking a makeshift picnic to share. The fact that there was no sand on the pristine shipyard floors was merely a bonus.
Tack had walked out into the hall with his assistant, as usual, finishing up the last of the morning business before making his way back into the office. This time, he crept slowly up behind the couch, reaching toward Patima's shoulder to try to surprise her with a kiss.
"If you're practicing to be a burglar, I would recommend another course. You'll never succeed in a life of crime with footsteps like that." Her voice was dry as she stopped him in his tracks without turning around. Then she tilted her head back to smile at him. "Hello, love. Are you ready for a break?"
"Absolutely," Tack laughed as he settled in beside her on the sleek white sofa, sandwich in hand. "They’re slave drivers here, every last one of them."
"So I see. And what’s the cause this time? The half-completed silver-sided transport I saw from the shuttle? The design seemed new."
"Ah, that," Geoff said, leaning back and gathering his wife into a comfortable embrace with one arm. "That's for some sort of adventure tourism company on Mandaxia IV. Triple-reinforced transparisteel, so the lunatics inside can see the particle storms up close. But no, I had nothing to do with any actual engineering today. It was all contracts, all the time."
"Work can’t be all fun and games, my love," Patima laughed. "Else someone else would be in charge of the company."
Tack snorted softly and derisively in response. "Some of them already think they are," he drawled. Then he offered his wife an apologetic smile for his suddenly sour mood. "Sorry. Igna’s just been going on about the Commonwealth contracts again. I signed them this morning."
"And are they good contracts?" Patima tucked her leg up beneath her as she nibbled on some fruit.
"Well of course not," Tack said with a bitter laugh. "They’re highway robbery. And the last thing I want to be doing is putting more weaponry into the hands of the Commonwealth Navy. They’re already abusing the power they’ve got, and if they get much bigger, no one’s going to be able to rein them in."
"That’s dangerous talk, darling," Patima cautioned, darting a quick glance around the room. Tack’s office was probably the most private place in the system, but after years in the capital, it was hard to shake the suspicion that everything was overheard. "The Commonwealth Navy is hardly OrdSec. My own family has served in it for generations. It’s an honorable, disciplined--"
"Yes," Tack said, cutting her off. "I know." He stewed silently for a moment, teeth grinding in frustration. "And anyway, it’s not like we have a choice. I’ve got a whole planet full of people to keep employed, and if we’re shut down for treason--"
"Don’t even say that!" Patima stood up, tossing a napkin back to the table with a worried frown. "And don’t think you have to explain yourself to me, of all people. It would be the height of foolishness to do anything to jeopardize your shipyards, or your mines, or your engineers, or your miners, or--"
"Or anyone," Tack reassured her, taking her hand to stop her agitated pacing. "Don’t worry. I'm smarter than I look. I know very well I'm not a hero or a warrior... I'm not even a burglar," he teased her, drawing her in for the kiss he'd missed out on earlier. "So no life of crime for me. I've got to get back to my contracts."
-------
Later that evening, after the miners all back at camp, and the machinery had finally gone quiet for the night, one of the tunnels was still busy. First one person, then another, then another, all headed toward one of the nooks and crannies hidden away in the crystal shafts.
They walked silently past a landing shuttle, where a crop of new employees was gathering up their duffels and heading for a briefing.
Igna Kamiwix, Chief Operating Officer of the Krannert Shipyards, was one of the last to arrive to the resistance meeting. The leader wasn't there yet, so he nodded at the others, silently, before finding his usual place by the wall to wait.
"Hey boss," someone finally piped up.
"Good evening," she said as she pulled off the helmet that had shielded her on her walk through the compound. "Let's get started. We have a lot to discuss."
Up above, one of the newly arrived passengers broke away from the group just long enough to read a brief transmission. It was heavily coded, of course, but even if anyone had happened to catch a glimpse, it wouldn't have meant very much. "Authorized," was all it said.
Round Element: Not the One: Tack Krannert
Bonus: ""I'm not a hero, or a warrior... I'm not even a burglar!": Tack Krannert
Genre: Sci-Fi
Word/Picture Count: 1376/14
Round Element: Not the One
Synopsis & Recap: Secret police from the Fourth Caerulean Commonwealth look for a small cell of rebels supposedly based at Tack Krannert's mining outpost.
In the waning years of pre-galactic history, the Fourth Caerulean Commonwealth comprised the majority of developed planets on the Second Spiral Arm, and enjoyed the wealth and beauty of the fairest of the uncivilized worlds. But rather than following the path of its free and gentle forebears, the Fourth Commonwealth valued prosperity over peace, discipline over democracy, and order above all else.
Utopia Serenea, the capital city, was beautiful to look upon. But scratch away at the gleaming white surface, and underneath you would find some of the darkest corners of humanity. Underground prisons to hide the criminals. Torture chambers to pry secrets from the enemies of the state. And everywhere, the slavery of non-human races.
