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Lab Assistant
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#1 Old 30th Oct 2010 at 7:47 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:28 AM. Reason: Title Change
Default Melissa - DISCONTINUED
All but the first page of each chapter is in spoilers, to make it easier for it to load. Open the spoiler to read the rest of the chapter.


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Lab Assistant
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#2 Old 31st Oct 2010 at 8:49 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:29 AM.
Default Chapter 2 - October 1949


Lab Assistant
#3 Old 31st Oct 2010 at 9:03 PM
That was great! Very engaging, can't wait to see what happens!!
Field Researcher
#4 Old 31st Oct 2010 at 9:11 PM
Love the format!!!!! Excellent start, and I can't wait for the next 70 (sim) years to go by! Thanks.
Lab Assistant
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#5 Old 31st Oct 2010 at 9:32 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:29 AM.
Default Chapter 3 - January 1950


Lab Assistant
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#6 Old 31st Oct 2010 at 10:53 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:30 AM.
Default Chapter 4 - March 1950


Field Researcher
#7 Old 2nd Nov 2010 at 5:31 PM
Great updates! Wish she didn't have to do what she clearly doesn't want to do to support her baby. It will be interesting to see if and how she manages...maybe "true love" will come to her? Already looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the updates!
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#8 Old 2nd Nov 2010 at 6:16 PM
Thank you for the comments. I started this story primarily for my own enjoyment, but it's wonderful that I'm able to share it with others and have it be enjoyed.
Inventor
#9 Old 2nd Nov 2010 at 7:17 PM
This is awesome! So well laid out, and a classic story line. ^^
Field Researcher
#10 Old 3rd Nov 2010 at 1:04 AM
I am loving this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens!!!
Lab Assistant
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#11 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 12:34 AM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:30 AM.
Default Chapter 5 - August 1950

Lab Assistant
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#12 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 12:37 AM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:31 AM. Reason: add a screenshot
Default Chapter 6 - December 1951
This chapter's a bit short, but it would have been awkward to make it longer.


Lab Assistant
#13 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 1:28 AM
this is a really good classic storyline, i can;t wait to see what is going to happen next!

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[{call me maddie}]
Lab Assistant
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#14 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 1:53 AM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:32 AM.
Default Chapter 7 - February 1952


Lab Assistant
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#15 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 2:29 AM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:32 AM.
Default Chapter 8 - April 1952


Field Researcher
#16 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 4:05 AM
Very nice. Can't wait to see where you take us! Thanks for the updates.
Lab Assistant
#17 Old 5th Nov 2010 at 11:50 PM
Oui! Fantastic updates! Please keep them coming. Loving the story.
Lab Assistant
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#18 Old 7th Nov 2010 at 10:04 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:33 AM.
Default Chapter 9 - February 1953
Melissa is about to grow into a child, so this will be the last "short" chapter.



Field Researcher
#19 Old 19th Nov 2010 at 2:14 PM
Great updates! Can't wait for more!
Lab Assistant
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#20 Old 29th Nov 2010 at 10:23 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:33 AM.
Default Chapter 10 - May 1955
Sorry about the wait. The semester is drawing to a close, and I've been working hard to maintain my 4.0. Updates to this story should come more frequently during winter break. Also, sorry about the missing picture in Chapter 9. Apparently one frame was a bit too racy for imageshack's "standards".


Lab Assistant
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#21 Old 7th Dec 2010 at 7:29 PM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:33 AM.
Default Chapter 11 - June 1960 - Scene I
Thankfully, Melissa has turned out to be a beautiful young girl. So please enjoy this chapter - the first featuring Melissa as a child.


Alchemist
#22 Old 7th Dec 2010 at 8:07 PM
This story's so cool! Best graphic story I've ever read. Go on with it, it's way too cool!

Evil doesn't worry about not being good. - The Warden, Dragon Age Origins
Test Subject
#23 Old 7th Dec 2010 at 10:10 PM
cant wait for more!!
Field Researcher
#24 Old 9th Dec 2010 at 6:15 PM
Nice. Hope Melissa gets her fairy-tale come true.
Field Researcher
#25 Old 9th Dec 2010 at 10:13 PM
I can't wait to see if it's a boy or girl!
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