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Alchemist
#51 Old 25th Jan 2011 at 7:59 AM
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Originally Posted by chloebee102
WOOT! Ahahahaha silly children...I sense problem ahead of that deeply forged road...I've been a secret ninja stalker! Thumbs up for you!


Huh?

Evil doesn't worry about not being good. - The Warden, Dragon Age Origins
Inventor
#52 Old 25th Jan 2011 at 10:04 PM
I don't like the way he said "I've got to get home"...
There's something about that boy that I don't trust!! XD!

Brilliant updates, as always!
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#53 Old 25th Jan 2011 at 10:11 PM
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Originally Posted by TheCreeper
Huh?


If I'm not mistaken, he's speculating that Melissa will get pregnant, since "you can go all the way" in this context was meant as "you don't have to pull out".

Of course, I can't confirm or deny such speculation :p
Field Researcher
#54 Old 25th Jan 2011 at 11:02 PM
Getting caught up with the story! Excellent, as always. Sorry to see her so hmm..."carefree" shall we say? I think Nathan would have been a better choice for her...but poor guy...he doesn't really know what he's up against, does he? Thanks for updating!
Lab Assistant
#55 Old 25th Jan 2011 at 11:27 PM
Oooo! Mischief! :D
Test Subject
#56 Old 26th Jan 2011 at 12:23 AM
Psssst I'm a girl btw...Also I can't wait for another chapter...This and Roe are keeping me alive on here...

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SiMs FoReVeR
<3 <3 <3
Lab Assistant
#57 Old 26th Jan 2011 at 1:40 AM
Just started reading this story - I'm loving it :D

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Lab Assistant
#58 Old 26th Jan 2011 at 2:13 AM
One of the best stories I've read I love your attention to the sets and clothes, but the story is addictive! Can't wait for more

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Field Researcher
#59 Old 27th Jan 2011 at 12:48 AM
Good grief, this is oddly intense. Usually Sim-illustrated stories don't hold my attention as such I can't wait to find out what happens next, especially with poor, shy Nathan.
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#60 Old 27th Jan 2011 at 1:47 AM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:40 AM.
Default Chapter 17 - September, 1965 - Scene I

Lab Assistant
#61 Old 28th Jan 2011 at 12:32 AM
I loved it Now I'm wondering if he'll find out about his daughter I hope so.

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Test Subject
#62 Old 28th Jan 2011 at 11:39 PM
I really, really, really love your story ! You're a great storyteller! I can feel the atmosphere, really fantastic!
Test Subject
#63 Old 29th Jan 2011 at 1:29 AM
Nice approach...You didnt do the overdone pregnant teenager junk! I knew it right from when I saw the red hair!

Theres no half-singing in the shower, your either a rock star or an opera diva.

Theres no half-trying in Sims, your either a Newbie or a experinced player


SiMs FoReVeR
<3 <3 <3
Theorist
#64 Old 30th Jan 2011 at 8:11 PM
Who's the daddy?! Charles is in for a shock!

"Your life was a liner I voyaged in."
Alchemist
#65 Old 30th Jan 2011 at 8:42 PM
@the last pic - dunn dunn DUNN!

Evil doesn't worry about not being good. - The Warden, Dragon Age Origins
Test Subject
#66 Old 31st Jan 2011 at 1:47 AM
This is my second post here--- but I just wanted to let you know that this story is very, very good. Can't wait for the next installment!
Lab Assistant
#67 Old 31st Jan 2011 at 11:08 PM
I'm only echoing everyone else's sentiment. LOVE the story, great action, great movement, great suspense -- especially with that last one. Oh what will happen next?! It's killin me! D:
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#68 Old 17th Feb 2011 at 3:42 AM Last edited by surfer85 : 11th May 2014 at 1:43 AM.
Default Chapter 17 - September, 1965 - Scene II
Sorry about the delay with this one.


Inventor
#69 Old 17th Feb 2011 at 6:40 PM
YAY new scene!!

I hope he's doesn't run off if he finds out Melissa is his!

Edit: P.S. awesome update, as always!
Lab Assistant
#70 Old 18th Feb 2011 at 5:25 AM
Great update I sense trouble brewing in a big way!

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Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#71 Old 22nd Feb 2011 at 12:17 AM
Default Chapter 17 - September, 1965 - Scene III
















Inventor
#72 Old 22nd Feb 2011 at 11:03 AM
Oh no.. I knew it!!
What a d*ck. She should have either waited, or told him before she slept with him - Oh well, too late now!
Theorist
#73 Old 22nd Feb 2011 at 11:49 PM
^Agreed! Even if Charles did think she was trying to get money out of him, he did get her pregnant in the first place, so it would be nice for him to contribute something towards his daughter. And doesn't he want a relationship with Melissa? I hope he gets his comeuppance at some point!

"Your life was a liner I voyaged in."
Forum Resident
#74 Old 23rd Feb 2011 at 9:05 PM
Typical males :P

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Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#75 Old 23rd Feb 2011 at 9:18 PM
Thanks for the comments, everyone. And for being patient regarding updates to the story.

So, no one sympathizes with Charles?
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