Paranoia reigned supreme. Only the noblest of families, those loyal to the government, were safe from the prying eyes of OrdSec, the Directorate of Order and Security. Anyone else was subject to arrest, disappearance, and summary execution. Or perhaps worse, a trip to one of the small cells at OrdSec headquarters, where operatives would use every means at their disposal to coerce a confession -- true or not.
Coded transmissions came in daily from the farthest reaches of the Commonwealth, reporting on offenses major, minor or simply imagined. It made no difference. Agents were dispatched to investigate and squash any hint of independence.
"Data obtained from Informant 5128336," said this particular brief accusation. "Terrorist Cell X-11-70, location T-00-YYD, name of commander confirmed as Krannert. Informant 5128336 deceased."
-----
Krannert was a name well known around the mining outpost on Timbok II. The Krannert Shipyards circled high above in orbit, and the bright blue Krannert logo was affixed to every one of the colony's nondescript pre-fab shelters, which were tumbled together around the mine shafts as though they'd been blown there by the planet's stiff winds. Down here, deep below the surface, miners extracted the raw materials needed to power each new starship's massive propulsion system.
Justin Tackalo Krannert -- known as Tack to his friends -- was the CEO and benevolent dictator over the settlement and, through the company he'd inherited, employer of nearly two-thirds of the dusty planet's population.
It was no surprise that he loved the place, and not just because he owned it. He'd been born on the frontier, and raised amidst the independent, hardworking spirit of the fringe worlds. He was almost as much a native of Timbok II as the green-skinned, leaf-headed locals known formally as Tendari, but more colloquially as Sprouts.
His wife was not so well suited for the outpost. He'd met the Lady Patima -- daughter of an aristocratic family, accustomed to high society -- while attending the Commonwealth University. Luckily for all concerned, her nobility manifested itself as an easy sort of grace, rather than the usual snobbery of the capital: if anyone had asked her why she'd come to a dusty, windblown rock at the edge of nowhere, she would have said something appropriately diplomatic about the beauty of untouched nature, and the good hearts of the miners and their families.
She would have left out any comment about the sand in every crevice and the ever-present shriek of shuttle engines and mining equipment. Because Tack loved it here, and she loved him like nothing else in the world.
So much so that she often ended up in his orbital office around lunch time, unpacking a makeshift picnic to share. The fact that there was no sand on the pristine shipyard floors was merely a bonus.
Tack had walked out into the hall with his assistant, as usual, finishing up the last of the morning business before making his way back into the office. This time, he crept slowly up behind the couch, reaching toward Patima's shoulder to try to surprise her with a kiss.
"If you're practicing to be a burglar, I would recommend another course. You'll never succeed in a life of crime with footsteps like that." Her voice was dry as she stopped him in his tracks without turning around. Then she tilted her head back to smile at him. "Hello, love. Are you ready for a break?"
"Absolutely," Tack laughed as he settled in beside her on the sleek white sofa, sandwich in hand. "They’re slave drivers here, every last one of them."
"So I see. And what’s the cause this time? The half-completed silver-sided transport I saw from the shuttle? The design seemed new."
"Ah, that," Geoff said, leaning back and gathering his wife into a comfortable embrace with one arm. "That's for some sort of adventure tourism company on Mandaxia IV. Triple-reinforced transparisteel, so the lunatics inside can see the particle storms up close. But no, I had nothing to do with any actual engineering today. It was all contracts, all the time."
"Work can’t be all fun and games, my love," Patima laughed. "Else someone else would be in charge of the company."
Tack snorted softly and derisively in response. "Some of them already think they are," he drawled. Then he offered his wife an apologetic smile for his suddenly sour mood. "Sorry. Igna’s just been going on about the Commonwealth contracts again. I signed them this morning."
"And are they good contracts?" Patima tucked her leg up beneath her as she nibbled on some fruit.
"Well of course not," Tack said with a bitter laugh. "They’re highway robbery. And the last thing I want to be doing is putting more weaponry into the hands of the Commonwealth Navy. They’re already abusing the power they’ve got, and if they get much bigger, no one’s going to be able to rein them in."
"That’s dangerous talk, darling," Patima cautioned, darting a quick glance around the room. Tack’s office was probably the most private place in the system, but after years in the capital, it was hard to shake the suspicion that everything was overheard. "The Commonwealth Navy is hardly OrdSec. My own family has served in it for generations. It’s an honorable, disciplined--"
"Yes," Tack said, cutting her off. "I know." He stewed silently for a moment, teeth grinding in frustration. "And anyway, it’s not like we have a choice. I’ve got a whole planet full of people to keep employed, and if we’re shut down for treason--"
"Don’t even say that!" Patima stood up, tossing a napkin back to the table with a worried frown. "And don’t think you have to explain yourself to me, of all people. It would be the height of foolishness to do anything to jeopardize your shipyards, or your mines, or your engineers, or your miners, or--"
"Or anyone," Tack reassured her, taking her hand to stop her agitated pacing. "Don’t worry. I'm smarter than I look. I know very well I'm not a hero or a warrior... I'm not even a burglar," he teased her, drawing her in for the kiss he'd missed out on earlier. "So no life of crime for me. I've got to get back to my contracts."
