Okay. First of all, never record with sound recording enabled. It severely slows down your footage and makes all the motion very choppy. Secondly, do not show plumbbobs and speech bubbles. If you have Nightlife, use the cheats "plumbbobtoggle off" and "showHeadlines false". There is a hacked object somewhere on MTS2 that can remove sleeping ZZZs for you. Never show the sky inside a house, use the Ceiling Tiles which are also available on MTS2. And ALWAYS record with walls up. Things should look as realistic as possible, and real houses do not have walls cutaway.
I noticed alot of surrealism and symbolism throughout the movie, so I don't know what was intended, but know that it cannot rain on a sunny day or a clear night. I don't know if there's any way to put clouds in the sky, but it could not be raining in that kind of weather. Also it couldn't be raining inside, clearly.
This would have been a good video if not for those mistakes. We all
make mistakes, but that's no excuse. Be more careful with the next one and it might be good.