-------
Later that evening, after the miners all back at camp, and the machinery had finally gone quiet for the night, one of the tunnels was still busy. First one person, then another, then another, all headed toward one of the nooks and crannies hidden away in the crystal shafts.
They walked silently past a landing shuttle, where a crop of new employees was gathering up their duffels and heading for a briefing.
Igna Kamiwix, Chief Operating Officer of the Krannert Shipyards, was one of the last to arrive to the resistance meeting. The leader wasn't there yet, so he nodded at the others, silently, before finding his usual place by the wall to wait.
"Hey boss," someone finally piped up.
"Good evening," she said as she pulled off the helmet that had shielded her on her walk through the compound. "Let's get started. We have a lot to discuss."
Up above, one of the newly arrived passengers broke away from the group just long enough to read a brief transmission. It was heavily coded, of course, but even if anyone had happened to catch a glimpse, it wouldn't have meant very much. "Authorized," was all it said.
Round Element: Not the One: Tack Krannert
Bonus: ""I'm not a hero, or a warrior... I'm not even a burglar!": Tack Krannert
#46
20th Jun 2015 at 11:13 AM
Posts: 183
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Story Title: A Darthtopian Dream
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 23/2500
Round Element: Mr/Ms Exposition
Synopsis & Recap: A boy travels to another world that is strangely connected to his own. Follow him on his adventure as he tries to find his way back home.
Entry:
Bonus:
Genre: Fantasy
Word/Picture Count: 23/2500
Round Element: Mr/Ms Exposition
Synopsis & Recap: A boy travels to another world that is strangely connected to his own. Follow him on his adventure as he tries to find his way back home.
Entry:
Children of the Land, do you hear?
The Filth echoes near, and the stars grow dim.
The Eternal Throne lies empty and a broken reign remains incomplete.
The winds of the gift can no longer be held back, and its curse will send all to the abyss.
The dreams started not too long ago. I’m right here, standing in the sea surrounding Saint Michel, when all of a sudden I find myself falling into the water. Deeper and deeper I go, until I’m consumed by darkness. And at that moment I realize I’m no longer in the sea, I can’t really explain what it is but, it’s almost like Nothingness. I’m engulfed in a vast emptiness, and it weighs down on me. I try to fight it off, but its grip is so strong, and it clenches on my heart until I can no longer breathe. It’s then I see a star, pulsing faintly at first, but getting stronger and stronger with each pulse. And then at last the star illuminates a blinding light, and I see the Mont Saint Michel in all its glory. And then I wake up.
This has been my reoccurring dream, and every time I come out to the sea to swim, I think of it. What does it mean? Is it real? Or not?
Reve snapped out of his thoughts as the cool water splashed on his face. He wiped the salt water from his eyes and grinned at the dark haired boy facing him.
“Daydreamin’ again Reve?” Fenrir threw his head back and laughed, then splashed more water towards Reve.
Reve chuckled and returned Fenrir’s water attacks with a splash of his own, prompting Fenrir to return the favor. The two boys splashed and laughed under the setting sun, cheerful and exuberant, ignorant to the rest of the world around them.
Fenrir was Reve’s best friend, and his only friend. For as long as he could remember, Fenrir had always been there. Yet the two could not be any more different, Reve was carefree, cheerful, and a dreamer, whereas Fenrir was stoic, serious, and rational. But that didn’t stop them from forming a bond stronger than that of fleshly brothers. Every day they would play, and every day they would venture out into the sea.
“Race you to the Mont!” Reve said, breaking out into a swim towards the Mount.
“Hey that’s not fair! You started before me!” Fenrir followed suit.
Reve laughed out as he swam further into the sea, “If you were truly a good swimmer you’d be able to beat me!” The truth was, Reve was the better swimmer, and they both knew it.
“I’m not sure how you figured that out Reve but that logic needs some work!”
Reve began to slow down, his arms getting tired and his breathing heavier; he eventually stopped and waded in the water, staring out at the city on the Mount.”
“What’s your obsession with St. Michel anyways?” Fenrir asked out of breath, catching up to Reve.
“What do you mean?”
“You’re always staring out there, every day without fail.”
Fen was right. Reve smiled weakly at his friend and then gazed upon the Mont, as the lights slowly came on one by one in the buildings. “I dream of it, every night when I go to sleep.”
“So what, cause you dream of the Mont you think that one day you’ll live there.” Fen said in a sarcastic tone.
Reve looked down into the darkening water, expecting to be pulled down any minute, “maybe.”
“Hate to break it to you Reve, were never going to set foot on the Mont. Were just peasants, only the rich folks live there.”
“You never know Fen,” Reve looked up at the stars that were gradually becoming visible. His dreams had to mean something, otherwise why would he be having them every night. “Someday, somehow, I’ll end up there.”
“Because you dreamed it? You’re only dreaming it so much because sub-consciously you want to live on the Mont, more than anything.”
Fen was right again. And because of it Reve remained silent, only staring out at the lights. He did want that better life, living on the Mont.
“Come on, let’s head back, it’s getting dark.”
Reve cracked out a grin and nodded, “Do you have any dreams Fen?”
The swim back was once again of a cheery competitive nature, as the two boys teased and taunted one another, before reaching the shore and saying their goodbyes, promising to see each other again the next day. The walk back to his home was a long one, but Reve enjoyed it. The grass felt cool and refreshing, moist and comforting, and the night sky was clear and inspiring. As he reached his home he once again looked out at the Mont.
It feels like home. It’s weird, but it feels like where I belong. It’s almost as if it’s a far off memory, but I can only reach the tip, like a scattered dream. But it’s not real, none of it is, it’s all in my head.
Reve opened his front door and called out, “Mom! Mom you home?”
No answer. Reve sighed, another night without his mother. I guess she has to work overnight. More and more nights Reve spent alone, while his mother worked and toiled to provide ends meet for herself and Reve. He opened up the fridge, ate some provisions and then unfolded his sleeping bag. Crawling inside he hoped for better dreams, of actually walking the streets of Saint Michel with his mother. And no sooner did he close his eyes, did sleep take him.
Malcolm stared out the window at the streets below the villa he worked and lived in. He loved his job, his master, the house; he was never in want as a butler of the Hope household. But on this evening, for the first time in many years, Malcolm heart was weighed down by worry. Everything that he had come to love could be coming to an end. And it was not just his employment that worried him the most, no; it was of the little girl he had come to love as a granddaughter.
“Malcolm.”
Malcolm spun around to meet the Master of the House facing him. He quickly bowed, “Master.”
“There’s no need to call me that Malcolm, we are far past such formalities and pretenses now.”
“Yes Mas-, Michael. What is it you require of me?”
Michael’s eyes used to convey confidence, but now all they expressed was sorrow, his face gloomy and weathered, as if the weight of the world were on his shoulders and he could no longer carry the burden.
“The stars grow dim Malcolm.”
“We do not know what that means Master! It could be anything!” Malcolm pleaded his voice cracking.
“I know what it means Malcolm; I can feel it inside me. When I look out at the night sky I see them,” he paused, a somber expression on his face. “They are dying Malcolm, and so am I. Their dream is coming to an end, permanently this time.”
A tear fell down Malcolm’s face, he dreaded this moment for a very long time. “There must be something that we can do…”
Michael shook his head in dismay, “Take care of her Malcolm, she will need you, more than ever now.” His voice broke as he struggled to say what came next. “I don’t have much longer.”
Amanda was the world to both Malcolm and her father Michael, and knowing that he could do nothing to save her father, Malcolm resolved in his heart to fulfill what Michael had asked of him, to protect her, to raise her.
He entered Amanda’s room and flashed a beaming smile upon seeing her sitting on the bed with a book.
“This one,” she said.
Malcolm sat by the bed and took a look at the book, he furrowed his brow as hesitation crept over him, but he quickly waved it away. “Ah, this is one we haven’t gone through in a long time.”
“Exactly! So it’s a perfect choice for tonight,” she said getting under the covers.
“Alright,” he smiled opening the book.
“Once upon a time, in a land far far away, there lived a King and his daughter, the Princess. They both loved one another very much, so much that it made an evil sorceress jealous. For you see she wanted the affections of the King for herself, but he would not give it. So one day she kidnapped him, and held him in her evil lair. All the knights of the land tried to rescue the King, even the Prince of a foreign land who wanted to marry the Princess, but they all failed. Eventually, the Princess decided to take matters into her own hands, first praying to the stars to help her in her quest, she set out to rescue her father herself. Along the way she met up with a fairy, who agreed to help her rescue her father. After a long journey, the duo grew close to one another, coming to care for one another. Finally they arrived at the castle of the evil sorceress, and after an arduous battle with the sorceress’ forces, they at last confronted the wicked woman. But the sorceress forced the Princess to make a choice, either save her father or save the fairy she came to care for. Faced with this impossible choice, she offered her life in exchange for the ones she loved. The evil sorceress agreed, but you see, because of the Princess’ selfless act, the power of the stars acted in the Princess, destroying the evil Sorceress and the castle all around her. But in doing so the Princess died, leaving this world to join the stars, happy and fulfilled that she saved her father and the fairy.”
Upon finishing Malcolm saw that Amanda was fast asleep, he disliked how similar the Princess of the story and Amanda were, but he also knew how much she loved it. He kissed her on the forehead, turned off the lights and left the room.
After some time Amanda awoke, she could not say why but she did, and she recalled the story Malcolm read her. Father is sick, and no one can save him. But maybe I can, like the Princess. Amanda slipped out of bed and went outside.
She stared up at the twinkling stars and smiled, “Help me save my father. I beg of you, I’ll do anything,” she sobbed. “I just can’t sit idly by while he dies, I love him too much! So if you have power, help me save him! Help me…”
Reve awoke suddenly, he scrambled out of his sleeping bag and frantically looked around.
“Mom! Mom are you here?! Mom where are you?!”
And then he heard it, the call that woke him up, a cry for help.
“Mom!” Reve shouted, as he ran out the door and towards the sea.
“Help!”
Someone was crying out for help in the sea, and it sounded exactly like his mother. Without a moment’s hesitation Reve dived into the sea and swam out to the sound of the cry. As he swam further and further, the cry became more and more distinct, but a thick fog started to creep in, and his reoccurring dream invaded his thoughts again.
“Mom! I’m coming!” he yelled, pushing the dream out. He saw a figure in the distance, and he swam furiously to reach it, but then quickly stopped upon seeing the red hair.
“You-you’re not my mom! Who are you!”
“I heard a woman crying for help but then, what am I doing here?” Amanda replied.
“Where’s my mom!?” Reve screamed frantically, his eyes welling up. “She was calling for help I heard her! Where is she did you see her!?”
“This fog…”
The fog had clouded all vision now, and the two waded in front of each other as the waves gently took them. And then there was nothing.
“He’s waking up it seems, at long last,” a female voice said.
Reve stirred as he slowly came too, he opened his eyes sluggishly and took in his surroundings, “Where am I?” but nothing came out.
“Finally, it’s been days,” said a man.
“Where did you find him again Kris?”
Kris bit his lip and looked around anxiously, “I found him wandering around the streets delusional.”
“Is that how he came to be soaking wet when you brought him in?”
“It must’ve been the rains.”
“I hope you have a better story to tell than that Kris. Cause if I didn’t know any better I’d say you found this kid in the Bloody Sea, and if that’s the case you’re in a whole lot of trouble with the Ministry and the Church.”
“I know,” Kris grumbled.
“Do you? Darthtopia is fractured Kris, Arendale is literally bursting at the seams. The Church oppress everything that has to do with magic or witches or anything that defiles the Prophecy of Light and here you bring in a naked boy with a tattoo soaking wet for all my bar patrons to see! What if the witches find out? They’d bring hell down on this place Kris, there’d be war!”
“What are you, the narrator?” Kris asked annoyed.
“No, the concerned owner of this establishment who doesn’t want any trouble. He’s awake now, you can leave. There are clothes for him to wear.”
As the woman left, Reve got out of bed and looked up at Kris. “Who are you? Where am I?”
“I think I should be asking the questions here, who are you? And why the hell were you in the Bloody Sea?!”
Reve slowly shook his head, “My name is Reve Abner, and I don’t know what the Bloody Sea is, that’s not what the sea is called back home.”
“And what is back home?”
“Mont Saint Michel.”
Kris’ eyes grew wide as he stepped back in shock, “Oh boy, get changed and come with me!”
This was a very strange place to Reve, the smells were funny, and the houses and the way people dressed, his own garb was itchy and smelled of hay. They came to a small little cottage, Kris simply entered and so Reve followed suit.
“Keff! Keff where are you?! I need your help!” Kris shouted.
“What? Why are you screaming? Do you not know the hour?”
“I need your help.”
“With? Shop’s closed Kris.”
“Not alchemy,” Kris quickly responded, then motioned to Reve.
Keff snickered, “Is this your son you just found out about Kris?”
“Not funny Keff, I need you to do your thing.”
“My thing?” Keff asked curiously.
“Yes your thing, what you do. You know he doesn’t know where he’s from, I got him from the Bloody Sea and he claims he’s from the Mount.”
Keff’s grin turned upside down, “What is wrong with you Kris?! What if the kid is a spy for the Ministry, or the Church! What if he’s just using you you idiot! You know how active they are in- you know what! And what they do to- you who who!”
“I assure you he’s not a spy Keff, he has a tattoo, here let me show-“
“Get out! Please just get out! I can’t help you.”
Kris and Reve were shooed out of the shop, the door slamming shut behind them. Kris sighed, and motioned for Reve to follow him.
They arrived at a park, where they sat down on a bench.
“What’s going on? Where am I? Who are you and why are you helping me? How do I get back home?” Reve was bewildered.
Before Kris could answer any of those questions armed guards approached and surrounded them with brandished swords.
“Come with us, or die!”
The Filth echoes near, and the stars grow dim.
The Eternal Throne lies empty and a broken reign remains incomplete.
The winds of the gift can no longer be held back, and its curse will send all to the abyss.
The dreams started not too long ago. I’m right here, standing in the sea surrounding Saint Michel, when all of a sudden I find myself falling into the water. Deeper and deeper I go, until I’m consumed by darkness. And at that moment I realize I’m no longer in the sea, I can’t really explain what it is but, it’s almost like Nothingness. I’m engulfed in a vast emptiness, and it weighs down on me. I try to fight it off, but its grip is so strong, and it clenches on my heart until I can no longer breathe. It’s then I see a star, pulsing faintly at first, but getting stronger and stronger with each pulse. And then at last the star illuminates a blinding light, and I see the Mont Saint Michel in all its glory. And then I wake up.
This has been my reoccurring dream, and every time I come out to the sea to swim, I think of it. What does it mean? Is it real? Or not?
Reve snapped out of his thoughts as the cool water splashed on his face. He wiped the salt water from his eyes and grinned at the dark haired boy facing him.
“Daydreamin’ again Reve?” Fenrir threw his head back and laughed, then splashed more water towards Reve.
Reve chuckled and returned Fenrir’s water attacks with a splash of his own, prompting Fenrir to return the favor. The two boys splashed and laughed under the setting sun, cheerful and exuberant, ignorant to the rest of the world around them.
Fenrir was Reve’s best friend, and his only friend. For as long as he could remember, Fenrir had always been there. Yet the two could not be any more different, Reve was carefree, cheerful, and a dreamer, whereas Fenrir was stoic, serious, and rational. But that didn’t stop them from forming a bond stronger than that of fleshly brothers. Every day they would play, and every day they would venture out into the sea.
“Race you to the Mont!” Reve said, breaking out into a swim towards the Mount.
“Hey that’s not fair! You started before me!” Fenrir followed suit.
Reve laughed out as he swam further into the sea, “If you were truly a good swimmer you’d be able to beat me!” The truth was, Reve was the better swimmer, and they both knew it.
“I’m not sure how you figured that out Reve but that logic needs some work!”
Reve began to slow down, his arms getting tired and his breathing heavier; he eventually stopped and waded in the water, staring out at the city on the Mount.”
“What’s your obsession with St. Michel anyways?” Fenrir asked out of breath, catching up to Reve.
“What do you mean?”
“You’re always staring out there, every day without fail.”
Fen was right. Reve smiled weakly at his friend and then gazed upon the Mont, as the lights slowly came on one by one in the buildings. “I dream of it, every night when I go to sleep.”
“So what, cause you dream of the Mont you think that one day you’ll live there.” Fen said in a sarcastic tone.
Reve looked down into the darkening water, expecting to be pulled down any minute, “maybe.”
“Hate to break it to you Reve, were never going to set foot on the Mont. Were just peasants, only the rich folks live there.”
“You never know Fen,” Reve looked up at the stars that were gradually becoming visible. His dreams had to mean something, otherwise why would he be having them every night. “Someday, somehow, I’ll end up there.”
“Because you dreamed it? You’re only dreaming it so much because sub-consciously you want to live on the Mont, more than anything.”
Fen was right again. And because of it Reve remained silent, only staring out at the lights. He did want that better life, living on the Mont.
“Come on, let’s head back, it’s getting dark.”
Reve cracked out a grin and nodded, “Do you have any dreams Fen?”
The swim back was once again of a cheery competitive nature, as the two boys teased and taunted one another, before reaching the shore and saying their goodbyes, promising to see each other again the next day. The walk back to his home was a long one, but Reve enjoyed it. The grass felt cool and refreshing, moist and comforting, and the night sky was clear and inspiring. As he reached his home he once again looked out at the Mont.
It feels like home. It’s weird, but it feels like where I belong. It’s almost as if it’s a far off memory, but I can only reach the tip, like a scattered dream. But it’s not real, none of it is, it’s all in my head.
Reve opened his front door and called out, “Mom! Mom you home?”
No answer. Reve sighed, another night without his mother. I guess she has to work overnight. More and more nights Reve spent alone, while his mother worked and toiled to provide ends meet for herself and Reve. He opened up the fridge, ate some provisions and then unfolded his sleeping bag. Crawling inside he hoped for better dreams, of actually walking the streets of Saint Michel with his mother. And no sooner did he close his eyes, did sleep take him.
Malcolm stared out the window at the streets below the villa he worked and lived in. He loved his job, his master, the house; he was never in want as a butler of the Hope household. But on this evening, for the first time in many years, Malcolm heart was weighed down by worry. Everything that he had come to love could be coming to an end. And it was not just his employment that worried him the most, no; it was of the little girl he had come to love as a granddaughter.
“Malcolm.”
Malcolm spun around to meet the Master of the House facing him. He quickly bowed, “Master.”
“There’s no need to call me that Malcolm, we are far past such formalities and pretenses now.”
“Yes Mas-, Michael. What is it you require of me?”
Michael’s eyes used to convey confidence, but now all they expressed was sorrow, his face gloomy and weathered, as if the weight of the world were on his shoulders and he could no longer carry the burden.
“The stars grow dim Malcolm.”
“We do not know what that means Master! It could be anything!” Malcolm pleaded his voice cracking.
“I know what it means Malcolm; I can feel it inside me. When I look out at the night sky I see them,” he paused, a somber expression on his face. “They are dying Malcolm, and so am I. Their dream is coming to an end, permanently this time.”
A tear fell down Malcolm’s face, he dreaded this moment for a very long time. “There must be something that we can do…”
Michael shook his head in dismay, “Take care of her Malcolm, she will need you, more than ever now.” His voice broke as he struggled to say what came next. “I don’t have much longer.”
Amanda was the world to both Malcolm and her father Michael, and knowing that he could do nothing to save her father, Malcolm resolved in his heart to fulfill what Michael had asked of him, to protect her, to raise her.
He entered Amanda’s room and flashed a beaming smile upon seeing her sitting on the bed with a book.
“This one,” she said.
Malcolm sat by the bed and took a look at the book, he furrowed his brow as hesitation crept over him, but he quickly waved it away. “Ah, this is one we haven’t gone through in a long time.”
“Exactly! So it’s a perfect choice for tonight,” she said getting under the covers.
“Alright,” he smiled opening the book.
“Once upon a time, in a land far far away, there lived a King and his daughter, the Princess. They both loved one another very much, so much that it made an evil sorceress jealous. For you see she wanted the affections of the King for herself, but he would not give it. So one day she kidnapped him, and held him in her evil lair. All the knights of the land tried to rescue the King, even the Prince of a foreign land who wanted to marry the Princess, but they all failed. Eventually, the Princess decided to take matters into her own hands, first praying to the stars to help her in her quest, she set out to rescue her father herself. Along the way she met up with a fairy, who agreed to help her rescue her father. After a long journey, the duo grew close to one another, coming to care for one another. Finally they arrived at the castle of the evil sorceress, and after an arduous battle with the sorceress’ forces, they at last confronted the wicked woman. But the sorceress forced the Princess to make a choice, either save her father or save the fairy she came to care for. Faced with this impossible choice, she offered her life in exchange for the ones she loved. The evil sorceress agreed, but you see, because of the Princess’ selfless act, the power of the stars acted in the Princess, destroying the evil Sorceress and the castle all around her. But in doing so the Princess died, leaving this world to join the stars, happy and fulfilled that she saved her father and the fairy.”
Upon finishing Malcolm saw that Amanda was fast asleep, he disliked how similar the Princess of the story and Amanda were, but he also knew how much she loved it. He kissed her on the forehead, turned off the lights and left the room.
After some time Amanda awoke, she could not say why but she did, and she recalled the story Malcolm read her. Father is sick, and no one can save him. But maybe I can, like the Princess. Amanda slipped out of bed and went outside.
She stared up at the twinkling stars and smiled, “Help me save my father. I beg of you, I’ll do anything,” she sobbed. “I just can’t sit idly by while he dies, I love him too much! So if you have power, help me save him! Help me…”
Reve awoke suddenly, he scrambled out of his sleeping bag and frantically looked around.
“Mom! Mom are you here?! Mom where are you?!”
And then he heard it, the call that woke him up, a cry for help.
“Mom!” Reve shouted, as he ran out the door and towards the sea.
“Help!”
Someone was crying out for help in the sea, and it sounded exactly like his mother. Without a moment’s hesitation Reve dived into the sea and swam out to the sound of the cry. As he swam further and further, the cry became more and more distinct, but a thick fog started to creep in, and his reoccurring dream invaded his thoughts again.
“Mom! I’m coming!” he yelled, pushing the dream out. He saw a figure in the distance, and he swam furiously to reach it, but then quickly stopped upon seeing the red hair.
“You-you’re not my mom! Who are you!”
“I heard a woman crying for help but then, what am I doing here?” Amanda replied.
“Where’s my mom!?” Reve screamed frantically, his eyes welling up. “She was calling for help I heard her! Where is she did you see her!?”
“This fog…”
The fog had clouded all vision now, and the two waded in front of each other as the waves gently took them. And then there was nothing.
“He’s waking up it seems, at long last,” a female voice said.
Reve stirred as he slowly came too, he opened his eyes sluggishly and took in his surroundings, “Where am I?” but nothing came out.
“Finally, it’s been days,” said a man.
“Where did you find him again Kris?”
Kris bit his lip and looked around anxiously, “I found him wandering around the streets delusional.”
“Is that how he came to be soaking wet when you brought him in?”
“It must’ve been the rains.”
“I hope you have a better story to tell than that Kris. Cause if I didn’t know any better I’d say you found this kid in the Bloody Sea, and if that’s the case you’re in a whole lot of trouble with the Ministry and the Church.”
“I know,” Kris grumbled.
“Do you? Darthtopia is fractured Kris, Arendale is literally bursting at the seams. The Church oppress everything that has to do with magic or witches or anything that defiles the Prophecy of Light and here you bring in a naked boy with a tattoo soaking wet for all my bar patrons to see! What if the witches find out? They’d bring hell down on this place Kris, there’d be war!”
“What are you, the narrator?” Kris asked annoyed.
“No, the concerned owner of this establishment who doesn’t want any trouble. He’s awake now, you can leave. There are clothes for him to wear.”
As the woman left, Reve got out of bed and looked up at Kris. “Who are you? Where am I?”
“I think I should be asking the questions here, who are you? And why the hell were you in the Bloody Sea?!”
Reve slowly shook his head, “My name is Reve Abner, and I don’t know what the Bloody Sea is, that’s not what the sea is called back home.”
“And what is back home?”
“Mont Saint Michel.”
Kris’ eyes grew wide as he stepped back in shock, “Oh boy, get changed and come with me!”
This was a very strange place to Reve, the smells were funny, and the houses and the way people dressed, his own garb was itchy and smelled of hay. They came to a small little cottage, Kris simply entered and so Reve followed suit.
“Keff! Keff where are you?! I need your help!” Kris shouted.
“What? Why are you screaming? Do you not know the hour?”
“I need your help.”
“With? Shop’s closed Kris.”
“Not alchemy,” Kris quickly responded, then motioned to Reve.
Keff snickered, “Is this your son you just found out about Kris?”
“Not funny Keff, I need you to do your thing.”
“My thing?” Keff asked curiously.
“Yes your thing, what you do. You know he doesn’t know where he’s from, I got him from the Bloody Sea and he claims he’s from the Mount.”
Keff’s grin turned upside down, “What is wrong with you Kris?! What if the kid is a spy for the Ministry, or the Church! What if he’s just using you you idiot! You know how active they are in- you know what! And what they do to- you who who!”
“I assure you he’s not a spy Keff, he has a tattoo, here let me show-“
“Get out! Please just get out! I can’t help you.”
Kris and Reve were shooed out of the shop, the door slamming shut behind them. Kris sighed, and motioned for Reve to follow him.
They arrived at a park, where they sat down on a bench.
“What’s going on? Where am I? Who are you and why are you helping me? How do I get back home?” Reve was bewildered.
Before Kris could answer any of those questions armed guards approached and surrounded them with brandished swords.
“Come with us, or die!”
Bonus:
"Who are you, the narrator?" spoken by Kris in reference to the female innkeeper
Author's Note: Sorry the ending is really rushed, and I'm a bit late I hope I can still be entered. And the pics are really big again so sorry I will edit them
Author's Note: Sorry the ending is really rushed, and I'm a bit late I hope I can still be entered. And the pics are really big again so sorry I will edit them
#47
20th Jun 2015 at 11:21 AM
Posts: 293
Round 1 CLOSED!
Alright! Time is up. Pencils down. Round 1 is officially closed! Thank you to Bre814, Ghost sdoj, Letcupcake, lil bag2, and hungryhippo for their works of fantasy. And thanks to Blatant07, Freelala, elphaba2, and sionelle, all representing science fiction. May the best genre win and may the odds be ever in your favor! Judges, take it away...Memory Games A Sims 3 Thriller Mystery
#48
20th Jun 2015 at 1:23 PM
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Wow, I'm excited to see all these last minute entries. Definitely going to have our work cut out for us when judging.
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"On the internet, you can be anything you want. It's strange that so many people choose to be stupid."
"On the internet, you can be anything you want. It's strange that so many people choose to be stupid."
#49
20th Jun 2015 at 4:02 PM
Posts: 166
I didn't put who said the bonus thing Dx
Will that be a problem?! ;-;
Will that be a problem?! ;-;
#50
20th Jun 2015 at 7:30 PM
Last edited by Qnshr5 : 20th Jun 2015 at 8:17 PM.
Posts: 293
I completely forgot to post Round 2! So sorry about that. After I closed the contest, I shut down my laptop and went to bed. It is now up and I will have the timer set momentarily.
@Letcupcake: You don't have to put who said the quote. As long as it's underlined in the story and then written out under bonus, judges will be able to find it.
EDIT: Timer is set for Friday 10th of July at 11:59 AoE, Baker Island time. I gave you all two extra hours since I was late and the site will be down when the scores are supposed to come out. It shouldn't effect the time needed for your entry too much, but there's some extra time anyway.
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Memory Games A Sims 3 Thriller Mystery
@Letcupcake: You don't have to put who said the quote. As long as it's underlined in the story and then written out under bonus, judges will be able to find it.
EDIT: Timer is set for Friday 10th of July at 11:59 AoE, Baker Island time. I gave you all two extra hours since I was late and the site will be down when the scores are supposed to come out. It shouldn't effect the time needed for your entry too much, but there's some extra time anyway.
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Memory Games A Sims 3 Thriller Mystery
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